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Reprieve

Postby Trente on February 28th, 2013, 8:31 pm

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Winter 512, 46th

Trente lay pain stricken as the small boat bobbed steadily along the smooth morning water. Matthew's bay appeared a lifeless grey, covered by a gentle veil of white fog shifting rapidly by Zulrav's will. The crew of three appreciated this, it swept the foul stench of infection off board before it could inundate their senses as it likely would the bulk of their journey. The kelvic and his superior senses were especially saved misery by the breeze, though he still perched at the small craft's edge with vigilance, black canine nose stretched outward to the wind.

Perhaps he struck the pose to seem proud, or perhaps just to reach his nostrils as far from Trente's decaying flesh as he could. Despite their past the feral wolf had shown unprecedented sympathy toward Trente since he had been stricken ill, and his son nearly murdered. This sympathy, of course, came sparingly and in waves. His general attitude of persistent unsophisticated dislike had maintained throughout the event quite in tact despite what Trente may or may not have done to save his child. Still, neither Trente nor Matilis had shared the entire story. Not truthfully in any case.

Matilis on the other hand had been far less forgiving. It seemed ironic to Trente that the same event that sparked the closest sensation to a fatherly love for the boy in him had equally as well instilled a sense of disdain from the child. Trente couldn't say that he particularly regretted his actions in the dispute, he had, after all, done the best he could. Still, children were by nature entitled and self absorbed, unaware that a larger world closed upon them on all sides. Trente could forgive the child his moods as long as Matilis could maintain his duties. Perhaps by the time he learned some manners Trente would find the occasion to develop a working hypothesis on the god's interest in him.

"Dig harder on the right side, you are going to steer us straight into the rocks if you ignore the wind. Oaring is as much about Zulrav as it is Laviku." Trente despised how weak his voice sounded, despised the sensation of cold sweat and itching throbbing pain of infection. He couldn't remember how many times he was told to stay in the hospice, remain with the healers. He wasn't listening. He knew what others did not, that they could only suspect. A god wished a blight upon the city, and what Vayt wished he received, without exception. Trente believed entirely in avoiding any situation that allowed his own body to become a war ground between Vayt and Rak'keli. Divine battles concerned him little, and if Zeltiva was a battleground then he would leave by any means necessary.

It wasn't far enough yet, he could tell, the water still had that unnatural dullness and the seaweed that rose to the surface appeared an unhealthy yellow, and clumped revoltingly with diseased and uneaten sea life.

He could see the fatigue on the child, he was weak as well, had a horrible cough which rung periodically out over the even waves, for miles most likely. He was unaccustomed to toil, and his arms shook with strained pain through each stroke of the oars as he fed the craft forward through the thick water. Still, Trente had to admit each stroke fell true, not too deep, not too shallow. If only he could put more force into them.

"Harder on the right side." Trente said again giving a kick to the hard wooden seat his son sat upon. The jolt invigorated the child, at least for a minute, and won a baleful look from the wolf perched upon the bow.

More than that Trente concerned himself with the shot of pain which rose then fell within his side. He had been advised to keep the wound from the moist morning air, and so he just lay his hand upon the soiled bandage with an audible wince. It confused him, that state of the body, how Rak'keli could close a wound to but a miniscule cut just to have it open again with undesirable pustules and part aggravated pink then yellowed skin. He felt like the seaweed, yellowed and spoiled. It hurt and he knew his life was in danger. He had no idea how far Vayt's grasp would hold to him, and so he let not the thought of hope or finality into his mind. Forward was all that mattered, forward.

To Trente this wound was like combat, though admittedly a slow and grueling one. In combat death is often dealt in moments. In one you live in the next you die. In this battle for his life, this chase as it were, the moments stretched on in the floor of that boat for what seemed like eternity. What fool trick had Tanroa played upon him to draw out a battle so long? He asked not "why," he never asked "why." To Trente "why" was the bane of man, the mind's folly, and such questions could destroy the psyche from the inside out. The only words more dangerous than "why" were perhaps the answers to such questions.

Forward, forward. Through the sweeping fog, across the death filled water, bobbing in his tiny craft afloat with a child and a man little better than an animal. Oh how grim his life had become.
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Postby Trente on May 5th, 2013, 6:42 am

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Trente studied the clean smooth marks of the bay left upon the beach and surrounding cliff sides, for they would tell of the water's shape in high and low tide, but it was Matilis who was first to begin setting the tent upon the proper perch. His mark allowed him some understandings of the world, understandings which caused wonder in Trente, wonder if it were not an injustice to the boy to teach him of the ocean before he had proper time to learn on his own. It was, however, the way of the Svefra, and none could challenge the truth of their superiority on the water, so Trente buried his concern in stride with his jealousy and asked the wolf to find wood for the fire before the cool evening air fell upon them.

The shallow cove would protect them from the bitter winter gusts, but nothing would shield them from the ambient cold left by Zulrav's unforgiving bone snapper. It seemed a miracle the water itself did not freeze.

It took several hours for the exhausted child to complete constructing the Tente, a rather simple chore, and his father had to roust him with a sharp command to prevent him from curling up within it and falling to slumber before the fire was made.

Trente despised his own uselessness, so much that perhaps he was more harsh than he needed to be with his own flesh and blood. The boy worked hard, but for his age he seemed so incompetent. A Svefra man would be more than capable of surviving a night by the water by Matilis' age. Though, admittedly, Trente could not truthfully say he knew the number of winters Matilis had weathered. He did not even know if he aged with the grace of himself and his mother or not. Clearly he did not, or he would be but just a babe still.

"We should not be in the open like this." Came the voice of the blackened wolf turned to untanned pink skin and hairless flesh, emerging with more wood from the steep trail leading to above. "The moon is just a sliver tonight and the darkness may pull us into the waters."

Trente frowned at the foreboding portent, no doubt another superstition the animal had learned upon the lifeless rock of Sahova. Trente was usually the last to disregard folk lore fears, for he had seen enough of them swallow men alive that he believed whole heartedly that each lay roots in fact, but Sahova was in fact a long way from Matthew's Bay, a whole world it seemed, and surely the change of the darkness itself pulling them into the icey bay paled in comparison to the daunting task of climbing the cliff face while injured. No, they would remain for the night.

"Then we will keep the fire burning all night, if darkness is what you fear." The wolf said nothing, but it's eyes spoke a foreboding truth, which Trente would have been wiser to obey.

The fire was stoked larger, and the boy delivered to his bed of loose blankets within the small tent pitched alongside the warmth of the flames, and watchful eyes of his feral protector.

The father neglected to enter the tent, remaining close to the flames, slipping between agonizing wakefulness and uneasy unconsciousness, hardly resembling sleep. The pain had grown, and Trente hoped the warmth of the daylight would ease it, that perhaps the pain was only his body revolting against the illness threatening to claim him.

"Mutt," the feral wolf addressed his mix blooded companion, winning only a distant groan and a squint as the camp filled with unfiltered and equally unnatural light. When Trente's eyes focused through the near pitch blackness, lit only be the meager remains of a dwindling fire he saw only dark fur, and gleaming eyes of a wild thing. The kelvic turned on itself and made into the shadows, the sound of it's surefooted traveling up the narrow trail were only barely audible over the howls of the bone snapper along the rim of the freezing alcove.

Trente's eyes fell shut a moment later, relinquishing the wolf's words to fatigue, till his pain peaked suddenly, forcing his eyes agape once more. The Syliran born rogue shook his head against the discomfort, eyes widening against it's suddenness and the blackness about him which seemed to have dim considerably in the moment Trente had closed his eyes, a moment which must have been many. In the darkness Trente could almost swear to make out those foreboding eyes of his companion, gleaming like the last of the coals glowing weakly against the darkness. They spoke silently of danger, and despite Trente's mind his hand moved to meet it.

The coolness of the hilt felt strange in his sweaty palms as he struggle to unsheathe the weapon. He remembered the moment the blade came loose as he questioned himself. "Why?" He asked, but remembering his philosophy he ignored the question, ignored the thought of hallucination. He focused into the darkness, upon the eyes which seemed to materialize more and more vividly before him.

Then it came, almost swept away by the snapper above a sheer yelp of a feral beast from the cliff's edge above. The spectral eyes before him grew dark and red, and the silhouette of the scaled face came into sight. It's frighteningly gigantic mouth widened, and with jagged dagger like teeth it's jaws flew forward through the darkness. Trente hesitated not, his blade flung forward, without the strength of a standing thrust, but with the trust of his trained hand. His mouth let out a wince of pain as he commanded his legs to move with celerity upward toward his body for safety, despite the streaks of pain to ravage his wounded body.

The blade wavered as it met with scale, then flesh, then fragile bone. The unknown predator's own ferocity fueled the force to impale itself upon the well sharpened rapier.

The animal pulled back and Trente gripped to the hilt, refusing to let it be yanked from his fist. The curse of the rapier then reared it's head as did the beast, once more. Rapiers have grace, and speed, but often times even once a killing blow has been struck the victim needs several minutes to realize they have lost, how pitiable and horrify it is to witness a monster fighting for a life it has already lost.

The mouth, parted, flung forth again, but not before Trente's second hand found the remains of the hot coal, feeding them downward toward the creature from the deeps like a strong backward stroke through water away from the beast. Had the fight occurred in water Trente would have died, and the creature would have fed, but instead the screeches of the retreating creature could be heard for miles over the bay, swept along with the bone snapper, as it coughed and choked out the searing hot cinders from the back of it's hungry throat. It would burn, then blister, be unable to feed, then die.

Trente gave another thrust of his sword as the monster slithered more than ran back to it's haven of water, more in a hopes to end it's misery than to harm it further. He missed, and so nature would run it's course without him. Trente felt not guilt as his plunged his burning glove into the cold sand below him.

Just as his heart began to steady once more the sound of growling above gave way to a series of noises resembling rustling and displaced rock, which approached at a frightening rate. Something heavy and fleshy landed with a deep sound at the base of the trail, only a stride or two from the doused fire place.

So concealing was the Leth in his darkened state that Trente could scarcely see the blade in his own hand, so he let his instincts play in absence of his senses. He bellowed loudly, in an attempt to intimidate the unseeable threat, holding his blade out evenly before him, hoping to fend of any direct assaults, but no more combat would be needed, not that night.

They had proven to the darkness that they would not be drug into the wilds where it called it's home. The kelvic had retreated with little more damage than a bruised chest and bruised ego, and Trente had learned a valuable lesson about the darkness when Leth's watchful eye peered away from their world.

The wolf man concerned himself immediately with checking upon his charge, Matilis, but Trente concerned himself much more with plans for the next night as he restoked the fire with grunts against searing pain. He was unwilling to lose his life to the blight, the darkness, or sympathies for his child.
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Postby Paragon on June 5th, 2013, 10:11 am

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