Riveztali

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Riveztali

Postby Riveztali on April 16th, 2012, 6:19 am

Name= Riveztali (Revitalize)

Nickname= Res

Physical Information=
-height: 5'8”
-weight:97 pounds
-skin color: Soft, almost ashy caramel
-eye color: Hazel (light amber-brown, honey, olive green, bright Caribbean sea blue)
-Tail color: Bright red patches on black, almost like a koi fish, with a prominent patch shaped like a desert rose.
-hair color: Ebony, silky and smooth, it curls slightly on humid days
-Wings: Scarlet with black inner frames, speckled with large honey flakes shaped like roses, blue outer dots can be seen at night in the moonlight.
-Scar: The left wing has healed over scar That travels from the top tip to almost the back(right above the shoulder blade)
-Tattoo: On her right arm she has a black tattoo that's swirls and weaving lines almost seem to move.

Race= Akvatari

Birthday= She was told it was on the warmest day of the year, when the skies burned and the clouds fled.

Age= Around 21

Gender= female

Character Concept=
-Personality: Slightly reclusive, Res likes to speak poetically when the occasion falls upon her. She is very curious and often uses nature as her frame of reference since she feels it is closely associated with art. Sometimes, she gets lost in its wonder, trapped in the isolation. Although Res is frank, since she hasn't had much experience with people, most of the time she confuses people with her excessive descriptions developed from spending a majority of the day pursuing the arts and relaxing in her garden. Her moods are hard to follow and can change drastically, but she is usually poignant, lonely, and melancholic. She must find something interesting about a person to converse with them, but when she does she is intensely intrigued and will make an effort to get to know the person. When she is mad she tries to compromise with the problem, but if it cannot be fixed she tends to ignore it and disappear for extensive periods of time. Res enjoys studying new things, especially if they are art related.
-Ethics: She does not approve of violence, but can understand it as a form of art which is the only reason she has delved into the topic. She attempts to relate everything to the arts and is therefore a hard neutral; however, if there is little she connects with the arts, she feels disgusted with the action, good or bad and violently rejects it or is simply disinterested (depending on the zeal of the character performing the action). She goes into a rage when a masterpiece is destroyed by anyone other than the owner (even then she greatly questions the destruction of the piece).
-Likes: She enjoys gardening, painting, sculpting, daydreaming, alchemy, observing her surroundings, and anything else she deems sufficiently connected to art; although, she especially appreciates the art of paper marbling. She likes studying and eating sweets or new foods. Occasionally, when she is especially lonely, she will sing songs in her garden.
-Dislikes: She intensely fears the Myrian and despises art vandals. She has little tolerance for people who show no interest in the arts and gets irritated with them if they prevent her from creating her art pieces. She does not really like landing since she still finds that her formerly injured wing jerks unpleasantly and swimming for long periods of time bothers her since she rarely did so when she was young.
-Addictions: Res is addicted to work, sometimes forgetting to eat for almost an entire week, making her weaker than she should be and causing her to gorge when she does remember to eat.

Character History=
-Pre-Creation: She was abandoned as a young child by her parents (although she found she did not care much) and was raised by a human sculptor and fisherman that lived among the Akvatari, his curiosity rubbed off onto her as he taught her his skills and she studied art obsessively with his influence. He was not exactly kind, but not mean either, instead, like the rest of her peers, he was very quiet and solitary. She never felt closely attached to him; although, she vaguely recalls his peppered hair, thin limbs, and concentrated frown when she considers what a family is. The most fascinating thing about him, to Res, was his immense garden which he taught her about on a daily basis. Around the age of fourteen she left without warning, following a wandering Myrian who had come to barter, simply because of his intricate tattoo. At the docks she was nearly killed by him, her wing severely damaged and was saved by a passing male Akvatari who had helped her formerly with the art of paper marbling and considered her "sufficiently talented." She made a full recovery but couldn't thank her savior since she had been in a coma for a majority of the healing process and he had virtually disappeared. Res never felt compelled to return home, instead trekking out a living of her own.

Training & Skill Points:
Fishing:5+
Paper Marbling:15+ (racial bonus=25?)
Sculpting:10+
botany: 15+
alchemy: 5+

Lore=
Mixing/creating inks
Growing/tending gardens

Equipment/Possessions=
-1 Set of Clothing (cloak/coat & footwear included)
-1 Waterskin
-1 Backpack which contains:
~1 Set of Toiletries (comb- A heirloom given to her by her "father," it is a beautifully crafted piece, made of a mysterious material, depicting realistic flowers covered in dew, it was made based on her saviors art piece and reminds Res of the major events that impacted her art, brush, razor, soap)
-Food for a week
-1 eating knife
-1Flint & Steel

Ledger=100 gold mizas
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Riveztali

Postby Ghost on April 20th, 2012, 5:11 pm

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Liaison Intervention
Hello!

I’m Ghost, and I’m a Character Sheet Liaison. I’m here to help others with their Character Sheets and the Lore. There are a few things you need to fix:

1) You need a real birthdate.

2) “Paper Marbling” is not a skill. Please pick a skill from the skill list.

3) The Racial Bonus is +10 points to either Drawing, Painting or sculpting.

4) “Growing/tending gardens” is not a lore. There is already a skill called “Gardening” that is pretty much about that. So please pick a different lore.

5) You don’t seem to have any languages. You are allowed to have three, one at fluent, one at basic and one at poor.

6) You also don’t seem to own a house. If you start without a house, you can add an additional 500 gm to your ledger.

Send me a PM when you have editted your Character Sheet, and I’ll remove this intervention. Have fun in Mizahar and don’t hesitate to PM me if you have questions.


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