Completed Fallen

A newly fallen Ethaefal finds her first friend.

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Center of scholarly knowledge and shipwrighting, Zeltiva is a port city unlike any other in Mizahar. [Lore]

Fallen

Postby Sanabael on July 18th, 2013, 12:53 am

Note: Reworking character completely
Last edited by Sanabael on September 17th, 2017, 7:29 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Fallen

Postby Eldritch on August 8th, 2013, 3:02 am

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Auva :
Skills
Swimming +3
Observation +2
Socialization +2

Lores
-The burn of swallowing sea water
-Edwin: man who took you in
-Seeing your horns for the first time
-Claiming a name: Auva



Notes :
First off, I'm sorry it took me so long to get to this. Secondly, I love your writing, its beautifully descriptive and well structured. Great work, I hope to see more from you! :D


If you have any comments/questions/concerns about your grade please PM me and we will work something out.

Keep on writing!
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