[Note by Astator] Dyala'mas

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Dyala'mas

Postby Dyala'mas on August 15th, 2016, 7:55 pm

Dyala'Mas


Appearance

Race: Akalak
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Birthday: Spring 23 497AV.
Birthplace: Riverfall.

Appearance:
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Height: 6'2"
Weight: 200lb.
Eye colour: Crystaline blue.
Skin Colour: An almost black red.
Hair Colour: Black.

Character Concept

Dyala'mas is a kind young man. Reserved in some ways, he can be boisterous when overjoyed. He is a deeply caring person, but he is young and idyllic. He can easily be manipulated if tricked into thinking what he is doing is right, and he does not question his Elders.


Character History

Dyala'mas's birth was something of a spectacle. His mother, La'Marah, appeared in Riverfall quite suddenly, a small waifish woman, her stomach heavy with child, and promptly dove into the Suvan Sea. Many watched in wonder as she would dive deep and then pop back up to the surface chewing on a fish or seaweed. This went on for one full day before she allowed herself back upon the shores of Riverfall.

As a Konti, there was much speculation and excitement as to why she was there, but she did not divulge this information and, rather, asked for a man named Dysmas.

Dysmas, a gem crafter, met with her and was startled to find her in the possession of his son's Lakan. It was clear this woman has saved his son and now was seeking aid from him. He took her in with open arms.

For three days she stayed in his home, ate with him, swam for fish, but told him little of how she came to be in the state she was in. It wasn't until the birth of her son did he realize why she was there.

In the light of a soft spring morning, Dysmas held his first grandson in his arms, reveling in how the child had inherited his son's ruddy dark skin and La'marah's pale blue eyes.

For the next ten years, La'marah stayed in Riverfall to help raise her son with Dysmas. The two formed a strong bond as Dyala'mas grew, though the subject of his father never was brought up between the two. Why?

Dysmas's son was of the Cerulean.

But they kept this from Dyala'mas.

On the summer of his 10th year, Dyala'mas said goodbye to his mother. La'marah had to seek out her calling and felt sure her son would be in good hands with his grandfather. Before her departure she left her son a simple necklace made of string and a shell pendant that shimmered the same colors as her beautiful scales.

Dysmas watched his grandson grow, shared the joy of his first hunt when the boy became 15, but worry plagued what should have been a celebration. Dyala'mas's 'dark' brother had not shown his face, even after the boy announced his wish to become a Physician.

Now 19, Dyala'mas has been training for the last four years in the healing arts with some of the Konti women in Riverfall, but still lacks knowlege of his 'darker brother'. Dysmas fears this may lead to an imbalance in his grandson and that he may loose yet another son to The Cerulean cult.

Language

Fluent Language: Tukant
Basic Language: Common.
Poor Language: Kontinese.


Skills
(TBA)
Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Medicine 20 20 Novice
Herbilism 15 15 Novice
Weapon: Longbow 15 15 Novice
Unarmed Combat1010Novice



Lores

Lore of Riverfall Layout
Lore of Religion: Rak'keli

Possessions

1 Set of Clothing (Colorful)
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Cloak or Coat
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Bone)
-Brush (Bone)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
100 Gold Mizas

Heirloom: Seashell necklace.

Housing

Location: Windswept Condos

House: [Sketch to be added]



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Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM


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Dyala'mas

Postby Emergence on August 22nd, 2016, 7:03 pm

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Hey Dyala'mas! I am here to advise you on the corrections required to make your CS playable.

  • Your sketch of Dyala'mas is too large. Please scale it down. If you need help, let me know I can easily do it for you.
  • You must label all skills as either RB (racial bonus) as an Akalak you get +10RB in Unarmed Combat. SP (starting package) all of your other skill points at this time would be classified as this. Or XP (earned experience) these would be the skills you earn from threads, you have none of these now.
  • Although being a 19 year old Akalak is fine, I should warn you, you are very very young in the eyes of the Akalak. To other races except perhaps the Konti, you may look full grown. But the Akalak will treat you like a child. You are not sexually mature either and so sexual relationships will also be difficult to attain. Please remember this when roleplaying.
  • In your possessions you state you have a 'cloak or coat' please pick one and remove the other.

Once you have corrected these issues, let me know and I will double check your CS before approving it.
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