[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Suliss Mwelcaro on June 1st, 2013, 4:00 pm

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[frame2=#800000][color=#FFFFFF][indent]Appearance

Race: Akalak
Gender: male
Age: 19
Birthday: 14th, 1st, 1997.
Starting City: Riverfall
Birthplace: Riverfall

Appearance: blue eyes, dark blonde hair, ruged exterior, 6'2.

Character Concept

Character History

I was born in Riverfall, my farther was a hard ruthless man with great goals and objectives. My mother died when i was 2 so i don't remember her, but my last name was her first name.
My farther loved to train me all the time, teaching me how to hunt, fight and survive in this world, at age 16 he got me to fashion my own blade http://cdn.obsidianportal.com/images/671661/mithrodin.jpg
At age 16, after my Rights of Trial at age 15, i decided to look for a suitable mate and companion for the rest of my life.

Language

Fluent Language: Tukant
Basic Language: common
Poor Language: Nari

Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Skill 1 # SP # Novice
Skill 2 # SP # Novice
Skill 3 # RB, # SP # Competent


Possessions

1 Set of Clothing
-Leather Shirt
-Leather Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Woolen Cloak
-Simple leather Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Wood)
-Brush (Wood)
-Soap
-Razor
-Food is given out daily
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
100 Gold Mizas or 100 Laats
-Obsidian sword
-black braid 5cm

Heirloom: A black braid my grandfarther gave my farther and my farther gave me when i went through my right of passage, it hangs from my hair.

Housing

Location: Riverfall

House: i still live with my farther and grandfather in a 3 bedroom houuse. The housing comes with a hearth and my room comes with a bunk, chest, chair, and small table.

Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM or +100 Laat 100 GM or 100 Laat
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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Banshee on June 1st, 2013, 7:39 pm

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Hello hello!


Godric :
You must post your CS as a New Topic in the CS Forum proper, not this thread. When you do so, ask again, and I'll review it.
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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Peyton on June 2nd, 2013, 11:44 am

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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Banshee on June 2nd, 2013, 10:36 pm

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Peyton :
Your CS has been approved. However, please rename your Bladesmithing skill as Weaponsmithing, so as to fit with the rest of the Lore.
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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Braith on June 3rd, 2013, 12:29 pm

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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Banshee on June 3rd, 2013, 2:37 pm

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Hello hello!


Braith :
Your CS is approved. Also note that you didn't take an Heirloom, while not required, is recommended. Also please copy your CS Link into your Profile under User Control Panel
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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Isabelle on June 3rd, 2013, 2:46 pm

Isabelle's Character Sheet

Please Read, Review, and Approve/Deny. Thanks much! ^.^



I want to give credit to whoever created the Endrykas CS Template found on the CS Templates Thread in the Character Sheets Section!

"Tukant"|Web|"Pavi Speech"|This is Pavi Hand Signals|"This is Common"|This is Thoughts
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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Banshee on June 3rd, 2013, 3:27 pm

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Isabelle :
I posted a Note on your CS.



Banshee's Character Sheet Tip of the Month - June 2013

The Date of Birth (DoB) in your Character Sheet (CS) is required. What isn't required is to list an age. If you are having difficulties with putting down an age, or just get frustrated by it, just put your Date of Birth. This is the current Tip of the Month for it is one of the most common errors I see.
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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Meville Brightshade on June 4th, 2013, 8:10 am

Hello hello! Here's my finished C S!
http://www.mizahar.com/forums/post273597.html#p273597
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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Jupiter on June 4th, 2013, 8:33 am

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Hello everyone! :)

Meville Brightside: :
I approved your CS!



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