Ethiel

[Ethiel]

Ethiel Generally Race: Kelvic Gender: Male Age: 1 1/2 (actually around 17) Birthdate: summer 511, 23th day. Birthplace: Taldera Languages Fluent language: Common, Wolf Basic language: Common Poor language: Practically every language that's not common Appearance: Ethiel is small for his age, with brown hair and grey eyes. He has a large scar running across his arm where his dad cut it when he was around 1 month (4 years) old. He has a slightly pale skin. He always wears a necklace with an amulet, which was given to him by his mother just before she died. Character Concept People are easily fooled by his small, weak apperance. He lived on the streets as long as he can remember, so he has learned a lot of survival skills and he can fight really well. He doesn't trust people easily but if he's your friend, then he's really kind and loyal. He defends his friends with his life. He can change into a brown colored wolf. He is 5'8" and weighs 124 pounds. Character History He was born around 511 AV, in The Spires. His father and mother were both wolf Kelvics. His father physically abused him and his mother. He left numerous scars, including the large scar on Ethiels arm caused by a dagger. When he was 2/3 months (around 8 years) both his father killed his mother, and left Ethiel behind. Ethiel decided to leave his house behind and went into the wild. He taught himself everything there was about survival and fighting. Skill EXP Total Proficiency Hunting 10 RB 10 Novice Intellicence 15 SP 20 Novice Wilderness survival 15 SP 20 Novice Running 10 SP 10 Novice Possessions 1 Set of Clothing -Simple Shirt -Simple Pants -Simple Undergarments -Simple Cloak or Coat -Simple Boots 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: -Comb (Wood) -Brush (Wood) -Soap -Razor -Food for one week -One eating knife -Flint and steel 100 Gold Mizas Heirloom: A necklace with an amulet that once was his mother's. She gave it to Ethiel before she died. Housing Location: The Spires House: - Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 GM 100 GM

[Astator]

Intervention! Ethiel Hello! I am Decorum , the Assistant Storyteller for Ravok, I happened to be reading some of the CSes and I saw yours that caught my attention. First of I like the character! Great work on the CS as well! There are just a few things you need to fix in order for your character to be approved for use! Just follow the tabs below and once you have fixed what needs to be fixed, PM me and I will remove this Intervention!   Birthdate and Birth Location Your PC may not know their birthdate or place, but we need it listed. Please pick a date. Remember we use Seasons here so: Summer, Winter, Fall, or Spring. All seasons have 91 days, Winter has 92 total days.   Languages You lack your character's starting languages. Please remember you get one Fluent, one Basic, and one Poor language.   Skills You need to make note of what your points came from and fix their placement in the table Examples Skills Exp Total Proficiency Auristics 15 SP, 72 XP 87 Master Seduction 18 SP, 3 XP 21 Novice Glassworking 10 RB, 12 SP, 35 XP 57 Expert Intelligence 5 SP 5 Novice Sewing 13 XP 13 Novice Weapon: Javelin 1 XP 1 Novice Acrobatics 85 XP 85 Master SP = Starting Points RB = Racial Bonus Points XP = Earned Experience Points Example 2: Auristics: 87/100 (15 SP) Seduction: 21/100 (18 SP) Glassworking: 57/100 (10 RB) (12 SP) Intelligence: 5/100 (5 SP) Sewing: 13/100 Weapon, Javelin: 1/100 Acrobatics: 85/100 Notice how the Starting Points, Racial Bonus Points, and Earned Experience Points are all notated differently. This allows Storytellers and other staff to review your Character Sheet more accurately, and ensure that everything is accurate and up to date. Also, Shipmaking isn't a valid skill currently, if you feel that it should be please, by all means request it via the Help Desk with a valid explanation and they will direct you from there... Until then, please head over this this link: Skills List and pick something from there for your Racial Bonus Skill... Remember it is +10 to any skill. And according to the Svefra Lore, they commonly use Swimming or Sailing.[/spoiler] Questions or Concerns : Please, any questions or concerns about my intervention. Please PM me!