A little help if you don't mind ^^;

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A little help if you don't mind ^^;

Postby Osh on June 19th, 2017, 6:37 pm

Hello anyone who happens to read this.

Yesterday was when I started building up my character and, hopefully, I've written down all of the information that I may need for him. However, I would like to know if there's anything missing or anything I should edit in order to integrate into Mizahar better. Please let me know if you have any suggestions. Thank you :D

Osh

Species: Kelvic (Scarlet Tanager)

Gender: Male

Age: 3 years old

Date of birth: Spring, 3/23/514 AV

Place of Birth: Southern Taldera

Occupation: None

Sexuality: To be determined based on bond

Background (Pre-Creation): All of his life, Osh has resided in the southern forests of Taldera. He was allowed away from the care of his parents at four months where he flew off on his own. By using the survival skills taught to him by his parents, he has been able to survive most of his life in the wilderness.

Concerning family in his background, Osh has never honestly felt a very deep attachment to his parents or siblings. He does still think about them occasionally but hasn't had any sort of contact with them since they were released from the care of their parents.

Description (Pre-Creation): The physical trait that connects Osh back to his animal-form is his bright red hair like the plumage of the Scarlet Tanager along with the black streaks around the edges that are reminescent of his black wings and tail. He usually has his hair braided in order to keep it out of the way when he's climbing or gathering food. However, recently he has learned to tie it back in dreadlocks and makeshift string from watching a band of travellers. From his tree climbing in order to watch and scout from the treetops, he has developed broad shoulders and muscles especially in his arms and legs. He will most of the time wear a few layers of furs and pelts but will other times remain nude as he finds clothing to be a nusciance.

Concerning humans, Osh has little interaction with humans aside from watching them from the treetops in order to satisfy his curiosity. Yet, this is also because he, despite the want for a bondmate, becomes nervous and anxious when on the same level as a human. This has caused him to be quite lonely behind his cold and quiet exterior. Additionally, because he has remained unbonded way past the time he has reached sexual maturity, the feeling is only increased. It can be lessened when he is in his animal form around other scarlet tanagers like himself.


Lifespan: Up to 10 years or so

Skill Set:
Climbing (6)
Wilderness Survival (7)
Land Navigation (6)
Dagger (6)
Scavenge (5)
Observation (5)
Hunting (5)
Running (5)
Sewing (5)

Starting Items: (note that some of these objects were taken from camps where people either died or abandoned it)
1 pair of worn trousers (grey)
1 simple shirt (brown)
1 pair of furred boots (grey)
1 cloak (brown)
1 pair of simple undergarments
10 arrows
1 bow
A satchel which contains:
-Berries
-Herbs
-1 telescope
-1 comb of bone
-Sewing needle and thread (string is made of the inner bark of trees)
Flint & Steel
3 daggers of bone
1 carving knife of bone
1 Waterskin
2 Blankets
1 hammer stone
2 wooden spears
1 carved pipe
100 gold Mizas


Lore:
Lore of the Way of the Dagger (Dagger)
Lore of the Observation of the Human Species (Observation)

Languages:
Fluent: Tanager-speak
Fluent: Common
Basic: Vani
Poor: Kontines
Last edited by Osh on June 20th, 2017, 9:17 pm, edited 5 times in total.
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Postby Gossamer on June 19th, 2017, 7:18 pm

Looks good to me! We don't allow extra characters in names though. So talk to me about Os and I'll see what can be done namewise.
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Postby Osh on June 19th, 2017, 9:01 pm

Gossamer wrote:Looks good to me! We don't allow extra characters in names though. So talk to me about Os and I'll see what can be done namewise.


Sorry, but could you explain what you mean by extra characters? If you mean his relationships, it just talks about people from his past. They won't necessarily show up or anything. Sorry about the mix up.
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Postby Prophet on June 19th, 2017, 9:07 pm

Starting skills can have no less than 5XP. Other than that, everything looks good.

She's referring to your underscore.
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Postby Osh on June 19th, 2017, 9:10 pm

Prophet wrote:Starting skills can have no less than 5XP. Other than that, everything looks good.

She's referring to your underscore.


I wasn't allowed to use that name unless there were three letters, so I just put an underscore. However, should I just change that or something?
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Postby Osh on June 19th, 2017, 9:33 pm

Os_ wrote:
Prophet wrote:Starting skills can have no less than 5XP. Other than that, everything looks good.

She's referring to your underscore.


I wasn't allowed to use that name unless there were three letters, so I just put an underscore. However, should I just change that or something?


Actually, nevermind. I'll just add a silent "h" to his name.
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