Golden Amur Character Sheet

[Golden Amur]

Golden Amur Golden Amur has golden cat eyes, abnormal canines, and in the winter long and thick blond hair. When looking closely, you can see her hair has specks of black and brown. She has the words, I'm Favored and Despised , tattooed down her right leg. She is 5'5 and weighs 130 pounds. In leopard form, she is 190 pounds. Overall Amur has a slim figure in both forms. As human she does carry nice curves and as a cat she built for strength, flexibly , and some speed. Race: Kelvic (Amur Leopard) Gender: Female Age: 6 years old Birthday: 21, Spring, 507 AV Birthplace: Ravok Golden Amur or just Amur could really be any kind of girl you want her to be, just not a kind one. Amur tends to sit in the background and watch her surroundings before interacting with anyone. When speaking with someone, she is normally honest and respectful right off the bat. You will have to do most of the talking though. Amur has learn to hide all her emotions. No matter who she is with, there is wall separating her heart and mind from the rest of the world. So if you truly want to know this feline, you must force the walls down. Amur is a sexy and mature kittycat, even though she is very young in most human eyes. She loves a dirty joke and flirting. She loves it even more when a man can actually make her blush. Which is a real challenge. After learning from and watching whores of Sunberth when she was one and two. Amur can seduce and persude almost anyone with one look. No matter how sweet, charming, honest, attractive- Amur is not someone you should be friends. Whither she meant it or not: she will hurt you. It's only a matter of time. It is to be understood, due to her past, that her ideas of love, compassion, and relationships are screwed. Abuse is affection for her, lust is better than love, friends that kill together stay together, pain is not a burden rather a challenge, and blood is part of everyday life. For the first four years of her life, evil has been the center of her existence. And this is reason Amur personality is split. Amur, the person people usually meet, still loves to kill and torture people. But she loves it secretly. She is ashamed that she loves it. Amur will actually smile or laugh at a joke. Amur loves to flirt her hot behind off. Amur doesn't swear for some reason. And Amur misses her dead mentor/master deeply. Basically regular Amur, is actually nice to be around sometimes. Now, Golden Amur, loves only a few things: killing, watching killing, listening to killing, bathing in blood, drinking blood, coloring in blood. Really if it pain related, she loves it. Please hope, you never meet the golden side of Amur. Golden Amur, Dark Past Amur's past actually begins with her grandfather, Bluu Hernrison. Bluu was fabulous man and an adorable little dog. Bluu loved the forest, loved talking for hours, loved traveling, loved helping, loved caring, loved beautiful women. So it's strange that his bondmate ended up being Red Loveless. A nasty fat woman with dirty skin, nappy hair, and barely any teeth. Red Loveless was a vile woman that did nothing but, ruin people's lives with rumors and gossip. Not to mention she worshiped Rhysol. So naturally Loveless used this kind gentleman, Bluu, as nothing but a slave. Never the less, Bluu smiled everyday, was kind as possible to every individual he ever met. Yet eight years later on his daughter's (Lover) birthday. Bluu snapped into complete rage. Lover came home to see Bluu on top of her mother. His hands clasped around the fat woman's throat. Loveless lips turning blue as her nasty black eyes rolled back into her skull. No one can say, why it toke ten years for Bluu to snap. Even more on his bondmate, which never happens. Maybe Loveless broke the bond, maybe Bluu went crazy. Or maybe the good can't stand the bad, not matter how much they loved them. No one will know the reason because Bluu was beaten to death by Lover's uncles and aunts. And needless to say Bluu's daughter didn't have much care on Kelvics afterwards. In fact anytime Lover ever heard the mention of a kelvic, she would throw a fit. That is why she cursed every god out there, when twenty years later she gave birth to Golden Amur. On the 21st of spring of 509AV, Lover held a small brown baby with yellow strands of hair and smiled. And smiling was something she never does. "Aw, where did she get that blonde hair from," sang the mother. Soon that singing turned into screaming as the brown baby turned into a blonde leopard cub. It toke three days for Lover's husband to convince to keep the kelvic as a free slave. So Golden Amur ( who was currently named Kitty) life was spared. For the first month everything was going smoothly. The baby was growing and fast. In her human form she was the size of a nine month old child. That is until, the baby kelvic bit the hand that fed her. Lover was holding her daughter in her arms, right by the window. The kelvic was as a amur leopard, twisting all around in Lover's arms, just begging to be on the ground. So when Lover roughly pinched "Kitty's" side. The young kelvic chomped down on the women's middle finger. And that's when Amur's true life story begins. She doesn't remember why suddenly she became air born. Last time she checked, she had no wings, meaning she could not fly. Amur let out a loud cry, clawing at the sky. In instinct, she flip all over in a certain fashion, to ensure she lands on her paws. Only there wasn't any land to land on. Only a tan man standing on the boat with his hand stretched for the leopard cub. Yet even when the kelvic was caught by the skilled stranger, she some how ended up in water. The tan man was Taker of The Slitted Throat, a master of murder and torture. Who also had a soft spots for anything feline. He was currently on boat traveling through the canals, searching for any shop selling pet. For a very long time he has been searching for the perfect killing machine. A perfect killing machine that also purred when you pet it and had cute big eyes. So when Taker saw the opportunity of a free cat being placed right above his head. The mixed blood reached for the cub and did what his named implied. Both fall in the water and the magic happens. Under the blue cover of waves, the baby kelvic meets eyes with her new friend. When gold eyes meet green, the she-cat instantly knew this was the man she'll love forever. This is the stranger she would kill for. This is the man she would secretively call father under the sheets. This is the man, she would follow pointlessly. This is the man she would rename - Master. And that's exactly how their relationship went. After Master discovered that this kitty cat was actually a kelvic. He named her Golden Amur and toke her out the city of Ravok. He feared that slavers would try to steal her away. So he travels to Sunberth, the lawless city. Where Amur spent almost all her life. It was almost everyday the two went out and murdered a innocent bystander. Often Master would show Amur the best ways to kill a person. And when she was good, Master would make Amur to eat the bodies. Then show his affection by wiping her back. Oh on their birthdays, they would bath in the blood of lost travelers. They did everything together. Even when Master was sleeping with a woman, Amur would be under the bed. That way, she could get rid of the whore at Master orders. They honestly had a beautiful relationship. [finish later] Languages Fluent Language: Common Basic Language: Old Language (Myrian) Poor Language: Kontinese Skills Skill EXP Total Proficiency Blind Fighting +5SP 5 Novice Unarmed Combat +15SP 15 Novice Hunting +10RB, +5# SP 15 Novice Persuasion +5SP 5 Novice Suduction +5SP 5 Novice Wilderness Survival +10SP 10 Novice Lores Lore of Sunberth Culture Lore of Kyrsus   Possessions -Tight white Shirt -Tight black leather Pants -Simple Undergarments - Long Red Cloak - black boots 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: -Comb (Metal) -Brush (Metal) -Soap -Razor -Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth) -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel 600 Gold Mizas Master's journal   Wearing -Long Red Cloak - Black Leather pants -Backpack - Eating Knife, tucked in her leather pants   Ledge Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 GM 100 GM No Housing +500 GM 600GM Heirloom: Her master's journal. Housing Location: Ravok (for now) House: Tarsin's Boarding House Thread List

[Banshee]

Hello hello! My name is Banshee, and I am here to help you with the daunting task of joining the Mizahar Community. It is my duty to assist you with your Character Sheet, so that you can get to writing quickly and properly. And I've noticed several things that need addressed in your Character Sheet, that will need to be fixed before you can begin roleplaying here. You will need to read all of the tabs below, make the appropriate changes, then send me a Private Message. When that has all been done, I will remove this Intervention, and you can get back to roleplaying. Have a great day, and I can't wait to see more of your writing soon!   Personal Info Even if your PC doesn't know their Date of Birth exactly, you as a writer do. Please include it. Feline isn't a proper language per se. As a leopard Kelvic, she'd be able to understand through body language and such, other leopards, but only when in Leopard form. Also I fixed some of your BBCode, you had your closing tags out of order. Also I deleted your previous attempt at this CS, since the code was so broken it made it impossible to edit.   Self Description You have several descriptions in your CS that do not match up with the skills you have. You must be able to back up what you say. She can also kill with one blow. Amur can seduce and persude almost anyone with one look. Also try to avoid telling others how to feel about your PC, it is considered very bad form.   Possessions You can have either the journal, or the gloves, as an heirloom but not both. You'd have to pay for the other. Also, even if you've cashed in housing, you need to put a specific Inn, or something similar, from whatever city you're currently in as your housing. This helps to determine seasonal expenses and the like.   Skills As a Kelvic, you get 50 Starting Points (SP), and 10 Racial Bonus (RB) points in Hunting, Unarmed Combat, or Foraging. You only have a total of 55 points, meaning you can add 5 more points