[Issues found by Gossamer] Gilgahaar

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Gilgahaar

Postby Gilgahaar on January 26th, 2014, 12:30 pm

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Gilgahaar

Nickname: Gil
Age: 44
DoB: 75th of Spring, 469AV
PoB: Mura

Residence: Riverfall
Occupation:
Associations: Cerulean

Personality:
With a will stronger than Isurian steel, the dark twin has nearly eradicated all traces of his lighter half, leading to his being barked as Cerulean. Though he is considered the "dark" twin, he is neither evil nor particularly dangerous to the common bistandar. The main "Dark" aspect about the dark twin is his lack of a concious. He enjoys causing pain to those he believes desirve it, which due to a seemingly broken moral compass could mean anyone. He even enjoys his own physical pain.

Though he is subject to the whims of emotions, Gil often wears the mask of indifference to strangers until they take the first measures to crack open his preverbial shell. Once opened, he is very passionate, to the point one might very well mistake him for a light soul; however, he responds harshly to betrayal, often by inflicting pain and drawing blood for penance. Due to the aforementioned lack of moral standards, the definition of betrayal is subject to change.

There are moments though, when the light twin peaks through chinks in the seemingly impervious willpower. And it is not pretty; being subjected to the pain the dark soul enjoys so much coupled with the heart wrenching regret, grief and hatred of himself, the light soul often attempts to end the life of himself and the dark twin permanently. The light side has already learned he cannot beat the dark soul's will to dominate, making those rare moments when that control is weakened to try and end all the suffering he causes and receives.

Gilgahar likes a surprising amount of numerous things for a dark soul. Of course he enjoys his training in various forms of combat, as well as his trade skill of Weaponsmithing. He has a deep passion for charcoal art and heartfelt music. He finds the Ganba particularly pleasing and a good way to vent high emotions.

On the other hand, he dislikes just as much. His first annoyance is bright colors, which in Riverfall is one bad peeve to have. Often, he avoids looking at anyone wearing overly colorful clothing, especially if in pastel shades. He despises the sounds others make when eating and those who see fit to judge him unjustly.

Appearance:
Gil has a half-and-half appearance about him. His entire left side of his body has been tattooed of white design. This stems from the original Cerulean tattoo that dominated half of his face, head and neck. With half of his head shaved, the other half holds long and lush white hair which he often ties into three braids or bundles into a simple tail. For the most part his right side is generally unmarred, though around his ear his skin still shows remnants of the burn. His left brow and ear lobe each possess three piercings while his left nostril and nipple possess one each, all silver.

History:
He was born in the land of his mother; the Konti Isle. He remembers wonderful images all blurred by time and perception. Gil felt cheated at how they left when he appeared - he had done nothing wrong, just simply taught a boy his age not to lie by punching him in the mouth... repeatedly.

During the boat ride to Riverfall, the light twin blamed his darker half. As a result, he tried to make him go away, despite his father's warning. After nearly suppressing the dark twin entirely, it retaliated in full force. By the time they reached Riverfall, Gilgahaar was under the darker brother's control for most of the time.

Over the years, he only solidified his power over the body, further pushing back the weaker, lighter twin soul into the recesses of existence. The things Gilgahaar did under the dark soul's control slowly drove the suppressed lighter soul mad. Mad with pain, mad with grief and regret and sorrow and a burning hate for himself...

He had almost concealed the truth entirely as his will grew stronger. His lighter side had not shown itself in so very long... until the Djed Storm. Even though he was safely inside, when they began to retake their city after the disaster, remnant djed, stress from the event, or both, triggered a sudden change of dominance, leaving the dark side ill while the light side finally managed to break through.

Within moments he was restrained; the light twin's first and only action was the attempt on his own life. He claimed the pain was too great, both self inflicted and inflicted upon others. This outburst is what marked Gilgahar as a Cerulean. For that, the dark twin hated his lighter half. Gil had been lucky; he had almost married. Almost.

With the new status he was forbidden to marry. In shock and anger, his fiancee returned to Mura, and his life in general became an emotional wreck. This left a chink in his impervious armor, one that when hit would allow his suicidal lighter half the opportunity to dominate for only a few moments.

Lores:
Cerulean Psychology; Dominant Darkside
Religion; Ivak

Possessions:
 
Weapons
Chained Rope Dart
Lakan

 
Clothing
Simple pants with strung thighs
Simple mantle (cloak)
Sandals
8 ring piercings

 
Miscellaneous
Comb
Brush
Razor
Soap
Food for a week
Eating knife
Flint & Steel

 
Heirloom
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Gilgahaar's Lakan is a strange thing, being it doubles back on itself so that the blade's base and it's tip are on opposite sides of the hand. The single edged weapon can be used for piercing or slashing as any dagger can, as well as to magnify a punch. The sharp curve of the blade possesses jagged teeth, though not sharp as a serrated blade, that is meant to catch or tear whatever comes into contact with the teeth.

 
Housing
Kuahala Estates Apartment


Ledger
Starter Pack+100gm100gm
Chained Rope Dart-6gm194gm
8 Piercings-16gm 178gm
Gamba-45gm 133gm
Folding Stool-10gm123gm
Simple Gamba Case -11gm 2sm 5gm 111gm 7sm 5gm





Skills:
Gamba26(SP)Competent
Weapon: Chain Rope Dart10(SP)Novice
Weapon: Lakan14(SP)Novice
Unarmed Combat10(RB)Novice
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Gilgahaar

Postby Gilgahaar on January 26th, 2014, 4:20 pm

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General Information :
1. What is your Name?
Gilgahaar
2. Do you go by a nickname or pet name?
Gil
3. How old are you?
Forty-four
4. What is your height?
Seven foot eight
5. What is your weight?
Two hundred ninety pounds


Aesthetics :
1. Describe yourself as you see yourself.
2. Describe yourself as others typically see you.
3. What is your favorite body feature?
4. How physically fit are you?
5. How do you typically dress and what is your style?


Family :
1. Who are your parents and what are they like?
2. Do you have any brothers or sisters?
3. What is your extended family like?
4. Do you consider close friends as important or more/less important than family?
5. Do you treat animals like family?


Location :
1. Where were you born?
2. Where do you live now?
3. If you could live anywhere in Mizahar where would that be?
4. Do you have a favorite place to vacation or spend leisure time?
5. Where do you fear to be?


Traits :
1. Do you have any physical weaknesses (disease, scars, and missing limbs?)
2. Are you right handed or left handed?
3. What languages do you speak? What do you sound like? Do you have an accent?
4. Do you have any odd mannerisms, annoying habits, or other defining characteristics?
5. Do you have (or want to get) any tattoos or piercing? Why do you have them (or will get them) ?


Occupations :
1. What is your occupation?
2. Do you like/dislike your work? Why?
3. If you could be anything you wanted to, what would you be?
4. What occupation do you admire the most? Why?
5. What occupation do you lest like? Why?


Childhood :
1. What sort of child were you?
2. What is your favorite memory from childhood?
3. What is your worst memory from childhood?
4. What sort of relationship did you have with your parents?
5. Who was your most influential rolemodel?


Education :
1. What sort of education do you have?
2. Do you like/dislike learning?
3. Where or how did you learn most of your skills/abilities?
4. How do you learn best?
5. What are your educational goals for the future?


Relationships :
1. Do you form close bonds with people? Why? Why not?
2. Do you trust people easily? If not, why not?
3. Do you consider yourself straight, gay, bi, or something else?
4. Have you ever been kissed? If so, describe the first time.
5. Have you ever had sex? If so, describe the first time.


Drugs and Alcohol :
1. Have you ever been drunk? If so, describe your first time.
2. Do you like to drink on a regular basis?
3. What sort of alcohol do you prefer?
4. Have you ever tried drugs (mood altering substances)? If so, which kinds and what did you think of them?
5. What do you think of drugs and alcohol? Be specific.


Likes and Dislikes :
1. What are your hobbies?
2. Do you like to read?
3. What annoys you more than anything else?
4. What do you find the most relaxing activity to do?
5. What kinds of things embarrass you? Why?


Favorites :
1. What is your favorite color or colors?
2. What is your favorite time of day?
3. What is the most beautiful thing you’ve ever seen?
4. What do you like to eat? What do you hate to eat?
5. What is your favorite type of weather? Does any kind scare you?


Outlook :
1. Are you optimistic or pessimistic?
2. What are your religious views?
3. Would you be able to kill?
4. What are your views on sex?
5. What, in your opinion, makes a successful life?


Actions :
1. What is the worst and best thing you’ve ever done?
2. What is your greatest regret?
3. What is your best/worst memory?
4. If you could change one thing about your past, what would it be and why?
5. What are you the most proud of doing in your life?


Emotions :
1. How honest are you about your thoughts and feelings with others?
2. Do you have any biases or prejudices?
3. What makes you happy?
4. Who or what, if anything, would you die for?
5. What makes you angry?


Relationships :
1. In general, how do you treat others?
2. Who is the most important person in your life, and why?
3. Who is the person you respect the most, and why?
4. Do you have a spouse or significant other? If not, describe an ideal lover.
5. Do you trust anyone to protect you? Who, and why


Group Situations :
1. Do you tend to argue with people, or avoid conflict?
2. Do you tend to take on leadership roles in social situations?
3. Do you like interacting with large groups of people? Why or why not?
4. Do you care what others think of you?
5. What do you think of others, in general?


Self Image :
1. What is your greatest strength as a person?
2. What is your greatest weakness?
3. If you could change one thing about yourself, what would it be?
4. Are you generally introverted or extroverted?
5. Are you generally organized or messy?


Beliefs :
1. What God or Goddess do you find most appealing, if any?
2. Which God or Goddess do you fear, if any?
3. Do you have any Gnosis Marks? If so, how did you receive them?
4. What lengths would you go to to please your deity?
5. Where do you draw the line at pleasing your deity? What is too much?


Life & Death :
1. What do you absolutely live for?
2. What is the best part of life?
3. What is the best part of death?
4. If you could choose, how would you want to die?
5. What is the one thing for which you would most like to be remembered after your death?
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Gilgahaar

Postby Gossamer on January 27th, 2014, 3:57 pm

Moderator Intervention



The Issue(s): Hello there.

While your CS for the most part looks fine, I need to tell you that your history about your dark half eradicating your more stable half cannot possibly be true. Your dark half can be the dominant personality, but your light half has to still exist strong and proper as a person that can come forward and is the constant voice in his head.

Your signature size, in addition, is far too big for Mizahar's parameters. Didn't you notice that? All dimensions are listed under Signature in the wiki.

You can resume posting when these issues are fixed and at that time we will answer any and all HD Tickets and other special requests you might have.


PM Gossamer when you have the above issues corrected and this intervention will be removed.

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