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My Character

Postby Selene Ichiran on August 13th, 2010, 12:00 am

Name: Selene Ichiran

Gender: Female

Age: 18

Race: Kelvic – A Wolf

Hair: Black hair with silver streaks

Eyes: Sapphire eyes

Height: 5’7

Training and skills points:

Where she lives: She ducks in and out of places never staying anywhere; she travels from place to place never staying in one place for long.

Dislikes: She hates Tigers due to past experiences with them. She also hates liars.

Any other distinctions: Four thick lines of a scar runs across her throat then curves over her shoulder and then down her back curving again to end on her stomach.

Equipment/Possessions: She wears a black trench coat that falls to just above her boots, she wears black knee length high boots.
She also carries a blade hand crafted by her father and two smaller daggers also crafted by her father. All three have a black hilt with dancing wolves carved into them. Protection and strength runes written upon the silver blade.

Strengths: Unknown

Weaknesses: Her weakness is travelling with people; she prefers to be alone as she has trust issues with people around her.

History: The young girl lived with a family, a pack of wolves. The family lived in the mountains; they had an enemy against the tigers. For years a war between the two families, both sides had lost many people. The young girl Selene at the time was the next in line to take the family’s legacy, to be alpha of the pack. But the war had taken a sharp turn to the tiger’s side.
It was a dark night when Selene had decided to take a small walk of the perimeters of the wolf territory. She released her wolf form and her human form seems to grow. Her black hair with silver streak fell loosely down her back. Her Sapphire eyes grazed across the small river she had stopped by, she couldn’t help but feel that something was wrong. Something that was out of her abilities, something that she didn’t know about, what was it.
She looked up at the night sky lost deep in though. She had not heard the slightest movement or the disturbance of the night sky.
That in itself disturbed her and she turned to look back the way she had come. She realised that the night sky was beginning to paint red within it and a growl erupted from her throat. So they had come onto the wolf territory and just before she could move step forward a reddish brown body crossed her vision and pain seem to course through her body.
The wolf burst from the human body and staggered slightly before her fighting abilities kicked it and she turned to face the tiger that dared attack her. Except the animal before her was not that of a tiger but a wolf. It was Higar, a male wolf that she had grown up with.
‘How dare you Higar! Betray us like this,’ she growled as she took a couple of steps forward, her hackles were up, her sapphire eyes accusing, her drawn blood matting her black and silver fur.
‘I wanted better then this and I’m sick of this stupid war I want it to end,’ he answered and his muscles bunched up.
She recognised this as a move that he was going to strike again, so she moved first.
Selene rocked back onto her haunches and launched herself forward, her jaw open, she was faster then Higar and she knew it so she used this to her advantage.
Her jaws closed around the other wolf’s throat and she reaped her head to the side causing his neck to snap and her wound now around to throat to rip open more, letting more blood flow freely.
She opened her jaws the dead wolf falling to the ground and she looked back to where the fire’s smoke painted the sky.
Slowly she began tom move towards the ruined area, smoke filling her nose and her eyes watered, her gaze sweeping the area.
Everywhere dead bodies of wolves were everywhere, charred and some that had tried to escape were torn to pieces.
Her head lifted and a howl erupted from her maw as she cried for her pack, swearing to herself that whatever decision she made now she would not let anyone into her life, nor trust no one. Everyone was now her enemy.
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My Character

Postby Puck on August 13th, 2010, 12:35 am

Salutations Selene,

There are a few apparent issues here, which shall shortly be addressed.

1) This is the introductions forum, where people post OOC threads to get themselves acquainted with the community. The place you would post your Character Sheet (what this is) would be here.

2) Name your character sheet after your character please, this makes it easy to locate it amongst the others.

3) Please type your character sheet in a readable color.

4) Kelvics live to be the same age as their animal form, up to a maximum of 40 years. As such, a Kelvic Wolf that is 18 would be about dead.

5) Note that you cannot start out with three daggers that have "protection and strength runes". Please read the lore on the magical system, and realize that this would be far outside your financial means. As well, Kelvics generally do not see much value in material objects seeing as they are animals.

6) A pack of Kelvic wolves (or tigers) would be extremely dysfunctional and sick. Kelvics are dependent creatures, not fit to be without a bondmate or leader for too long. Having a pack of wolf Kelvics would be similar to having a group of dependent people starting a society. Where is the leader?

7) There is no war between wolves and tigers. Beside the aforementioned fact that Kelvics don't have the mental or emotional capacity to be leaders and independent, tigers are solitary predators. So even if they were just normal tigers, they would not band together for a war.

8 ) It would be prudent to note that in the wilderness, there is nobody to dye your hair silver, and nobody to make you a leather trench coat with knee high boots, or daggers. Please specify how exactly your character acquired these (unnecessary for a Kelvic) items? Something as simple as a few trips to a nearby city would be acceptable.

Here are several other links you will need to read,
Starting Package
Lore Front Page
Skills (You will need these before you begin)
Rules (Just to be sure)


Thank you for your compliance.

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