[Verified by Jupiter] Vincent Lane

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Vincent Lane

Postby Vincent Lane on July 25th, 2013, 11:55 pm

Vincent Lane


Appearance

Human
Male
19
Summer 12th 494
Syliras

Standing at around 6ft2 Vincent looks like an everyday run of the mill average human. There is nothing special about the way he looks apart from some burn marks running down his arms. Vincent has long black hair and likes to keep his face clean shaven and tidy.
Character Concept
Vincent is a young and struggling magic user, after being taught the basics he never fully had the confidence to advance in his abilities always fearing the worst outcome. Vincent wants to overcome this problem and be able to live up to his mothers high expectations she had for him. Vincent also has an overwhelming urge to be able to get out of Syliria and do great adventurous things, there was many time while reading books of great and epic tales where he would imagine himself at the forefront of an important story.

Strengths
Level Headed
Good education

Weaknesses
Unsociable
confidence
Clumsy

History
Vincent was a bastard born son of a man that his mother has kept secret from him for the majority of Vincent's life. Growing up Vincent was usually confined to his tiny accommodation within the citadel, it is here that he met his best and only childhood friend, a girl by the name of Deviasa. Deviasa was always greatly interested in the Syliran knights which meant the majority of your time with her was spent watching the knights out on the street and having play sword fights in her room. However all this fun and games soon came to an end when Vincent's mother forbade him from leaving the home. During this time Vincents mother had forced him to study the magical arts insisting that he should carry on the family tradition. Extremely reluctant Vincent started his studies and practice, he was never very good and often injured himself while trying to form a spell. After many years of isolation Vincent was finally allowed out of the house and away from his studies providing that he should never reveal what he had been doing. Catching back up with his old friend Deviasa who he had not seen in a long time he discovered that she has become a brilliant sword-stress and is moving away from Sylvira but offers to teach him some basic sword play for old times sake. During this time they spent together they became very close again. Soon the time came for Deviasa to leave, she did not waste time with a goodbye or even look for Vincent to tell him she is leaving Vincent just woke up one morning to find she had left and so he had no choice but to return to his life of lonelyness and isolation until they day came when he could leave this place.



Language

Fluent Language: Common




Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Sheilding 20SP 20 Novice
Weapon (Longsword)15SP 15 Novice
Reimancy 15RB, 15SP 30 Competent




Lores

Helpful Lores: (Pick 2)
Lore of Syliran Culture
Lore of History of Syliran Knights

Possessions

1 Longsword
1 Set of Clothing
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Cloak
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Wood)
-Brush (Wood)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week's worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
Medicine Book-Common
75 Gold Mizas

Heirloom: Silver ruby pendant that belonged to Vincents mother.

Housing

Syliria

House: 20x20 apartment inside the citadel.

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Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM
Longsword -15 GM 85 GM
Medicine Book-Common -10 GM 75 GM


Comments
I'm not to great at creating characters and i dont do it very often at all, any feed back would be greatly appreciated to try and improve on my skills and maybe get a bit of actual creativity in my brain.

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Vincent Lane
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Location: Syliras
Race: Human
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