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Not found on any map, Endrykas is a large migrating tent city wherein the horseclans of Cyphrus gather to trade and exchange information. [Lore]

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Postby Taylani on September 26th, 2013, 2:58 am

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Taylani enjoyed the day out, she enjoyed even learning about the horse, and was happy that she got over her mild fear of the larger beasts. She, on the other hand, was not so certain she was ready to stick her fingers near those teeth. Again, not because she figured Wildfire would purposefully bite her, but those teeth were quite large, and his muzzle was quite long.

But she simply grins, almost grimly and stuck out her hand. Her palm was flat, her fingers splayed backwards so far that they had a slight arch to them. The apple was balanced very precariously in the center of her palm. But her other hand also raised, signaling here, though she didn't think Wildfire would need it. However it meant that her hand was raised and ready to rub the horses head and neck when it bent for the apple.

Her eyes lifted and she gives the other red head a genuine smile. "Thank you Rue."
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Postby Vanari on October 12th, 2013, 6:31 am

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Taylani
Observation +4 XP
Socialization +4 XP
Rhetoric +3 XP

  • The Amethyst Clan: A Busy Morning
  • Tribulations of a New Slave
  • Rue Nightsong: Different Like Me
  • Something Amiss Between Rue and Her Father
  • A Lesson in Pavi: Water, Apple, Follow, Here!
  • Those Crow-begotten Signs
  • Learning to Navigate Tents
  • Wildfire: Rue’s Strider and Partner
  • Rue’s Windmark
  • Horses Aren’t Scary, Just Bigger
  • The Dryka’s Plight: Sympathy Without Mercy

Rue Nightsong
Observation +4 XP
Socialization +4 XP
Rhetoric +3XP
Teaching +3 XP

  • A New Age of Drykas: Making Peace
  • Taylani: A New Friend and Student
  • A Graceful Slave
  • Teaching Pavi and Signs
  • The Way of The Drykas: Explaining to a Foreigner
  • Learning Common: Follow Me!
  • The Frustrations of Language Barriers
  • Putting Differences Aside
  • Wildfire: A Good Teaching Tool
  • A Test of Faith
  • Pride for One’s Strider

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Good job! That was a bitter sweet read, and the various conflicts and moments of cohesion were well executed. I wasn't sure if anything could be counted towards XP in horsemanship, so I gave a buttload of lores to make up for it ^_^

Update: All is good to go!

I'm a newbie and will make mistakes, so please don't hesitate to PM me with questions, comments, or concerns. Thank you for yet another wonderful thread and stay fabulous! Also, please remember to either delete your grade request or edit it as "graded."
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