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[Harlequill]

Weighing in... XP Awarded Character: Emory Ruin Experience: [See comments] Lore: The Golden Dragon, Dangers of Drunken Men, Layout of Syliras (poor) Character: Kamrynn Sleightyr Experience: 2xp Unarmed Combat Lore: The Golden Dragon, Possible Drawbacks of Magic, Picking Your Battles Comments: I would have liked to award Emory xp for her magic, but it was used improperly. Remember that reimancy utilizes Res, you cannot merely manipulate your element on a whim. Also, there is no personal magic which is capable of healing wounds. That type of 'magic' is granted by the gods, as Gnosis. A few other quick notes: There is no University of Magic. Though there are many places where you could have learned magic, the faction you mentioned doesn't exist. Remember that though this is a benevolent dictatorship, it is a dictatorship ruled by the knights. The gentlemen who assaulted Kamrynn would have been dealt with very harshly once other guards arrived (though had you continued the thread that might have happened, just wanted to remind ya.) You both wrote well and I enjoyed reading it. It was easy and pleasant to read, so please don't be discouraged by my comments!