[Note by Nemesis] Zeva Loza

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Zeva Loza

Postby Zeva Loza on June 25th, 2014, 7:04 pm

Zeva Loza


Appearance

Race: Cat Kelvic
Gender: Female
Age: 2 in cat years, 25 in human
Birthday: 5th,Summer 489 AV
Birthplace: Wildlands

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Zeva is a cat kelvic, meaning she has various physical traits of a cat. Her hair is a bright orange colour, as is her eyes. She has slightly orange skin, which many mistake for tan. She is very skinny and likes to wear the bare minimum for two reasons. One, to show off her body and two, for quick morphing.

Character Concept

Zeva believes that everyone has a reason to die. Whether it's because they are unfaithful to their significant other or because they leave litter on the straight, they are responsible. Zeva will not kill until she has found her reason. She is very impulse driven. If she thinks someone is doing something wrong, in her eyes, she will find out exactly what it is and then kill them. She is a devout follower of Krysus and prays to her every day, following her every word.

Character History

Being a Kelvic, Zeva was seperated from her family at a young age. She was found by two Krysus devotees. They raised her in the way of the rogue, teaching her everything she needed to know about worshiping Krysus and everything they knew about killing. They lived for a good number of years until they both became ill. On their death bed, they gave Zeva the knife they used for their first kill and made her promise to carry on their work, a promise she has kept to this day.

Language

Fluent Language: Common, Cat

Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Weapon: Dagger 26 SP 26 Competent
Reimancy (air) 10 SP 10 Novice
Stealth 14 SP 14 SP Competent
Unarmed Combat 10 RB 10 Novice


Lores

Lore of Krysus
Lore of ethical killing (in Zeva's eyes)

Possessions

1 Set of Clothing
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Cloak or Coat
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Wood)
-Brush (Wood)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
100 Gold Mizas

Heirloom: Dagger

Housing

Location: Ravok

House: An average sized, single room apartment with a bed, table, a couple chairs, wardrobe, and complimentary chamber pot.

Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM


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Zeva Loza

Postby Nemesis on August 11th, 2014, 9:05 am

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Moderator Intervention


Greetings! I'm Nemesis, Ravok's Assistant Storyteller. I've noticed a few errors on your Character Sheet which need to be corrected before you can continue to post IC in the forums.

  • The Lore of "Ethical killing" is too broad, nor is it even really a Lore. Please change this to something more appropriate.
  • Where, exactly, did Zeva learn Reimancy? That is a painful initiation and isn't a magic that someone just stumbles upon. Especially a two year old kelvic. Either explain or remove this.
  • Are you sure that Zeva appears to be 25? I thought domestic cats lived about 18 years, so would age at roughly 6-8 years for every real year, making her appear around 12-16.

When you have changed what I have asked you to, please send meq a PM and I will verify your CS. Thank you.

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