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A city floating in the center of a lake, Ravok is a place of dark beauty, romance and culture. Behind it all though is the presence of Rhysol, God of Evil and Betrayal. The city is controlled by The Black Sun, a religious organization devoted to Rhysol. [Lore]

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[Azure Reflections] Pale Thread Tapestry

Postby Hwyn on April 19th, 2017, 1:03 pm

Here be grades


Morphing 2
Philosophy 1
Observation 1
Autistics 1
Negotiation 2
Sewing 1

Auristics, The Aura of A Nuit is… odd.
Morphing, the right part for the right task
Sewing Using a spool for thread.
Azure, ignorant and impatient
“The Weaver”
Socialization, Who needs names

Socialization 3
Observation 3
Negotiation 2
Hypnotism 1
Weaving 1

Evarista, has a Supply of Unique Silk
Negotiation, Making people wait
Azure, ignorant and impatient
Evarista, interesting in weaving
Socialization, Who needs names

It's always fun to see different personalities clash and such, this thread while short and sweet was quite interesting, as always Eva you come up with unique solutions to problem i didn't think existed. Minnim you certainly showed an interesting personality and used some good descriptions in your writing, my favorite being. "His black tongue found the unhealed split in his lip, toying with it habitually as he smiled." It's nothing huge but I think little details like that really make reading worthwhile.

Anyways please pm if you feel i've missed anything.

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