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Built into the cliffs overlooking the Suvan Sea, Riverfall resides on the edge of grasslands of Cyphrus where the Bluevein River plunges off the plain and cascades down to the inland sea below. Home of the Akalak, Riverfall is a self-supporting city populated by devoted warriors. [Riverfall Codex]

[The Amphitheater] Controlled Chaos (Krima)

Postby Jorin Ertihan on September 18th, 2013, 3:54 am

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Season of Fall, Day 33, 513 AV


"We need you guys on the secondary props now! Somebody get that petching curtain tied down, its blowing in the wind! Is anybody on the costumes? Where the shyke are the costumes ... people we have curtain in ten chimes! Let's hustle!"

Jorin drowned out the sounds of shouts as stagehands dashed to and fro, trying to get the stage prepared for the next act. He had to gussy up, and get his lines down. In front of him was the script, and his part was, thankfully, longer than a single act this time. He was to play the part of Sorkin, the Ghost of the East, who swept across the Suvan Sea striking at merchant vessels and vanishing without a trace. It was certainly not top billing: that would be the dashing merchant captain who would eventually "kill" him, but second billing wasn't too bad. In any event, Jorin needed to get into character. No more time for idle thoughts.

"At arms, men! To the hazard we go, for into the jaws of the silent surf we march, to reap the harvest we sow."

Jorin swept his arm dramatically as he repeated the phrase. It was more formal dialogue than he would have preferred, honestly, but then again most of the plays at the Amphitheater were. Jorin checked to make sure his costume was correctly fastened. Nothing more embarrassing than a sash or other element falling off the costume mid-scene. Jorin was pretty good at improvisation but even he'd be hard-stretched to work that kind of mistake into the play.

"Jorin! You're onstage in five!" came the cry. Jorin nodded.

"I'll be there!" he called back. OK. Jorin could hear the polite applause of the audience after the prologue had finished. It was time to get up onto the stage. Jorin did a final check. His seams all seemed straight. Everything was in place. The makeup and other cosmetics were in place, including his false beard. Right, then. Time to get to work.

Jorin threw on his most fearsome expression. The Scourge of the Suvan needed to live up to his name, after all. Taking a few breaths and running his lines one more time in his head, Jorin stepped past the velvet curtain, and onto the stage.
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Postby Krima on September 21st, 2013, 7:39 pm

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33rd Day of Fall, 513 A.V.


Krima ran back and forth behind the curtain, doing all she could not to touch or rustle it. The left side of the stage had finally been organized after an entire night at The Amphitheater. She had spent the entire time organizing the weapons, clothing, and any props she could move. The majority were too big for her to push, and she nearly threw her back out trying to move a bed. Still, the hard work placed off. The bolts of fabric were in their own baskets. One basket for each type, and played left to right in color order. Krima remembered the satisfaction she had when she finished, and was more excited to see how well it would pay off than the play itself.

On top of the fabrics, the weapons were placed in order of use. Jorin's being first, followed by the merchant captain, and the rest of the actors as they came on stage. All the weapons lie again the wall, and as an actor returned from the stage they would place their weapon in between the actor before them and the actor after them, creating an assembly line. She heard a stage hand shout the time at Jorin, and instantly ran to the wall to grab the first weapon. Running over to the actor, she shoved his prop into his hand.


"Good Luck Jorin!" she said with a quick smile, then ran back to make sure everyone was in position.

Just as she approached the changing actors, a young man ran towards her, carrying a glass of wine. Not watching his step, he crashed into the Konti women, and win covered both their chests. Slowly looking down, she wanted to scream. The Merchant Captain, handsome clean and crisp, had wine all over him.

"Petch!" Krima muttered under her breath in Kontinese. Running as fast as her small legs would carry her, she got to the clothes rack and was disappointed on finding no suitable shirts. Behind her, she could hear the audience , indicating that Jorin had stepped on stage. Panic began to set in, what was she going to do? She didn't have another shirt, and there wasn't time for a whole wardrobe change. Perhaps he could be drunk for the first part of the play. No no, that wouldn't work. The merchant was mentioned not to drink.

She turned to the actor, who had just stripped the wine drenched shirt off. He was a buff man, and was just as dashing without the shirt. Suddenly getting an idea, her face lit up.
"Leave it off!" she shouted at him. He gave her a wild stare, which she returned with eyes daring him to question her. She didn't have time to explain why it made sense to her. The actor sighed and grabbed his sword, then ran out on stage shirtless. Krima shook her head, praying the audience would approve.



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Postby Jorin Ertihan on September 27th, 2013, 3:05 am

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There was a ripple of murmuring as the Merchant Captain sprang up onto the stage ... shirtless? Jorin was tempted to glance over at the stage hands to get an indication of what this new development meant, but that would mean breaking character on the very first scene. Deciding to just go with it, he drew his wooden cutlass, waving it before the shirtless merchant captain and beginning the scene.

"Ho there, villain!" cried the captain, eyes blazing. "I know of you! How dare you show your face here, Ghost of the East?!"

Jorin grinned, sweeping his cape in dramatic fashion as he threw his head back. "Sorkin the Scourge shows his face whenever he wishes!" he sneered as he circled the captain. "It was foolish of you to come here alone, Garreth. For now I shall kill you, and no one shall know."

"Garreth" smiled widely. "Who says I'm alone?" he replied. Jorin made sure to look appropriately surprised, but the action caused his false beard to scrape against his chin. Petching thing itched like nothing else. Jorin suppressed the urge to scratch, but he made a determination to see if they couldn't find any less irritable materials to make their false beards out of.

The line was the cue for the three actors playing Garreth's men to show up on stage. Now, Jorin figured since the captain decided to show up bare-chested, the men might do the same. That would be a problem though, because one of the men was supposed to be a pirate in disguise. The black band tatooed on that man's sternum was supposed to be the giveaway and if he shows up bare-chested it would break the scene.

Jorin waited, and wondered what they were going to do about this backstage.
OOCSorry this was so late. And sorry it's so bad :(. I'll do better next post, I promise!
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Postby Krima on October 1st, 2013, 12:40 am

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Krima let out a soft sigh as the crowd rolled along with the scene. At first there had been slight confusion, indicated by the murmuring, but sure enough the crowd settled down, and from the faces Krima could see, the crowd, especially the few women, approved. She had been peaking out every so slightly from the side, just enough to see the audience.

Sadly, she had relaxed too soon. The pirate in disguise tapped her shoulder, and she whirled around, clearly startled.

"Krima- I uuh, sorry." The man began, apologizing for surprising her. "What do the others do? We can't break the scene and go shirtless as well."The man explained, and she swore under her breath. What in Mizahar was she gonna do? They couldn't go shirtless, otherwise the entire element of surprise would be ruined. However, the men going in shirtless would create confusion on why the Merchant was shirtless.

Krima let out an irritated grunt, and ran over to the clothing rack. Once again, nothing was there that could help her. She wanted to scream, nothing was going right, and it was only the first scene. On the stage, she could hear the actors approaching the cue. Cursing under her breath, she turned to the fellow merchants.


"Half of you keep your shirts on, the other half keep them on. If it's all a mix, then we can hide the pirate and it won't look as... well it will look best." they all blinked at her, and she just shook her head. There was nothing else she could do. With a sigh, she grabbed the dress for the Merchant's lover. She was suppose to be killed as Sorkin's final act of vengeance. To make her death dramatic, she not only had to be a likable character, she had to represent something. Innocence and beauty, for this particular play.

As Gareth's men stormed onto the stage, Krima found the fellow Konti. She was a gorgeous women, like the majority of their race. She was also one of the best actresses in Riverfall, and it only made sense for her to be the leading lady. Krima exchanged a smile with the girl, and handed her the dress. It was a bright gold that faded into blood red, reminding you of a sunrise or sunset. It was the perfect dress. A sunrise for the innocence of a new day, and a sunset for when the lover is killed, and the last innocence the Merchant Captain had was gone. Truly tragic, and truly the perfect outfit for the job.


"Here you go! Good luck out there!" Krima said with a warm smile, happy to speak in her native tongue. "And good luck to you back here!" The actress replied in the same tongue, and they both exchanged a quiet laugh. With how the first scene is going, I'll need it. Krima thought to herself as the actress ran off to get dressed.



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Postby Jorin Ertihan on October 13th, 2013, 5:50 am

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The three men rushed up on the stage, two with their shirts on and one shirtless. Jorin just went with it, not breaking character and acting as though this was perfectly normal.

"So you decided to bring help, did you, Gareth?" he sneered, as he backed away slowly from the quartet approaching him. Jorin's face was a perfect mask of anger and surprise, as he gulped at the unfavorable odds facing him. He had to admit, the people in the back made the right choice. If they'd all come out with their shirts on, the audience would have suspected something. But as it was, they probably just didn't think about it at all.

Gareth just smiled triumphantly, puffing out his chest and earning several "oohs" from the audience, mainly those members of the female persuasion. Jorin resisted the urge to roll his eyes. Some of the Konti and human women of Riverfall were so easy to please. Perhaps when this gets out they would get more attendance from the fairer sex next show. Jorin had to hand it to Krima, she certainly knew how to work an audience. He'd have never thought of a strategy like that.

"Prepare to meet thy doom, foul fiend!" Gareth cried, as he sprang forward, but Jorin just laughed and raised his left fist in the air, and blew a whistle through his right hand. It was the signal for the pirate in disguise to throw off his shirt and reveal his treachery, but the hem of the man's shirt had the hard luck to get stuck in his trousers, and several of the darning needles the stagehands backstage had used to keep the cloth up had sank into the fabric.

A loud "riiiiiiip" echoed through the theater as the actor tried, and failed, to take his shirt off in one smooth action the way the others did. A titter rippled through the audience and Jorin nearly winced, and once again had to remind himself not to break character. However, he gave propriety a quick nod by looking down and making sure all was safe before removing his own shirt as well. Hey, if everyone was going shirtless, he couldn't very well be the only one with a shirt on. The female members of the audience certainly seemed approving of this new development, and cooed appreciatively.

Jorin, eager to erase the minor faux pas of the actor ripping his shirt, sprang forward and to the side, deftly avoiding the strike from Gareth, and clapped an arm on the shoulder of his unlucky comrade, looking him strongly in the eye.

"I am glad you could come, brother," he cried, voice strong and carrying across the entire amphitheater. The other man, shaken out of his daze by the physical contact and louder-than-strictly-necessary prompting, regained his bearings a moment later and nodded.

"Traitor!" Gareth cried, eyes full of accusation. "To think I had you under my own roof!"

Jorin just grinned, arms spread dramatically. "And now he and I will see you dead under that same roof!" he retorted.

As he spoke, Jorin drew his wooden cutlass, and prepared to cut Gareth down, when a beautiful Konti woman rushed onto the scene, interposing herself between Jorin and his target. She was dressed in a dress that was gold on top, but faded into red as it neared the bottom. Her blonde hair was loose and fluttered behind her, and her eyes were wide with terror and worry for her beloved.

"Please Sorkin, for the love of the gods, do not kill he who has done you no harm," she cried out, her voice sweet and melodic. Jorin chewed his lip, face frozen in an angry scowl, but he backed off slightly and growled at Gareth.

"What kind of warrior hides behind a woman?" he taunted, but the Konti simply turned, releasing her embrace on Gareth and bowed low to Jorin.

"Pray do not take thine anger out upon my love," she begged, tears in her eyes. "I beg of you..."

Jorin pretended to think for a moment, hand stroking his "beard" thoughtfully, before he continued the scene. "Very well," he intoned ominously. "If you will become my bride, I shall spare your 'beloved'." Jorin punctuated this demand with a barking laugh. It wasn't the long, drawn-out 'evil' laughs some actors favored. No, Jorin preferred his characters to take on more realistic mannerisms. The laugh was almost a snarl, filled with contempt and cruelty, and spoke of the horrible thinks Sorkin would do if the Konti agreed to his terms.

The Konti's eyes overflowed with tears as she quietly sobbed, her grief seen and felt by every member of the audience. For a full chime, there was no sound, until finally, in a broken but clear voice, she replied, "Y-you promise to spare my love?"

Gareth leaped forward, grasping his "beloved" with eyes wide and almost wild. "NO!" he roared, his voice hot and desperate. Jorin, reacting to Gareth's sudden movement, had surged forward with his wooden cutlass. The Konti, seeing Jorin's motion, interposed herself, and Jorin ended up "killing" her.

"No..." Gareth cried out, his voice cracking as he cradled his now-dead love. "No, no, no..."

Jorin just sneered. "And when you replay this moment endlessly in your nightmares you will remember," he warned, as he strode off the scene, "That it was your arrogance that caused this in the first place!"

And with this parting shot, Jorin left the scene, entering the backstage area once more. "Sorkin" would next be seen in scene three; as the entire second scene would be Gareth plotting vengeance against him and his men becoming increasingly nervous about their captain's growing instability.

In the meantime, Sorkin's ally, the unlucky "pirate" who had the hard luck to tear his costume, meandered sheepishly back stage a few ticks after him. Jorin gave the man a hard look, before shrugging as he leaned his wooden cutlass haphazardly against the racks. "Krima's going to have your head for that," he quipped to the unhappy stage hand. He knew she'd worked hard on those costumes. He just hoped they had enough spares or the rest of the play was going to get... interesting.
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[The Amphitheater] Controlled Chaos (Krima)

Postby Krima on October 24th, 2013, 5:23 am

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As the women disappeared, Krima had a chime to catch her breath. Looking down, she saw the wine had settled into the dress she was wearing. Instantly, she could feel her cheeks go red. She had spent the entire first act looking like a drunk! Disregarding the play, she grabbed her coat and put it on, while quickly thanking the gods for her gift. Backstage was always comfortably warm for her, regardless of how much she ran around. It simply depended on the amount of people backstage, and during a play there was always be many.

"Won't you be sweating mam? Surely we can find you something to change into instead." One of the stagehands asked her, giving a perplexed look. Krima shook her head.
"You've heard of Konti Gifts yes? Don't worry about me." She explained. She would of explained her gift fully, but she simply didn't have the time. The stagehand nodded, and ran off to help prepare for the upcoming scene.

Just as she was getting the crew's wardrobe prepared, one of the worse sounds a seamstress could hear echoed through the Amphitheater. RIIIIIIP.

Krima froze. Something had ripped on stage. It had to be the traitor's shirt. He was the only one who had to take anything off. It wouldn't be too much of an issue on stage, considering the shirt was coming off anyway. But what about the next scene? She knew there wasn't an extra, otherwise they would have used it when wine stained the first shirt. She was going to have to stitch it up quickly. Hopefully the damage wasn't too severe. Krima darted to the bins of fabric, and found the one containing simple thread. If she hadn't been in such a panic, she would of smiled at how quickly she found it. For now, she grabbed a needle and thread, and ran to meet to actors who had just gotten off stage.

"Krima's going to have your head for that," Krima managed to just hear Jorin as she approached. He was talking to the actor who had caused her newest dilemma.
"Oh, you're lucky if all I have is your head!" she snapped at the both of them. "Where is the shirt? I need to stitch it up. We don't have extras." she muttered, half to them, half to herself. The pirate handed her the shirt. One of the sleeves had ripped from elbow to shoulder. It was fixable, at least. But she would need a few chimes to stitch.

Krima turned to Jorin, and paused when she noted he was shirtless.
"Did I start some sort of theme of bare chests?" she joked.

"No matter, I need to fix this. Do me a favor and make sure everyone else is prepared. You know what everyone wears right?"


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Postby Jorin Ertihan on November 2nd, 2013, 1:15 am

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The poor actor looked absolutely mortified to have caused Krima so much trouble. Jorin just sighed heavily as he watched the man's face. He clearly needed more acting lessons; his expressions were showing all over his visage. It was quite embarrassing to the Art, really. Jorin had always kept a cool, collected look on stage, even when things go wrong. Especially when things go wrong. And they always did.

"Look, we have curtain in ten chimes," he told the actor firmly. "Krima has got this handled, just get the other actors ready. And for Priskil's sake, please don't rip any more of our costumes."

While he had been saying this, Krima had snatched the ripped shirt from the pirate's hands and had already examined it. Jorin couldn't really read her expression, and he grimaced internally. The truth was, Rinya spoiled him, in some ways. Their bond was so open, so strong, that he'd never really bothered to learn subtle facial expressions. He'd really need to rectify that; actors needed to know such small cues, if only so that they'd be able to duplicate them on stage.

Krima joked about starting a trend of bare chests, to which Jorin grinned and joked back at her, "Well, the female members of the audience seem to approve!"

He nodded when Krima noted she needed to repair the shirt, and quickly. For their next scene, Jorin and his pirate friend would be discussing their plans to lure the Merchant Captain into a trap. Technically, since the man's identity was now "known", he could walk up there shirtless again. Everything would be perfect, except the scene was supposed to be taking place in Avanthal. It would shatter suspension of disbelief to have a pair of pirates shirtless in Avanthal. Anyone who'd ever heard of Morwen's beautiful frozen city would know that being shirtless there would not make any sense.

But what else was new? Yet another disaster to fix, another crisis to avert. No production Jorin had ever been in, including the ones with the Thespians, had been without everything single thing falling apart behind the scenes, with props going missing and shirts being torn and someone vomiting in the back because they ate a dozen raw eggs on a dare and now they couldn't keep their lunch down. There was always something.

"Of course!" Jorin nodded, voice full of confidence he didn't really feel. There were times when Jorin was glad Rinya wasn't there to see him act. He knew their bond would tell her instantly that he was never confident when he acted like this. In fact, the less confident he was, usually the more he'd puff out his chest and assure everyone he knew what he was doing.

It wasn't so much that he wanted to lie, it was just that, fear and doubt usually led to puttering around, and that never accomplished anything. People responded to confidence. He just needed to be careful, lest he started to slide into arrogance. But while Jorin was many things, he was quite sure arrogant wasn't one of them.

Dashing off to the Pit, where the other actors were gathered, Jorin cleared his throat, trying to get the attention of the actors who were milling about the area. The Pit was a small indentation just behind the Amphitheater stage, and it was a common gathering-ground for actors of that venue since it was conveniently located and, well, everyone else did it.

"If I could have everyone's attention..." Jorin began, clearing his throat a bit. The milling stopped slightly, but some of the actors were still talking among themselves. Jorin cleared his throat again, but it didn't seem to help, so he raised his voice a bit.

"Everyone, listen," he repeated, calmly but firmly, his voice carrying across the small space and bouncing back at him. The ones milling around turned to him curiously.

"As you may know, we're up on stage in five," he explained. "Since a few of our costumes have met... unfortunate consequences, we are going to have to get creative about how this is going to work."

"Getting creative" was Jorin-parlance for "improvisation". It was something he'd always been good at, and it had driven poor Eric up the wall. But it was times like now that it came in handy.

"OK so you know the next scene's in Avanthal," he announced, and silently observed the wave of nods. "Well, obviously we can't go up there bare-chested. But since our costumes are currently being repaired, we'll need to 'borrow' a few from the third act."

It was a dangerous play. The costumes were there, of course, but they weren't quite correct. They were specifically sewn to look ratty and unkempt, since by that scene Jorin's character, and his crew, was supposed to be pretending to be beggars. He needed a way to disguise the appearance of these costumes.

His eyes fell on the fall jackets some of the actors had brought. It was not unusual for actors to use their own clothing when costumes fell short, but the problem was that the personal clothing of actors rarely matched. Nonetheless he sprang for the haphazard pile of coats, looking for two that at least superficially matched. After around ten chimes he returned triumphantly with two fall jackets that at least were the same color, though one was more a tan brown and the other more a forest-y brown.

"These will have to do," he announced, his green eyes firm to silence the groans from the two individuals he'd swiped the jackets from. Jorin just shrugged internally. The show must go on. Nodding to the other actors, they all dispersed, the other pirate coming with him to the actor's box. The curtain rose, and they both stepped onto the stage, throwing on the coats to cover the rattiness of the costumes underneath.

"Well, Sorkin, I've followed you from port to port, from city to city, and now we're here in the frozen north, and still I have not seen hide nor hair of our foe," the pirate growled. Jorin just shook his head. He knew, of course, as did every other actor who'd read the script, that the plot had "Gareth" sailing up to Avanthal himself. But of course, Sorkin did not.

"So long as our hearts are stout and our arms strong, we shall meet our foe soon enough," Jorin replied, his face stern and angry as he growled back at the other actor. "You have been questioning my orders more often as of late. What distresses you, my friend?"

The other pirate sighed, drawing in his jacket a bit closer. The action served two purposes; to the audience it would seem he was cold, which made sense since the scene was occurring in snowy Avanthal. But the hem was slipping and the costume underneath was showing, and the action successfully hid it from the prying eyes of the watching audience.

"I have followed you because the food was plentiful and the Mizas flowed. Now the food is gone and the Mizas seem to go with them. Why should I stay, when so many others have gone?"

Jorin drew himself up, leaning into the other pirate in a threatening manner, eyes glinting with fury. "I am still Sorkin! Ghost of the Suvan! Do not forget that. This Gareth may have had a few successes, but I shall win in the end."

Throwing his arms out dramatically, Jorin swung his head to the heavens. "Do you hear that?!" he shouted at the heavens, voice echoing to the back reaches of the Amphitheater. "I shall have my satisfaction!"
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