Salnsa Drannessu

[Salnsa]

Salnsa Drannessu

Physical Description Secret : Name: Salnsa Drannessu Race: Symenestra Age: Twenty-Four Birthday: Spring 12th; 488AV Character Concept Secret : Aura:Salnsa has a dark and frighting aura; Infants cry around her and people keep their distance. If you could read auras hers would scream - Death, Sadism and Gorey traditions. Secret : Personality:Salnsa is a gloomy and sadistic woman however if you would ask her she would say "I am a woman of simple and elegant tastes." The truth however is none other than the lest that pain and blood binds life and community. Secret : Physical Description: Salnsa stands at 5'7 Weighs 134lbs has long silver hair, pale skin, golden eyes and dread black lips. Her hair falls down her back and along her sides with some of it covering her face in a gloomy way that also covers a noticeable scar above her eyebrow. History Character History Secret : Birth: Salnsa was born into the world killing her mother, instinctively. it was by far a very gory and gruesome birth, the blood paved the floors and her father smiled at the sight as her web considers a gruesome birth a blessing. That she will always be a true Symenestra. A Elegant killer. Secret : Infant Years: Salnsa was pampered and treated like a little princess of the web never ending the celebration of her birth. The Drannessu web always followed strange traditions consisting of death and blood but their religion remains the same as any other. A strange and complex that you would have to be born or adopted at a very young age into the web. Secret : Toddler Years - Teachings: At the age of Three she started her study of the web history and beliefs along with her brothers and sisters. Her study's started with the small semi-circle and being taught religion, Aside from her teachings she would play games with her brothers and sisters both blood related and adoptive. Secret : Five to Eight: She advanced in her study's at the age of five proving to be intelligent as she was sophisticated, taking a separate class being taught by the matriarch of the web. When she turned six her brother shoved her into the wall which broke and slit her forehead causing a scar to form she ran to her room and remained there for the rest of the day. When she was eight the web tasked her with a quest: She had to bring back a female human before the harvest, a task that would be near impossible for her age, but it was one she had to complete and so she left and went on this task not returning for some time. Secret : Ten-Sixteen: It was only until the age of Ten when she started actually doing this task but it was hard, her appearance told people to kill her now and she was too young to be able to actually take someone alive - The task would be much easier to just kill someone regardless the task was to bring back a human female just before the time of harvest. The hunt carried on until she turned sixteen when she had found the prefect prey - A alchemist picking herbs.. Alone and only a few weeks before the harvest she walked towards the woman slowly. Crouching down and picking up the biggest rock she could find, walking closer to the woman she stepped on a twig alerting the alchemist she lunged at her with the rock and struck her against the head knocking her out and binding her. Secret : Task Complete - Twenty Three: Salnsa brought the woman back just before a harvest the web congratulated her and the woman was used during the harvest and kept a prisoner in their very home. When the time came and the woman was going into labor Salnsa watched every bit of it and witnessing the birth of her Half-Sister Nanusa(NAH-NU-SA) Salnsa got along with her unlike the rest of the web as they considered the child as a thing that walks around their home and not a member of the Drannessu web. As the years pass by Nanusa is now Three years old and Salnsa is watching over her as a motherly figure but times change.. The Drannessu web no longer has any wealth and its traditions are now considered barbaric most web members are now dead only few remain including Nanusa, Salnsa, The Webs Matriarch and one of Salnsa's brothers. Soyasa The Matriarch old and weak passes the webs heirloom to Salnsa. Family: Soyasa Drannessu - The Matriarch. Status: Alive. Nanusa Drannessu - Half Sister. Status: Alive. Dracu Drannessu - Brother. Status: Alive. Rakos Drannessu - Father. Status: Dead. Possessions 1 Set of Clothing -Black Silk Pants -White Silk Shirt -Grey cloak -Exoskeleton Armor Shirt -Leather Shoes 1 Waterskin 1 Silken Knapsack which contains: -Bone Comb -Bone Brush -Soap -Fruit Rations (1 Week's worth) -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel Heirloom: Ceremonial Dagger. Worth: 45 Mizas 100 Gold Mizas Housing: Small House in Kalinor Ledger 100 Gold Mizas - 512 AV (Starting) Skills, Lores, Magics, Gnosis, Languages (Starting Package) Dagger: 12 Tracking: 15 Poison-Venom-Lotus: 17 Weaving: 6 (Staring package-End) (Racial Skill) Acrobatics: 10 Practiced Languages: Symenos Common Fluent Language: Symenos Basic Language: Common Poor Language: Kontinese Lores: Lore of Symenestra Culture Lore of Religion: Viratas Thread List

[Ghost]

Liaison Intervention

Hello!

I’m Ghost, and I’m a Character Sheet Liaison. I’m here to help others with their Character Sheets and the Lore. There are a few issues with your Character Sheet:

1) You describe her aura. Why is she so frightening? Why is she gloomy and sadistic? She mostly seems like a slightly mad and brutal Symenestra to me, but there is nothing about her description that I find frightening.

2) Why does she have black lips? Symenestra don’t have black lips!

3) You described her birth. Women that give birth to a Symenestra child die because the venom melts their internal organs. There is blood, but I think that the blood paved the floors is a bit exaggerated.

4) You mention that she was taught by her Web. Symenestra children are not taught by their Webs. They go to school.

5) No sane Symenestra would make an eight year old girl bring a human to Kalinor. Trust me, if that became public knowlegde, people would complain and it would have consequences for her Web! Symenestra usually go on a Harvest when they are adults.

6) You mention that the human she targetted was an alchemist who picked herbs. This is just a minor issue, but in Mizahar alchemy isn’t really picking herbs and mixing potions. That’s more like herbalism.

7) Why does she have adoptive siblings? How and why were they adopted?

8 “Poison-Venom Lotus” is not a skill. The skill is simply called “Poison”. And you cannot know Lotus poisons as a Novice.

9) Why the distinction between practiced languages and other languages? If she knows Kontinese, she must have practiced it as well at one point. Please just list your languages the usual way.

10) Why did you put everything into spoilers? Your CS would be much easier to read if it just contained normal text!


Send me a PM when you have editted your Character Sheet, and I’ll remove this intervention. Have fun in Mizahar and don’t hesitate to PM me if anything is still unclear or you have questions.