Don
LORE
- The Waiting Game
- Making a Good First Impression
- An Avavali Familiar
EXPERIENCE
| Skill | XP Earned |
| Observation | 2 |
| Rhetoric | 2 |
| Storytelling | 1 |
| Running | 1 |
| Acrobatics | 1 |
| Unarmed Combat | 2 |
| Intimidation | 1 |
| Tactics | 1 |
Andresciel
LORE
- Friendly Interrogation
- Don’s Knightly Reason
- Recon Via Familiar
EXPERIENCE
| Skill | XP Earned |
| Rhetoric | 2 |
| Familiary | 3 |
| Interrogation | 1 |
| Running | 1 |
| Reimancy | 2 |
| Unarmed Combat | 2 |
| Tactics | 1 |
Storyteller Notes
Secret :
Alright, I liked what I saw for the most part. My only real comment is ensuring you play to your current ‘character sheet’ skill level Don. As of me grading this thread, you had 1 point in Unarmed Combat. Now of course you’re fighting typical commoners, so it’s not like they’re prize fighters, but recognize how sloppy your technique might be at this stage in the game. Don’t be afraid to take a hit here and there, or miss completely. You’ve got the armor and the equipment, but the finesse and the accuracy is going to take time to build up when it comes to Unarmed Combat. Andresciel, for instance, had 30 in Unarmed Combat as of this thread, so it makes sense for him to completely overwhelm your typical townsfolk. He’s a highly trained fist-fighter in that respect.
Worry not though, your writing is great and I’m sure you’ll do fine in the future.
Worry not though, your writing is great and I’m sure you’ll do fine in the future.
