Sporian, from the houses of Alexus

[Sporian]

Sporian, from the houses of Alexus Picture to be found Basic Information Race: Benshira Birthday & Age: 25, 495 AV: 21 years of age Gender: Male Languages common: Fluent Shiber: Basic Fratava: Poor Physical Description Sporian is a normal build, for the lands of Sylria. His tall stature and long, brown hair kind of made him stick out a little, but not that much. His deep green eyes could charm the roughest of hearts, if he ever made eye contact. His skin is in between the general paleness of humans and the tan of Benshira. Character History Pre-Creation – As a child, Sporian was kidnapped from his family by Svefran pirates and taken to Sylrias, where he was sold to a family. He lived right next to a library, where he spent most of his time. Little Sporian never wanted to play with the other kids because he knew he was different. On his 21st birthday, he was told the truth- and immediately took a ship to Yahebah. Post Creation Training (Skills, Arcana, Gnosis, Lore) 25- Archeology ( with +15 racial bonus) 10- Writing 5- Geology 10- Unarmed Combat Equipment and Possessions 1 set of (Sylrian) clothes 1 waterskin 1 backpack which contains: -1 set of toiletries -food for a week -1 eating knife -Flint and Steel Heirloom: bronze marked ring 100 GM 1 tent pack Ledger 100GM Thread List

[Ghost]

Liaison Intervention

Hello!

I’m Ghost, and I’m a Character Sheet Liaison. I’m here to help others with their Character Sheets and the Lore. I have found a few issues with your Character Sheet.

There is no such thing as the „Lands of Sylria“. There is only the Sylira Region and the city of Syliras.

You mention that your PC is tall. It would help if you wrote how tall exactly it is.

Furthermore you state that his skin is between the paleness of humans and the tan of Benshira. Benshira are humans as well! They are just a human subrace.

If his skin is paler, he’s likely not a full Benshira, but a mixture of different kinds of humans (his race would thus be „Human, Mixed“). So either adjust his skin color or his race

You wrote that he was kidnapped by Svefra and taken to Syliras. Benshira live in the desert. Svefra are nomads of the Suvan Sea. They live in two different parts of Mizahar, and thus such an abduction would be very unlikely!

The Racial Bonus for Benshira is +10 points to one skill, not +15 points.

You are allowed to start with 60 skill points (the usual 50 and the bonus). You currently only have 50.

You haven’t picked any lores. You may pick two.

A „tent pack“ is not part of the starting package. Please remove it or spend some of your starting money to buy one.

Please also explain what the “House of Alexus” is.

Send me a PM when you have editted your Character Sheet, and I’ll remove this intervention. Have fun in Mizahar and don’t hesitate to PM me if anything is still unclear or you have questions.