[Note by Siren] Arila - Character Sheet

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Arila - Character Sheet

Postby Arila Inarta on April 21st, 2013, 9:39 pm

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Arila, of Wind Reach


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Race: Inarta
Gender: Female
Age: 23
Birthday: the Summer season, 484(?) AV
Birthplace: Wind Reach

Appearance: What do you look like?

Arila, being an Inarta of course has red hair as is usual with

her race, her's being a deep burgundy color. Along with having

a pale complexion which it has a warm pinkish hue to it, she

also has jade green eyes. which when compared with her

hair color creates a a rather striking appearance. Arila stands at

5'2 and is 110 pounds, also like her race she happens to be

physically fit, enough that she has a good tone to her. She also

happens to have a few piercings on her, three in her ears

instead of just two (two of the usual kind and one at the upper

fold of her right ear) as well as a navel piercing. Each each has

a colorful glass bead of some sort in it with the exception of the

one on her right upper ear which happens to be metal and

wraps around that part of her ear.

Character Concept

The young Arila has always been one with a fiery personality,

being one who very well lives up to being an Inarta. She always

speaks her mind and is quite independent, that added with the

fact that she is a very curious and passionate person makes her

one who always seeks adventure wherever she can. Although

she is a hot tempered person she also enjoys a good laugh and

happens to be well mannered in most situations. While she

does happen to be one who likes to be free and travel about,

that doesn't keep her from keeping up with her glasswork and

ensuring she does her part to contribute wherever she happens

to be staying at the time.

Character History

Although Arila didn't have a strong family bond that others

might have had as a child, she did not have too bad a

childhood. From a young age she seemed to have a great ability

when it came to glasswork and so as she grew she continued to

hone these abilities. Arila was told back when she was a child

that she should never live a stagnant life, but should go through

life living each moment to the fullest. It is because of this that

the young woman has always been a rather free spirited

person, along with the fact that she is an Inarta. She chose to

leave her birthpalce of Wind Reach to ensure she lived life as

best she could and since then has never been one to stay in one

place for long. Instead Arila chooses to travel from one place to

another finding one adventure after another as she went, it was

quite rare if she didn't find something exciting in her travels.

This is how she arrived at the city of Syliras looking to contiue

her adventure as best she could.

Language

Fluent Language: Nari
Basic Language: Common


Skills

Skill EXP Total 50 points
Glassworking 20 points
Talon swords (weaponary) 15 points
Wilderness Survival 10 points
Racial bonus: +10 Falconry



Lores

Lore of History of Wind Eagles
Lore of History of Wind Reach

Possessions

As is custom for an Inarta, Arila has a bird that goes around

with her wherever she goes. This bird happens to be a felcon.

1 Set of Clothing
-Simple Vinati
-Simple Bryda
-Simple Sontav
-Simple Undergarments
-leather ankle boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-1 Set of Toiletries (comb, brush, razor, soap)
-Food for a week or 1 bottle of embalming fluid (for Nuits)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel

Heirloom: - Max. 50gm worth)

Arila has a mixture of a glass (with an assortament of colors)

and feather necklace that she received when she was young

and ahs since worn everyday. While Inarta are not the type to

have strong family bonds and Arila's family was no different,

they still felt she should have something that would remind her

of them and so this is how she obtained her necklace.

Housing

Location: Where in Mizahar are you living?

House: Being one who travels from one place to another

often, Arila has no need for the usual apartment/room, but

instead chooses to live in a more temporary place. So she is

currently staying in the Traveler's Row area for the time being.


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f=19&t=142]Traveler’s Row[/url]


Ledger

- 100 (starting amount)
- some of her glasswork that she created, with the purpose of selling wherever she ended up.


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Arila - Character Sheet

Postby Siren on May 8th, 2013, 5:58 pm

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Hey there!

I'm Siren, the local and completely harmless Character Sheet Liaison. In order to help you get the most out of your experience on Mizahar, I have taken a look at at your Character Sheet to make sure that everything is up to par!

Unfortunately, there are a few changes that have to be made before we can move forward! Please see the tabs below for details on these issues. Once the issues have been addressed, feel free to send me a private message, let me know you've fixed what I've pointed out and I will gladly remove the intervention!

 
Layout
Unfortunately, your CS is EXTREMELY hard to read. The font color or the background color needs to be darkened so that you can actually read the text in the post :)

 
Skills
The skills in your table don't add up. There is a whole section of the table that is dark blue, I don't know what happened there but if there is any kind of skills listed behind it I can't read it.

 
Ledger
Your ledger needs to deduct actual prices, so you need to find an amount for the glassworking materials that you used and deduct it from your total :)

 
Name
You need to take the "Inarta" from your PC's name, because they would never use their race as their surname :)


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