Calyra Flair

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Calyra Flair

Postby Calyra on April 15th, 2012, 3:14 am

Calyra Flair



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Basic Information

Race: Kelvic, Caracal
Birthday & Age : Summer 5th, 510 AV. Two years old ( Looks like 18-20)
Gender: Female.

Languages

Language 1: Common. Fluent
Language 2: Pavi. Basic
Language 3: Tukant. Poor

Physical Description
Calyra is about 167cm tall and weights 57kg. She has long, curly and blonde hair with two black stripes on the back, and she always keeps her hair on a ponytail. She also has large, multicolored and vertically split eyes. She looks harmless and nice, but can be a real pain if wants to. Rather short as she is, she usually stand on her toes. It may look stupid when she walks, but it's just normal for her. Calyra has a pretty long neck and a round face. This makes her look younger than she is, but she doesn't mind.
In her Kelvic form, she is about 75cm in lenght from tail to nose. Her tail is about 25cm of the whole length. She has large back ears with a tassel on each. Her fur is the color of wet sand, and her belly is sandy white. From her eyes to the end of the muzzle, she has two dark lines, protecting from the sun.

Character Concept
Calyra is really nice and helpful, just as a Kelvic shall be. She is also a wandering soul, and likes to wander off. Thought she stays close to safe places. She is pretty shy and is afraid to talk to other people. She got a bad habit trying to catch small moving things. When she talks, the talks loudly and clearly, and sometimes when it comes to help people, she gets venturesome. She gets pretty nervous easily, because she isn't used to big crowds.

Character History
Calyra was born in Riverfall and lived along her parents for a little time. She learned a big deal from her parents, and finally left. She thought that the streets of the new world would welcome her. But what did she get? A slave-seller kidnapped her and sold her to a rich old man. She got transferred to some weird, hot land (Eyktol) She was young when this happened, and eventually, she had to serve the old man for a year. The last year, she started to get out more often. Being herself, the caracal. She hunted and really didn't care for the human anymore, but one day she came back. The man was furious, and hit Calyra straight in the face. Of course, sensitive as she was, the started to cry. She ran away, and tried to hide from the world, but the great wide world was dangerous. She was terrified. She was chased and hurt. She Lived on her own. Learned to survive in the wildness and found her way back to Riverfall, but badly injured and bloody. All what happened on her journey back, she keeps for herself.

When she was treated and healthy again, she made a goal to get to Denval, but decided to stay in Riverfall for a while. She's a traveler, so you never know where you're gonna see her.

Housing: None, apparently.

Training (Skills, Arcana, Gnosis, Lore)
Skills:
Acrobatics 10
Camouflage 10
Climbing 10
Hunting 10
Wilderness surviving 10 (Plains)
Running 10

Lore of the Jackals
Lore of hunting in the plains of Cyphrus.

Equipment and Possessions
Set of Clothing (Colorful)
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Cloak/coat
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb
-Brush
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
-100 Mizas
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Location: Riverfall.
Race: Kelvic
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Calyra Flair

Postby Ghost on April 19th, 2012, 5:39 pm

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Liaison Intervention
Hello!

I’m Ghost, and I’m a Character Sheet Liaison. I’m here to help others with their Character Sheets and the Lore. There are a few things you need to fix:

1) Your birthdate is wrong. We currently have Spring, 512 AV in Mizahar. So if you want her to be 2 years old, her birthdate needs to be in Spring, 510 AV or earlier.

2) In your history you mentioned the “streets of the new world”. I’m afraid that there are not a lot of streets in Mizahar. Outside the cities is mostly dangerous wilderness.

3) I also find it strange that the old man would just let her run around and hunt. If she were my Kelvic slave, I would put a collar around her neck so that she couldn’t shapeshift and make sure she couldn’t escape.

4) Where does the lore of the Jackals come from? When did she have contact with jackals?

5) If you start without a house, you can add another 500 gm to your ledger.

6) You can also have a heirloom if you want. That can be any animal or item that is worth up to 50 gm.

Send me a PM when you have editted your Character Sheet, and I’ll remove this intervention. Have fun in Mizahar and don’t hesitate to PM me if you have questions.


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