[Note by Crosspatch] Thacken Had

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Thacken Had

Postby Thacken Had on January 23rd, 2014, 8:00 pm

Thacken Had


Appearance
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Race: Human
Gender: Male
Age: 22
Birthday: 8th day of Summer,491AV
Birthplace: Syliras

Appearance:

Thacken stands at a height of 5 foot 11 inches and a weight of 165 pounds. He is quite skinny although work in the fields of his father has given him a small yet somewhat noticeable layer of muscle. He prides himself not by the tone of his body but by his night black hair which he takes from his mothers family. His hair is usually kept at a length that barely covers the tips of his ears. His blue eyes are another trait of his mothers passed on to him. He has a tanned skin from the long summer days in the fields.

Character Concept

Family is the most important thing for Thacken. Along with that comes the respect of his families name and remembering the ancestors that brought his family the land which they now cultivate and farm in order to bring in the funds that keep them alive. To disrespect his ancestors in anyway would mean being ungrateful for all that they did for him. Hardwork was also engrained into Thacken's mind from an early age. "The soil bears what you give it," was a popular saying of his father and laziness was always punished as he grew up. Growing up in a cheerful household made Thacken develope the idea that every being is inherently good natured. This causes Thacken to become too trusting of others and at times form incorrect opinions of others.

Character History

Thacken Had is the second born child of Thoren Had and Lysene Folly Had. The Had household was blessed with two other healthy children. The eldest, Fornost Had, was 26 years of age with a wife and son. Fornost took ownership of the Had's southern plots of land while Thacken was set to take the northen plots as his father grew older and unable to continue work in the fields. His sister, Sasha Had, was an 18 year old woman who had the eye of every eligible bachelor that had seen her. She was radiantly beautiful with the Folly black hair. Thacken's whole life had been spent working the family's fields. On market days he would accompany his fathert and brother, however now it seemed his father never made the venture due to old age, into the city to sell their yield. The Had family had made a name as one of the premier farming families in the city and therefore were much better off financially than many other small famers in the area. The farm kept about 5 or 6 hired hands at a time in order to help with the high yields they often brought in. Thacken, like his brother, was groomed to become a farm owner and all that entailed with the position. With this he learned to keep the books and ledgers, trading skills, animal husbandry, and was also required to pick up a few valuable fighting skills in order to protect from any unwanted persons on the farms. The Had farming household was a proud family and it was up to Thacken to continue the legacy of the family.

Language

Fluent Language: Common
No other languages learned.

Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Farming 15sp 15 Competant
Trading 5sp 5 Novice
Bookkeeping 5sp 5 Novice
Animal Husbandry 5sp 5 Novice
Weapon: Axe 5sp 5 Novice
Weapon: Hunting Bow5sp 5 Novice
Riding: Horse 10sp 10 Competant


Lores

Helpful Lores: (Pick 2)
Lore of Syliran Geography
Lore of Syliran Culture

Possessions

1 Set of Clothing
-Simple white shirt
-Simple black pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple black cloak
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Wood)
-Brush (Wood)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week's worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
100 Gold Mizas

Heirloom: Grandfather's Hunting Bow

Housing

Location: Syliras

House: As a character, please note that your starting package does not include a cottage; instead, it includes a 20x20 apartment with the furniture listed in the Housing section. As it is the cheapest housing available, the apartment is situated deep within the interior of Stormhold Citadel and does not include any windows, only ventilation shaft to bring in fresh air. Each hallway is lined with torches which are kept lit at all hours of the day, allowing for light and giving residents free access to something to light their hearth from. A diagram is included below:

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Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM


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Thacken Had

Postby Crosspatch on January 28th, 2014, 5:49 pm

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Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

  • Please link your CS to your profile. This can be done through the user control panel.
  • You are missing your Racial Bonus. As a normal Human your racial bonus is +15 in any one skill of your choosing.
  • Trading itself is not a skill; it is in fact a collection of skills consisting of persuasion, negotiation, leadership, mathematics and so on.
  • Weapons are more related to what they are; i.e. Short bow, longbow or crossbow. Please take this into consideration.
  • Bookkeeping itself is also covered under the skill Organization.

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


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