[Note by Factorum] Soterios Bylikos

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Soterios Bylikos

Postby Soterios Bylikos on July 19th, 2016, 4:53 am

Soterios Bylikos

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Appearance

Race: Human
Gender: Male
Age: 29 Years
Birthday: 11th of Spring 487 AV
Birthplace: The stories conflict.

Appearance: Soterios has spent his entire life making sure that he looks as well-groomed and alluring as possible. With nicely tanned skin, ink black hair that always seems to be in place, and a toned body, Soterios is considered very attractive. His eyes are a dark olive green, and his beard is trimmed enough to just show on his jaw and chin. Standing at five feet and eleven inches tall, Soterios is easily noticeable and in his mind, that’s a good thing.

Character Concept

The only thing Soterios loves more than himself is inflating others’ opinions of him. He is arrogant, he is sensual, and he doesn’t care who knows it. He is not unkind, but he doesn’t care about politeness and would much prefer a direct and concise approach to an issue rather than beating around the bush. He is lavish and prone to festivity, preferring sins of the flesh to those of the more ethereal natures. With no preferences about his sexuality, Soterios lives for the heat of the moment, whether it be a fiery passionate night or a slow-burning lust.

He does not trust easily, but is not so jaded to reject advances from others. He has no qualms about accepting the generosity of others, be it their food, their home or their beds. He chooses to befriend those who are more wealthy, or more commonly, with attractive daughters. It never hurts to know the right people, that’s for sure.

Character History

When he was born, Soterios was rather large. It was said that he tore something on the way out, and his mother could not conceive after him. As such, she adored him, doting on him as much as she could in the post-Valterrian landscape. She coddled him, hoping to make him dependent on her. Instead, she just fueled his desire to go out, to experience things. And when she died, well… His father wasn’t going to start paying him any attention.

But Sunberth. Oh, Sunberth. It afforded him all the possibilities of a man of his stature. So he set out, with only his natural endowments to keep him company. Well, and the beds of many a maiden. But he doesn’t kiss and tell… He just kisses. A lot.

Language

Fluent Language: Common
Basic Language: Fratava
Poor Language: Vani

Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Socialization 15 SP 15 Novice
Flirting 10 SP 10 Novice
Cooking 10 SP 10 Novice
Seduction 15RB. 15SP 30 Competent


Lores

[Science Lore] Human Anatomy
[Culture Lore] Sunberthan Culture

Possessions

1 Set of Clothing
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Coat
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Wood)
-Brush (Wood)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week's worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
100 Gold Mizas

Heirloom: A small bracelet made of interweaving iron links. Decently heavy, but not annoyingly so.

Housing

Location: Sunset Quarter, Sunberth

House: A shoddy, rundown lean-to of a shack. Not at all what one would expect from Soterios, but it is a place to lay his head… When he’s not laying it in someone else’s home.


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Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM


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Soterios Bylikos

Postby Factorum on July 29th, 2016, 12:08 am

There are some issues with the character sheet that need correction and attention.

1. You have to list a birthplace. Even if your character doesn’t know what it is, you must list a birthplace.
2. History: most women tear somewhat when giving birth to a baby. It takes more than that for the inability to conceive a child or to go barren after the birth of a child. You may want to just leave as: after giving birth, mother wasn’t able to have any other children.
3. Languages: You need to explain how you know Fratava basic and Vani, poor.
4. Human Anatomy is a Medicine Lore not a science lore. You have No Medicine skill to back up the lore. You may want to opt for Human physiology which might have been what you was trying to go for.
5. Heirloom.. iron rusts.. you might wnt it to be steel or silver even copper. It would still be under 50gm limit. Just a thought.
6. Housing: You may want to review housing packages as to proper housing for your character. http://www.mizahar.com/lore/Starting_package#Housing

Please PM me when you have corrected these measures or have questions for the intervention. Thank you.
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