Hello hello!
My name is Banshee, and I am here to help you with the daunting task of joining the Mizahar Community. It is my duty to assist you with your Character Sheet, so that you can get to writing quickly and properly.
And I've noticed several things that need addressed in your Character Sheet, that will need to be fixed before you can begin roleplaying here. You will need to read all of the tabs below, make the appropriate changes, then send me a Private Message. When that has all been done, I will remove this Intervention, and you can get back to roleplaying. Have a great day, and I can't wait to see more of your writing soon!
Helpful Links!
Starting Guide - A very helpful guide to getting started here on Mizahar
Starting Package - The basic things all PCs get to have.
Character Sheet Templates - Great examples for helping to build your CS.
CS Help - A thread with many helpful links, as well as a place where you can ask questions on anything you need!
Rules - Things you need to follow while here in Mizahar.
Lores
I noticed that you don't have your 2 Starting Lores. A Lore is a specific piece of knowledge your PC has that cannot be upgraded or expanded upon. This could be like Lore of Fauna of Sylira or Lore of Finding Shelter in the Wilds.
Housing
Even if you take the 500gm Housing Cash In, you still must list where your PC is living, usually this is an Inn or Tavern in the city you're in.
Banshee's Character Sheet Tip of the Month - June 2013
The Date of Birth (DoB) in your Character Sheet (CS) is required. What isn't required is to list an age. If you are having difficulties with putting down an age, or just get frustrated by it, just put your Date of Birth. This is the current Tip of the Month for it is one of the most common errors I see.