Completed The Tent Dancer

Who will gain the first bruises? Fallan or Taylani?

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Not found on any map, Endrykas is a large migrating tent city wherein the horseclans of Cyphrus gather to trade and exchange information. [Lore]

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The Tent Dancer

Postby Fallan Windchaser on September 23rd, 2013, 10:19 pm

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"Llex guide me," Fallan whispered softly in Pavi, for he was now reaching the ends of his patience and in no way connected that failing with the wine which now sat and burned in his stomach from the full beaker which he had drained in a single long draught.

Suddenly the tent seemed overly warm and tossing aside the empty beaker he pulled off the shirt which had protected him from the chill of the Fall day outside. Cooler air swirled over his bare chest but he was barely aware of it, for now his breath came faster and heavier.

Her hand drew his attention to the buttons of the dress which he'd been carefully avoiding. Now good sense wavered under the assault of passion and lust and no longer did he muster the strength to reinforce it. He watched her with the eyes of a hunter measuring his prey, the memory of her breast soft in his hand. Her eyes watched his and slowly he smiled, his breathing slowed and deepened. Now, now was the time.

Another prayer for patience whispered from his lips. A hard slap would stun her, though experience told him that it was hard to achieve since it needed complete surprise, else reflex would allow her to attempt a block. Slowly he crept forward on his hands and knees until he knelt before her, keeping her eye with his.

His right arm twitched but he restrained the impulse, though it drained his self control. Memories flooded him of how she moved, overlaying on what he could see, projecting what lay underneath the covering cloth.

He moved his right arm, but slowly to run it along the side of her chin, to slide it along her neck and to lock behind it as he leant in for a kiss. Now his heart beat faster again and drummed in his ears. He nibbled at her lips, his left hand moving her hand away and fumbled at the buttons at the top of her dress, suddenly clumsy yet not so lacking in everyday sense to rip the cloth away for all the desire to do so.

He gave in to reason and used both hands, slowly undoing just a few, enough but not too many. He ran his hands inside the top of the dress and eased it towards her shoulders, his lips still on hers. It was still too tight and so he pulled back a little, his eyes on hers and undid one more button. Now the dress was free enough to just slip over her shoulders. He did not allow it and instead peeled it back so that it rolled back over her arms inside out, leaving it on her upper arms where it hindered her movements and glanced down.

A white shift lay revealed, allowing him glimpses of the petit roundness of her breasts. His breath caught slightly and he caught her body tight around the waist, pulling the trapped dress in tighter, pulling her in closer to him. He kissed the side of her neck, his nose full of her scent.

"Taylani," his voice purred and he kissed her again.
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The Tent Dancer

Postby Taylani on September 23rd, 2013, 11:07 pm

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When he threw back his own beaker of wine, then tossed the leather to the side, Taylani did not take her eyes off him. Her own breathing was becoming a little erratic and a lot unsteady as she watches his eyes, barely making note when he tugs his shirt off. At least not at first, there was something in his eyes that frightened her, that set her blood cold but something else that warmed her as well. Even as he moved closer to her, she shifts backwards, not moving away but leaning away.

It was not until he was so close that she could have reached out and touched his hard chest, to stroke the lean lines that make up his musculature that she broke the stare for just the briefest of minutes. Enough to cast her gaze downwards, to look at his chest, his shoulders and his stomach without hindrance. That was causing too many conflicting feelings within her, so her eyes snapped back up to his, her eyes so wide now that the whites showed all the way round the blues and her breath hitching.

Perhaps the wine was taking affect, for her head spins and felt too hot, and when his hand captured the back of her neck and his lips were on hers, she shyly returned the kiss. As his nipped and teased her lips, her free hand raised, hovered over his chest, not quite touching him not quite daring but simply feeling the warmth his body emitted before dropping back to her lap.

When his hand sweeps hers away from the button, the buzzing in her ears got more intense, and her face felt like it flamed. Even as the buttons were slowly slipped loose, a light red shade begins to spread through her face, down her neck, and when he pulls back, and rolls her dress down to capture her arms against her sides he would be able to see, if he noticed, that the red stopped just at the tops of her breasts. Other then the flush the whiteness of her skin was stark against the sun burned cheeks and arms, and her breathing was so rapid that her breasts threatened to spill out the top of the shift at any time.

Noticing his gaze was indeed directed downward, her hands try to raise to cover herself, only able to bend at the elbows, she awkwardly crossed her arms over herself as best she could, though as he pulls her against him her arms instinctively unfolds, perhaps to fend him back but being so tangled within her dress they did little but cling to his sides, her fingers pressing against his ribs.

The tightness of his hold on her pulls her dress taut, but also the shift, causing it to pull lower, the straps straining lightly, dimpling her shoulders but that was the least of her concerns. Pressed against him, she felt her breasts now barely covered crush once more against his chest, felt his heat searing through the thin undergarment. As his lips find her throat, her head falls against his shoulder, her red hair splaying over his arms, as her body trembles against his.

His voice as he says her name drags across her frayed nerves, both frightening and tempting her fragile reactions. Her own voice, thick with emotion, confusion, unsure of how to sort out all these reactions he is eliciting from her, "Fallan....please.." Whispered across his skin as his lips returned to kissing her. Her arms, mostly useless but she does not struggle against the dress, instead her hands tighten against his sides, seeking mostly to stabilize herself, not trusting him in the least to help keep her upright.

Perhaps it was indeed the wine, but Taylani's fight was not quite over, though it had changed to something else. In her fuzzy mind, there was an almost detached portion, that wasn't really detached as to be unaffected but enough so that she disliked that he was causing all these reactions in her. That same part of her wondered if she could exert some control at least in reactions. Instead of fighting against this, she instead turned her head, and experimentally pressed her own lips to his neck, mimicking his own kisses to her neck, if in a less confident more shy fashion.

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The Tent Dancer

Postby Fallan Windchaser on September 24th, 2013, 12:39 pm

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There was a part of Fallans mind that registered that this was not how he'd been planning this to go. In his haste he had abandoned his plans for her humiliation, to force her slowly strip, one piece of clothing at a time, to then reveal herself to him; to lie there naked, her legs apart and beg him to take her.

He had underestimated how much he had desired her, failed to take account of the way that her breasts lay partly revealed by the shift, of the knowledge that the slightest move and they would become free, of the effect of how restricting her movements had placed her in his power.

Most especially he had underestimated the effect of her lips on his own throat, of the chance that she would not simply remain passive. Desire flooded him, leaving him with thoughts only of her, plans and plots were abandoned and disregarded. Only the knowledge that this was the first time, for her and for them both as a couple stayed with him.

His fingers hooked under the straps of the shift and pushed them off her shoulders. The fingers of his right hand followed down and slipped the fabric free of the breast so that he could feel the newly delicate heat of them against his chest.

"Taylani," He whispered once more and abandoned knowledge of the outside world.
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The Tent Dancer

Postby Taylani on September 24th, 2013, 1:56 pm

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Taylani had no idea what was going on in Fallan's mind, could barely pinpoint her own feelings at this point. She was not adept in reading other's body language, or their expressions. She did not know the effect that her small participation was having on the barbarian that has turned her entire life upside down. She only knows that she was here, in his arms, partially unclad, and the proof of her body's betrayal in the way her nipples were constricted exposed now to the naked eye as his hand pushes aside the last shred of cloth between them.

The straps of her shift now join the folded top of her dress, tangling in her arms close to her sides, irritating and confining. Taylani squirms in his arms, pressed against him trying to dislodge the binding cloth, not because she was in a hurry to be completely rid of the covering garment but so that she could be free to move.

Thanks to the inebriating effects of the wine, she was not drunk but she was certainly loose and more pliable then without. The pleasant buzz in her head being compounded by the raw emotions of the day, and then his assault on her senses. This allows her to shift, drawing her legs beneath her, mindlessly using her training to effortlessly raise to her knees, closing the gap in their height. With foggy blue eyes, heavy lidded but open she searches his face, her lower lip hiding between her straight even teeth.
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In the end, Fallan used Taylani the way a man would use a woman, but not the way a man uses a slave. His desire merging with her reluctant desire went into the evening, with each taking from each other the pleasures of the flesh. Fallan got the proof that Taylani was indeed speaking true, and Taylani made it through her first night bedding a man with little more then soreness of body and a dented but not broken spirit.

After he was spent, Fallan almost gently moves to drag the top of the bed roll down beneath their bodies, then up over, settling Taylani against his body, his arm thrown over her. Taylani does not resist, but does turn in his arms to face away from him. Dry eyed she stares into the tent, trying to ignore the telltale soreness in her body, his heat from his as he dozes, and it was a very long time before her own blue eyes close and she slept.
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The Tent Dancer

Postby Praetorian on October 12th, 2013, 3:18 am

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Rhetoric +4 XP
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  • Improper Thoughts, Pleasure in Slavery
  • Taylani: Age 18, Birthday in Spring
  • A Craving for Taylani's Lips
  • Taylani: This Was Planned by Divinty
  • Note to Self: Don't Compare Taylani to a Horse
  • Taylani's First Lover

Taylani
Observation +3 XP
Rhetoric +4 XP
Seduction +1 XP

  • Salted Tears and Bitter Wine
  • Fallan: Conflicting Emotions to Say the Least
  • First Kiss
  • Note to Self: Try Horse Piss Sometime
  • Prolonging the Inevitable
  • Attraction to Fallan: Twas more than the wine...
  • Fallan... Can I even call him my lover?

Taylani's Condition :
The soreness will linger for a few days. If further... exertion... is attempted within the next 8 hours, her discomfort will increase accordingly.

She was not impregnated this time. You know what they say, though... Try try again! :P


Notes :
I just- o.o *applauds*

Not a lot of points, but this was not a thread meant for training... Eyh? |:)

It takes a great amount of skill to write out "smut" threads and keep them pertinent to the story. I loved the way that you both developed your characters fully throughout the course of events. Please please please please never leave Endrykas? *puppy eyes* I would miss you horribly.

Both of you are so phenomenal! I'm glad you decided to pursue this plot-line.

Fallan, you get kudos for being comfortable with writing an unusual sexual preference. I look forward to seeing how this continues to affect your interactions in the future. :)

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