Flashback Trapped in the Lake [Delani Denusk]

[Jh'eon]

Jh'eon smiled at the Drykas. "Thank you for your help...I would have been Glassbeak lunch if not for you," he added, grinning. Then the grin was wiped off his face. He sighed and jumped into the water and swam. He felt the water free him again. And he pulled himself up onto the opposite shore. He and the Drykas rode to get the stuff she needed. Meanwhile, Jh'eon was thinking to himself. What were these people going to be like? At least he was going to get in Riverfall - more safely. But he was still contemplating what might and would happen. If anything happened, he trusted this Drykas now. He walked up to the river while waiting for the Drykas and he looked at himself. He was a disgrace to the family. Ole'ah or Dey'eon were probably already dead. He was ashamed of himself. He played around with the water a bit more and then stood up when she was ready. He was ready. Riverfall...here I come...

[Magpie]

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Jh'eon :

XP:
Observation +4
Swimming +3
Wilderness Survival +1

Lores:
Charodae Must Not be Far from Water
Watch for Fishing Nets
Identifying a Drykas
Sometimes Praying is the Best You Can Do
Blabbering can Let Secrets Slip
Sea of Grass: Even More Dangerous than the Stories Say

Additional: I mentioned it in another grade, but please use another font color for when speaking in Char, as the red is difficult to read.

Delani :

XP:
Observation +4
Webbing +1
Weapon: Falx +1
Swimming +3
Leadership +3
Planning +1
Wilderness Survival +1

Lores:
Make Time for Play on a Beautiful Day
Alternate Solution when Under Pressure
Escaping a Glassbeak
Dealing with an Emotional Charoda
A Life Saved - Responsible Thereafter

Additional: The leadership points were for the very take-charge actions Delani took to save Jh'eon. She just has a very leadership-oriented pesonality here. One small note though - it was very confusing at first when you were referring to Delani also as both Delani and Dela. It wasn't until a few posts down that I realized Dela was a nickname and not an incongruous second person hanging around. Though you can of course have nicknames, while in narration, please stick to a single name. On a final note, great job with including a large spread of skills.

Notes :

Very interesting read, a nice, realistic jaunt out into the unfortunately dangerous Sea of Grass. Good luck surviving out there, you two!

If you have any questions or concerns about what was awarded, please don't hesitate to PM me.
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