Faval listened quietly and attentively as the man lectured him on the merits of never underestimating your opponent and basing too much on preconceived notions and assumptions. It was sound advice, but Faval had answered his first test in such a spectacular fashion that he couldn’t help but succumb to a sense of arrogant smugness. It was to be expected and while wrong, it wasn’t completely unforgivable. Faval was rarely right or impressive with anything and now that he was getting even sideways praise for one of his endeavors brought a whole cadre of arrogance that he didn’t know he was capable of before. He couldn’t help but feel the need to show off some more.
As his teacher announced the next segment of their more practical training, Faval dropped down in to a ready stance as well; however his was slightly more defensive than his educator’s. Faval’s right arm rose straight up along his centerline, positioned neatly ahead of him and covering the center of his body quite nicely. The boy’s left arm extended out a little lower than his right and off to the side, the left hand positioned behind the right. The boy’s knees were bent only slightly, his toes pointed in and his weight on left, rear leg. As the strikes came flying it, Faval reacted just as he had practiced a thousand times. With a quick flick of his wrist, Faval’s right hand chopped in to the wrist of the first strike, deflecting it quite wide of his body. As the second punch came in, Faval’s right leg dropped back slightly, the weight falling to it as his left hand exchanged places with his right, intercepting the next attack at the wrist and diverting it away. Faval generally repeated this process for the rest of the flurry, diverting some, completely stepping out of the way of others, all the while keeping the center of his body directly perpendicular to his opponent. Then he saw it, the opening. To throw a stronger punch, you needed to cock the fist back farther to unleash it. The second he saw his opponent’s fist cock back far enough to deliver a powerful blow, Faval snapped to the offensive. As his opponent’s fist started moving forward, Faval ‘s front leg darted forward and far to his opponent’s side, his front knee bending forward heavily and dropping his whole center of gravity very low. Dragging his body with the step, Faval caused the man’s powerful strike to whiff completely. With most of his weight on his front foot, Faval drove up on it and threw his fist up toward his opponent’s jaw, putting his whole body’s force behind the punch.
Unfortunately, Faval was too busy trying to watch the man’s hands that he didn’t notice the kick until it was far too late. Having not dragged his trailing foot in quickly enough, a result of his novice level of skill, Bone’s foot collided with Faval’s shin as he was punching, causing the boy’s leg to flail out and throw off his balance. He had gotten enough upward momentum that if the punch hit, it would smart rather badly, but having his leg kicked out had thrown off his balance enough that the fist would only barely catch Bones’s chin as Faval was flailing away and it wouldn’t be too hard to simply lean backward and let it miss him entirely. Faval, having too much forward and upward momentum from what should have been a decisive strike, hit the ground and rolled in a tumbling heap for a few feet before rolling to painful stop in the dirt. He had gotten too carried away going for the strong shot to his opponent’s jaw and he was paying for it. Faval slowly pushed his palms against the hard ground, dragging himself to his knees and then his feet. It was apparent on his face that he wasn’t happy with himself.
“Didn’t expect the unexpected…”
EditAdded a line break between the last paragraph and the dialogue, it was bugging me.