Bray Minstrel

[Bray Minstrel]

Bray Minstrel Basic Information Gender: Male Race: Ghost (Human) Birthday & Age : Twenty; Season of Fall, Day 49, 492 AV Languages Language 1: Common (Fluent) Language 2: Vani (Basic) Physical Description Character Concept Character History Bray was born and raised in the port city of Zeltiva, living a modest life with his parents and two younger brothers. From the age of seven, his father often brought Bray aboard many fishing vessels, teaching his son the basics of the fisherman's trade. As he grew older, an adventurous spirit began to form within him, craving to see more than just the gentle waves of the bay. Training (Skills, Arcana, Gnosis, Lore) Skill EXP Total Proficiency Fishing 10 SP 10 exp Novice Sailing 20 SP 20 exp Novice Cartography 30 SP 30 exp Competent Materialization 10 RP 10 exp Novice Lores: Lore of Veltiva Street Layout Lore of Sea Life of Mathew's Bay Equipment and Possessions 1 Backpack (that contains:) - 600 GM - Maps of Talderan Northern Coastline (Heirloom) Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 GM 100 GM Home Cash-In +500 GM 600 GM Thread List

[Siren]

Hey there!

I'm Siren, the local and completely harmless Character Sheet Liaison. In order to help you get the most out of your experience on Mizahar, I have taken a look at at your Character Sheet to make sure that everything is up to par!

Unfortunately, there are a few changes that have to be made before we can move forward! Please see the tabs below for details on these issues. Once the issues have been addressed, feel free to send me a private message, let me know you've fixed what I've pointed out and I will gladly remove the intervention!

 

Skills

Everything looks great except for the fact that you have 70 skill points listed! You're allotted 50 starting package points and 10 racial bonus points Just a minor miscalculation!

 

Housing

I noticed that you turned in your housing for the 500 GM, however, you still need to list where your PC is staying, or list a housing section and fill that in with "Ghosts don't need houses!" hehe. We try to keep everything structured and similar

Siren's Song:

A great CS and a great PC! Keep up the awesome work!

Write on!
-Siren