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[River Flower] When One Door Closes... (Waisana)

Postby Nathaniel Deveraux on November 4th, 2013, 7:37 pm

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Perhaps these Drykas were made of sterner stuff than the Sylirans. This girl certainly had a sharper tongue than most of the doctors he'd met in the Fortress City, though they more tended to shove their decades of medical experience down his throat, like as though having done it longer meant they obviously knew everything. Nonetheless, she seemed to calm down more when he'd explained why he behaved the way he did.

Regardless, it still did not change the fact that he still didn't know more than half the herbs here, and his medical knowledge still consisted primarily of first-aid and not actual surgical techniques. He still couldn't actually fix anything, just wrap a bandage around it and get the patient to a hospital for actual medical attention. If he was ever going to improve his medical skills, this was the place to do it. Getting inside was crucial.

At least the girl seemed willing to let him help burn bandages. At least it would give him something to do. She ordered him to wait outside, which he did. What else could he do? As he waited, Nate briefly wondered why he even made the offer. Burning bandages wouldn't really achieve either his goal of learning more medical techniques, nor would it improve his knowledge of herbs. But... but it would get him in the door. Or tent flap. Or whatever.

A few chimes later, the girl popped her head out and called him over. Nate nodded and walked over, gently pushing aside the tent flap and making sure he was following Waisana the entire time. The last thing he needed was to be kicked out for "loitering near the patients". As they walked past patients on bedspreads, Nate couldn't help but diagnose them in his mind, his experience as a medic already triaging the sick.

One man seemed to have an infected wound; the angry red and green of the wound standing out against the tanned skin of his forearm. Slashes... probably an animal attack that was not treated in the field. Whoever brought him in clearly had very little medical experience. Another seemed to be sweating profusely. Likely a fever of some kind, given the blanket and the cup of water within reach. Each diagnosis was rapid-fire and automatic, unbidden, from years of seeing similar issues crop up repeatedly in the field.

But Nate did not stop to try to confirm any of the diagnosis. That was not why he was here, not why he'd entered the tent. And truthfully, there was little if anything he could do to help. Even though his diagnosis may or may not be correct, that didn't mean he necessarily knew what to do to actually cure them. The only actions he'd know to take were the ones that were clearly already being taken. Nate sighed softly. He supposed it was a bit arrogant of himself. Eight years experience in the field didn't make him a doctor.

So, Nate continued to follow Waisana past the fragrant herbs to the area where she burned the bandages, the fire already producing a rather foul smell despite having consumed most of the earlier bandages already. Frankly, Nate was a bit disappointed the Drykas wouldn't have thought to simply burn the bandages as far from the medical tent as possible. He supposed they simply didn't have the resources to cart them that far away, and so did the next-best-thing and simply used the herbs as a aromatic barrier.

Picking up one of the sticks, Nate immediately got to work, picking up a bandage from the pile and quickly shifting to the fire, putting it in and going to the next one without any hesitation. The acrid stench filled his nostrils, but he kept moving, only a wrinkling of his nose giving any indication the odor affected him at all.

"It's fascinating, actually," he commented, as he picked up another bandage to burn. Off Waisana's expression, he explained further, "when I was in Syliras, my first day of medical training was exactly like this. Same exact task." Nate shrugged, burning the bandage and fetching another one. "Must be a medical thing. I still remember that first day. I couldn't handle the smell at all, vomited all over the floor. The doctors made me clean it up, said if I couldn't even handle burning bandages I'd never make it in medicine."

A slight plume from a particularly... dirty... bandage caused thick black smoke to enter Nate's lungs, and he coughed slightly, eyes watering slightly.

"Don't suppose you have some handkerchiefs or something to cover our noses and mouths?" he asked, between coughs. "It's not generally a good idea to be breathing in these sorts of fumes."
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Postby Waisana on November 13th, 2013, 8:21 pm

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OOCSorry for the massive delay, will try to post more frequently now

Nathaniel followed her into the tent without hesitation. It was clear that he was eager to get started, even if it was only to do a menial task like burning bandages. He understood that the job was just as important as any life saving procedure and the young healer found that she was glad of that fact. It was nice to have someone who realised the importance of such simple tasks.

A quick glance back showed her that Nate was following her closely but that his eyes were fixed on the patients. His expression was one of thought, perhaps he was considering their conditions, Waisana didn't know. He didn't try to loiter behind her though and she wondered if she'd been wrong about his interest. She shook her head. No, he was probably just worried that he'd be kicked out if he stopped by the patients.

She slipped past the herb barrier, the stench rising from the fire hitting her nostrils immediately. She'd spent too long outside and her nose had recovered from the scent only to be battered with it anew, an overwhelming assault on her olfactory sense. The girl tried not to retch.

The field medic needed no prodding however, immediately getting to work without so much as a word from her. She had to say that she was impressed by his willingness to jump right in. Getting control of her roiling stomach, she joined him, shaking her head slightly at the sight of the bandages that he was burning. He'd put too many in at once, creating plumes of thick, choking smoke. She coughed on the fumes, her eyes watering as she tried to protect her nose and mouth by covering them with her sleeve.

"They wouldn't waste good cloth on us," Waisana choked out, taking a step back from the fire to try to recover herself. "Don't burn so many at once." She hoped that her words were clear enough for him. The teen couldn't be sure that he'd been able to decipher her words from amidst the splutters and coughs.


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Postby Nathaniel Deveraux on December 3rd, 2013, 6:52 am

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It had definitely not been a good idea to burn quite so many bandages simultaneously. The act had been rather instinctual; trained from years at a Syliran hospital where the bandages to dispose of ran in the hundreds and were burnt in a furnace; and the instrument of choice to move them from the pile to the furnace was not a stick, but a shovel.

That habit had stuck, but obviously Nate would have to relearn everything. He wasn't in Syliras anymore, and that fact still stung, even though with a sigh he chose to let go of the burning feeling inside. In the end it didn't really matter how angry he got, at Endrykas, at individual Drykas he met, or at life in general. None of it changed the base truth that he was here, and there was not a damn thing he could do about it.

The girl, Waisana, was coughing and sputtering from the heavy black smoke and Nate ceased putting any more bandages into the fire. In his over-zealousness, he'd put in about a third of the bandages already, so it wasn't like the momentary pause would really cause them to fall behind schedule at all. After the smoke cleared a little, he gingerly picked up one of the bandages and dropped it onto the fire, making sure it was fully consumed before going over and picking up another one.

Nate looked over at Waisana with a somewhat chagrined look. He knew it was probably not the smartest thing that he did, but it was an honest mistake, due to ingrained training from years in Syliras where speed was king and the furnace burned all day and all night.


"Sorry about that," he tried, somewhat sheepishly, with a bit of a shrug. "It's a force of habit, I guess. Places I was used to, they used to say that 'speed is life'. Drilled it into our heads, actually."

With a sigh, Nate turned his attention back to burning the bandages. He really wasn't sure what topic of conversation he could bring up, short of quizzing the girl on the herbs that were hanging between them and the patients, just beyond the flap. They were visible, just slightly, and while he could ask, more than likely he'd get a snippy response, and no real answer.

Not that he was altogether surprised by her attitude. After all, he was technically a captive. A slave. No need for captives to really know much. At least that had been the attitude of quite a few of the Drykas he'd met so far. In fact... Nate caught sight of one of the new arrivals through the gap in the tent flap that separated the bandage-burning area from the rest of the pavilion.

He couldn't help it. His blood ran cold as his hands stopped moving. He stood there; frozen, rooted, the stick gripped tight halfway between the bandages and the fire. His gaze remained transfixed on what he saw. He didn't know the man's name, or what clan he came from, or anything about him, really. But he'd never forget the face. The face of the man who'd captured his sisters, who was the root cause and very reason he was here to begin with.

For Nate, time slowed to a crawl. The man was injured, it was clear. From what, Nate didn't know, and frankly didn't care. But the simple fact of the matter was, he was now sharing space, sharing a tent, sharing air with the man who was directly responsible for his current situation. It took every ounce of his willpower not to march over, regardless of consequence, and just punch the man in the mouth, repeatedly. Or worse.

Nate could feel the rage bubbling up in his chest. There were so very many things he wanted to do. But this was a house of healing. And as badly as he wanted to, Nate was also a medic. He did know better. After a long two or three chimes, he tore his eyes away. He desperately hoped they wouldn't ask him to assist treating that man. Because he honestly wasn't sure if he could.

Turning back to Waisana, he found his mouth had gone suddenly dry, and he wasn't sure what to say to adequately explain his sudden strange behavior. He realized; he wasn't really even listening either, the blood rushing through his ears from what he'd seen drowning out all other thoughts and sounds. Nate shook his head slightly to clear it.


"Sorry, I thought I saw... nevermind." Best not to say anything, he mused. For all he knew, the man was Waisana's brother. Or father. Or perhaps even husband. "Were you saying something? I kind of zoned out there for a moment."

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[River Flower] When One Door Closes... (Waisana)

Postby Waisana on December 11th, 2013, 2:13 pm

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The girl found herself unable to see or breathe properly for a chime or two, the dark smoke choking her and bringing blinding tears to her eyes. When she was able to see properly again, she found Nathaniel looking a little sheepish as he put in bandages one at a time, giving them time to burn. She gave him a look, amazed that anyone could be so stupid. He claimed to be a healer, or a version of one, and yet he couldn't work out not to do something like that. She shook her head in disbelief, wondering why she had even offered to help him.

The man tried to explain his actions, claiming that in Syliras speed was everything. If what he said was true then she was glad that she'd never go near the city. It sounded truly horrible and it was shameful that their healers were so corrupt and so stupid too. She wouldn't want to go to a place like that. She was about to say as much as she turned to the field medic but she saw his face.

Nate had frozen, his gaze fixed on a spot back in the treatment area. She could see the tension in his body, the way he gripped the stick with the bandages on it. It wouldn't have surprised her if the wood had broken. Waisana followed his gaze, curious as to what could have caused such a reaction but all she saw was a Drykas man. Glancing between the pair in confusion, she tried to work out the strength of Nate's reaction. Gazing at the Drykas man, she waited for him to turn so that she could see if she recognised him.

When he did turn, recognition came instantly. Cordero Dawnlight. She hadn't seen the man in awhile, he'd been away she knew though he must have been back for many days. He would have come back with the raiding party so he would have been back...

"Oh!" the sound came out in a rush of surprise as her thoughts fully registered in her head. The man had been in the raiding party! The one that had brought back women and children, and a man or two to join the Drykas. It made sense that Nate would know him then, or recognise him, at least. The hatred on his face certainly made sense.

"Did he capture you?" she asked, curious though she regretted the question once it was out of her mouth. It was none of her business and she might only upset him more by asking. He ignored her anyway, refusing to answer her question and she assumed that she had offended him. She turned her focus to the bandages instead, unable to think of anything else to say.

When he spoke, she was surprised. He'd been so busy glaring at Cordero that he hadn't even been listening to her. She decided to repeat her question, hoping to satisfy her curiosity now and deal with the consequences later.

"I asked if he was the one who captured you. Cordero, I mean," she explained. The name probably meant nothing to him.

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[River Flower] When One Door Closes... (Waisana)

Postby Khida on August 1st, 2014, 9:02 am



Nathaniel Deveraux


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  • Medicine: disposing of soiled bandages
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It's a pity this interaction didn't continue. I really liked the culture clash featured here -- although Nate, I think you were overdoing it a bit. Herbal medicine would be pervasive everywhere; herbs are Mizahar's pharmaceuticals, and there are only so many Healers to go around.

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