[Note by Astator] Drakon Rockheart Coglias

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Drakon Rockheart Coglias

Postby Drakon on August 9th, 2016, 6:54 pm

Drakon Rockheart Coglias


Appearance

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Race: Isur
Gender: Male
Age: 35
Birthday: Season of Spring, Day 19, 481
Birthplace: Mountains of Kalea

Appearance:
The usual short and stocky Isur. Drakon's left arm hues a bright green to match his bright silvery veins. Besides his inhertial features, Drakon holds short dark brown hair that never peeks over his eyes and his often held up or to the side by a sticky substance. His eyes are a dark green that contrasts his arm and light skin tone. Standing at a slightly taller then average of 5'2, Drakon weighs about 275lbs of dense bones, flesh and muscle. Often covered in black soot of a forge where he creates weapons of war and battle for himself he does his best to keep to the standard of hygene.

Character Concept

Drakon is a war machine, lean and mean. However behind his brutish tactics and hot headed nature he holds compassion and a usual method to his madness. Trusting and capable to hold loyalties when earned, Drakon would be a vaulable warrior to have in any battle. Growing bored easily, he will constantly challenge others to a brawl or duel in the street in hopes authorities attempt to end teh conflict so things could really become fun.

Character History

Being born in the mountains, he was raised around his fellow kin. Learned their trades and most importantly, fought beside them and when his mouth became to big, against them. Being from the Coglias clan he was infatuated with war, battle and the likes. His left arm a green hue to further back his combat prowress. Born in a small household filled with family, he was constantly beaten and picked on by older siblings with good intentions. However their good intentions caused Drakon to grow angry and distrusting of 'family' and after reaching puberty he isolated himself from them and took it upon himself to train. He eventually grew to pommel his oldest brother in a duel, however taking it to far in the duel to the point of threatening his brothers life, he decided it would be best for him to leave for the safety of his family. So from there he set off to open a small smithy somewhere crowded and make a modest life to which he would then make a name for himself. He has plans to return home eventually, but until then he will focus on honing his skills and pleasing his god.

Language

Fluent Language: Isurian
Basic Language: Common
Poor Language:

Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Weaponsmith 5 SP 10 Novice
Weapon: Longsword 30 SP 30 Competent
Blacksmithing 15 SP 20 Novice
Bodybuilding 10 RB 10 Novice


Lores

Running and maintain a forge
Ores and Metals

Possessions

1 Set of Clothing
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Cloak or Coat
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Wood)
-Brush (Wood)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week's worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
100 Gold Mizas

Heirloom: At a young age, Drakon with help of one of the elder blacksmiths created a longsword that will be his for life until he passes it on to his oldest child.

Housing

Location: Currently traveling

House: 1 large tent (4 person), large tarp, 100 ft of rope, flint & steel, lantern, 2 torches, bedroll, blanket, fishing tackle & hooks, a compass, a riding horse, a full set of tack, and a large set of saddlebags


Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM


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Drakon Rockheart Coglias

Postby Emergence on August 22nd, 2016, 4:26 pm

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Hello Drakon! I am here to help advise you in the corrections needed to make your CS playable.

  • Although it is fine to be a 35 year old Isur, please know that he has not yet reached adulthood as this is defined at 40-50 years of age within the Isur. Therefore his arm would not be as dense as it would be for an adult and still at risk for injury or scratches.
  • You cannot be born in the "Mountain of Kalea" this assumes you were born in the wild. Please change this to Sultros as that fits your backstory.
  • Your skills have a lot of issues. Also under your Weaponsmithing skill you say you have 5SP but then total it to 10. Obviously this is incorrect. Please double check you skills and fix the issues. Remember you are allowed 50SP in any skill (5 minimum, 30 max)
  • Since you chose to substitute your Racial Bonus of balcksmithing to that of a different one according to your family, you must have Lore of Basic Blacksmithing Techniques as one of your starting lores.
  • In your possessions you say you own "a cloak or coat" please pick one and delete the other.
  • Although it is fine to take the horse housing starting package please note that you do not have to skills to live in the wilds and therefore cannot start out travelling as you would not survive. Please choose a city to start in. Even novice wilderness survivalists cannot live in the wilds for more than 7 days.

Once you have fixed these issues please PM me and I will review your CS one more time to double check everything is correct. Then I will give you your green checkmark!
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