[Note by Crosspatch] Senkensu

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Senkensu

Postby Senkensu on December 12th, 2013, 12:54 am

Character Name


Appearance

Race: Kelvic
Gender: Male
Age and birthday: day 21, summer, 481AV, 22 years of age.
Starting City: Akuorinomori's casinor "Ever-Flare" in the Suvan Sea
Birthplace: The Suvan Sea

Appearance

Senkensu's body is large and strong, Athletic and graceful. Senkensu's frame is muscled densely from combat training he began as a young man. His long brown hair drapes down over his broad shoulder giving him a fierce and wild appearance. He has a scar over his left eye and only has partial vision with it however his years of training have sharpened his senses enough that he can overcome this weakness. His piercing Blue eyes are unsettling to look at and many people are unable to look him in the eyes for long. In his animal form he is a massive Sperm Whale over sixty feet long and weighting about 55 tons.

Character Concept

He's gifted with an attractive face ,but was cursed with a violent, cold disposition towards races other then Svefra or aquatic Kelvic. He won't hesitate to attack if he believes he would gain the advantage from striking first. He likes to briefly observe his targets before determining how best to handle them be it a calming speech or a swift kill usually the latter. At time's his bondmate's emotions pour over Senkensu making him violent and blood thirsty.

Character History

Senkensu was born into the Svefra society 22 years ago on a vessel known as Imperator Dark, his mother was Svefra and his father a Kelvic. He was born on a boat during a violent storm that was strong enough to threaten to capsize even the mighty Imperator Dark. He was quickly accepted into to pod, he wasn't looked down on for being different and actually praised for it since it made him one of the best swimmers they had. He enjoy his life amongst the Svefra. He had many friend and family there including a half brother Akuorinomori his mother's other son. His bother Akuorinomori is a pure bred Svefra and Senkensu's bondmate. His connection to his brother made life amongst the pod easier since Senkensu could almost predict what was going through Aki's mind. When Aki received his own boat Senkensu moved onto it with him to began there journey across The Suvan Sea.

Language

Fluent Language: Fratava
Basic Language: Char
Poor Language: Common

Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Swimming 20 SP 20 Novice
Unarmed Combat 10 RB 10 Novice
Sailing 10 SP 10 Novice
Reimancy;water 20 SP 20 Novice
Lores
Religion: Zulrav
Religion: Laviku
Possessions
-Flaxen Cloak
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Wood)
-Brush (Wood)
-Soap
-Razor
-Food is given out daily
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
-Heavy Harpoon 50 gm
-Light Harpoon x5 10 gm a piece = 50 gm
Housing
Location: The Suvan Sea
House: Akuorinomori's casino "Ever-Flare"
Ledger
[table2=#800000,#FFFFFF]Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 0 GM


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Senkensu

Postby Crosspatch on December 19th, 2013, 4:52 pm

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Character Sheet Intervention

Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

  • Please link your CS to your profile. This can be done through the user control panel.
  • Please subtract the value of the heavy harpoon and the light harpoon from your ledger.
  • Although I can understand where it was possible to learn both Common and Fravata due to your character's history, I am slightly confused as to where it became possible to learn Char. Not only that, but Kelvics also have a hard time learning more advanced and academic subjects - including languages - when unbonded. This is due to the aging process of Kelvics and their tendency to skip lower levels of education most other sentient creatures receive. Please take this into consideration.
  • Unless you are starting in Nyka, I suggest you remove the "Food is given out daily" and replace it with "1 weeks worth of rations".

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


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