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A run in the morning, only Serrif feels like he is being watched...for one reason or another.

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Postby Serrif Von Chatlyn on December 1st, 2012, 3:16 am

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Was this bird really egging him on? Could this be true? He passed her and for a few seconds he felt accomplished. He bathed in it for a moment. Who said birds were faster than people anyway? He ran, ran to try and keep his lead. But his body was running out of fuel…wuickly. He had pushed hard just like every other morning before now. Every single morning pushing harder for faster times to the stick that marked where he felt he needed to be. And once he reached the time he wanted he would put the stick out further and then time himself to that one. His legs burned, just as they always did. His lungs were on fire breathing the cool air. It felt like an intruder to him burning away at his innards as his body screamed for relief. That would come eventually when he reached that stick…which was the half way point in his little adventure.

Where had his ghost gone. He had affectionately referred to the bird as a ghost in his mind. The bird was white, quiet and seemed to just come and go as it pleased, but for now it was fixed on him for an odd reason. Maybe it found him as interesting as he found it. Yes that had to be it…and just like that his lead was lost. Completely as his silent competitor flew on ahead. It seemed to know where he was going. This was clear by how it had aligned itself with his trail. It was plainly visible in the sand before him. Like a big marked trail that the bird doubtlessly saw. Almost with predatory instincts the bird stalked that line and flew on up ahead.

There was no way he could push himself any harder than this…he couldn’t without really really making himself uncomfortable. And he still needed some energy to get back to the sanctuary in one piece. If he pushed much harder he wouldn’t be able to keep himself upward much less make any kind of effort back. SO he resolved to just trying to limit the distance between him and that ghost who was now soaring ahead of him. Seemed he underestimated the bird…the ghost. It had indeed taken the lead and was going to keep it, plainly without contest. He would be the loser in this little race. But that was ok with him. Maybe one day he could fly and the bird could run. And they would see who won that little competition.

It didn’t take long for the bird to make it to the stick he had pushed into the sand. And just like his hand the ghost descended and took a landing on it. Gracefully even, he would’ve admired it more if the bird had not won by such a lead. And then taken to gloating of all things. But he was too tired by the time he got there to hold a grudge. No, the ghost had won this fair and square. No way he was going to chastise it for the obvious win. What would be the point anyway?

The ghost cawed and clipped as if to laugh and egg him on. He couldn’t help but think that this motion was somewhat adorable. Especially coming from a bird of whose likes he had never seen before today.

“Yes, you won. Fair and square.” He admitted openly as he laid down on the ground staring up at the sky.

His body had beads of sweat across it and his legs seemed to be weakened from the run. Trembling some in the sand which only made him try and stretch them out to avoid them cramping up all together. That would be unpleasant to say the least. If they stayed in any one position too long they would start to really burn up and get uncomfortable. He winced as exactly that happened, he hated it when his legs cramped. He had indeed pushed himself too hard in the last leg.


“You beautiful ghost. You showed me that it is better to fly than run.” That was odd…the word between you and ghost…it seemed different than all the others. No…it was likely not a word she had heard before. Different...yes another language maybe? He had thrown in a word he wanted to use more. It was Kontinese for beautiful. He found it slightly more endearing than the common word. It flowed easier, was shorter and well when broken on either side by common it stood out more than usual. This would likely prick her interest…but Serrif didn’t know that.

“It is fair to say flying is far quicker than running.” He reflected on just how easily the bird had beat him out of his position. Had it done that on purpose? Now that would be mean, but not completely unlikely.

His body radiated heat which the quick ocean wind whisked away. However the sweat stayed with him. Clinging like little rain droplets to his body. Hanging on until they either evaporated or were blown off his skin. His shirt was sticking too much to his body so he wrestled with it for a few seconds almost like he was too tired to care before he was able to force it off his chest and set it aside. Sweat seemed to collect in his scars, turning them into shimmering pools of a kind. Valleys, brilliantly vivid valleys all over him. But they told a story; maybe Dust knew how one could obtain scars like these? Maybe she had met someone?

“You…we will have to do this again sometime. Maybe you will grant me a fair head start?” He seemed to almost be pleading with the ghost to make things fair…but in all he was glad the bird had come along. It forced him to push his boundaries. And along the way he had learned something new. Not everything was as it appeared.

No he was sure by this birds behavior now that it was indeed Kelvic. But what would it look like in its human form? He couldn’t really imagine all that much. Maybe it had white hair, and eyes much like the ones it had now. Maybe long white hair like a Konti, or maybe short? There were nearly endless possibilities but he would never know until it decided to show him. And in a way he liked the mystery, it gave his mind space to imagine. Space to breathe and just create something. That was if this bird was a Kelvic. He had never seen a bird take a seemingly fascination in him. None of Raiha’s raptors ever had. No those birds wanted to injure him; likely because Raiha had trained them to do so.

But this bird seemingly wanted to play; wanted to do something fun. And wanted to win…then gloat some. Which he did not mind, the bird had worked hard for the victor it obtained. Gloating was well within its rights.

“You….you push me. Maybe one day I will be able to outrun you. But that would take practice.” He closed his eyes and dug his body into the sand some. Knowing well that the bird would not respond with words he laughed. What a sight that would be, a talking bird. Oh now that would be a prize Raiha would be proud to see. Maybe that would put all those raptors she owned to shame.

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Postby Dust on December 2nd, 2012, 12:18 pm

The man flopped down on the sand and gazed upwards at the blue sky above, apparently worn out from the run. Certainly more worn-out than the raven, who remained perched on the stick, cocking her head and watching him lie there in the sand. She would have lost interest quickly with his inactivity and the monologue -- except for the unfamiliar word.

If the raven had had the ears of a mammal, they would have perked up.

She dropped off the stick and landed on the sand behind him, about arm's length distant, with only the barest whisper of air through feathers. Then the Kelvic shifted in a swirl of pale light, likely unnoticed by his eyes, masked as they were by closed lids. The woman knelt there, hands on her knees, leaning forward slightly with interest. "What did you say?" Dust asked, her tone purely curious and not accusatory in the slightest. "I don't know that word!" she added, with the clear subtext that she wanted to learn it.

She then grinned at Serrif, whether he saw it or not; an amiable, cheerful expression. Her pride at winning dissipated with the moment that had sparked it; the Kelvic moved on from it without even noticing. In truth, she didn't really gloat -- that required both dwelling on past victories and demeaning others. "You'd outrun me in this form," she assured Serrif, head bobbing in a nod. "And that's fair, I think!" All even -- one way she wins, the other he would.

Dust looked at the beach around them, its distinct lack of distinguishing features. Unless she counted the stick, which... well, wasn't exactly very distinguished, except for standing upright. "Were you just running for fun?" she asked, sounding both curious and slightly bemused, as if running and fun had never quite been connected in her mind before. Not, at least, in the absence of other games. Flying, on the other hand...
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Postby Limey on March 3rd, 2013, 12:21 am

Serrif

Skill and Lore Rewards
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Running 2 The Feeling Of Eyes On You
Observation 2 A Bird Apart
Endurance 1 Insistent Suspicions
Running Mate
Push Yourself Further, Every Day


Dust

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Observation 3 The Waking Day
Investigation 1 Flight Of Faith
Revealing A New Form


Shared Lore:
The Urge To Get Up and Do Something!
Friendly Competition


Additional Notes :
It's always a shame when these promising stories get so abruptly cut off, but both of you did a great job with what was there. I liked the dichotomy between human and Kelvic, Serrif's suspicions and Dust's playfulness. Nice work, both of you.


Any questions or queries, please PM me.
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