[Note by Crosspatch] Vera Snowsong

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Vera Snowsong

Postby Vera Snowsong on June 4th, 2014, 5:47 am

Vera Snowsong


Appearance


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Model: Megan Fox


Race: Vantha
Gender: Female
Age: 19
Birthday: 14th, Spring, 495.
Birthplace: Avanthal

Appearance: Vera is a pretty girl, with long black ringlets that are more often than not, pulled away from her face and highlighted with a slight neon green shine. She stands at 4'11", about 108 pounds. the color of her eyes depends on her mood. In example:

[color=#FFBF00]Gold:
She is happy or content with her current situation.
Ice Teal: She is passionate.
Red: She is enraged.
Blue: She is sad.
Grey: She is detached or indifferent.

Her gaze really is powerful. No matter the mood, it is seen through eyes with a sort of ferocity, both a weakness and a strength.

*Color can change and all depends on the current situation.*

Her skin is tan and she has full pink lips that often sport teeth marks, as she has a nasty habit of chewing on them for almost any reason. If she's uncomfortable, she bites them, if she's upset or angry, she bites them. She really should stop that....

Anyway, her clothing consists mostly of white, not for any particular reason than the fact that she believes she pulls it off well and it offers good camouflage in the icy trees. Her small stature helps with this as well, seeing as she can fit in spaces many can't, which made her a pro at the hide and seek games as a child.

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Character Concept

Vera is an overtly passionate girl who takes everything to extremes. If Vera says her day was boring, then it's quite possibly the end of the world. There is always something that was adventurous or interesting that happens to her, whether true or no. She temperamental and easy to get riled up, while being just as easy to appease. A simple "I'm sorry" can go very far with Vera. Though, nine times out of ten, she will not admit something is her fault, she can go to her grave swearing you are to blame. That is if she's angry enough. It's hard for her to stay mad for a very long time. She can be fighting with you for an hour straight and then, not a second after, she's commenting on the weather or saying she quite rightly adores your top. She is also a real flirt, preferring to tease boys and men shamelessly, only to really leave them hanging because she wants to fall in love rather than be paid for like livestock. What is so adventurous about that? Falling in love? Now that would be an amazing story to tell... Vera loves long walks by herself through the snowy forest, singing for an audience, telling stories loaded with hyperbolas, writing, and socializing. She is devout to her Goddess, but tends to keep it to herself unless telling a story. She wouldn't want anyone else pushing their religions on her, so she would rather not push hers on others.
Vera is an average Vantha girl, who had a rather normal child hood, except, maybe, she's a little more dramatic than normal. Being of the Snowsong Hold, she has a natural talent for singing, writing, story telling, anything artistic, really, but her mother was of the Frostfawn hold, which would explain her companion snow leopard, Hiji, who is always too big for his britches.

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Hiji


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Character History

Vera met Hiji on her third birthday when he was a fresh cub. She had been walking through the forest, which was not really smart on her mother's part to let her three year old daughter wander through the snow covered trees by herself. To be fair, Vera was a sneaky little thing and could slip past anyone's attention, except her father's that is. Her ability to sneak helped her skip out on many useless school classes during her elementary years, but after that, attending was necessary. She learned to weave and crop, as well the favorite stories passed from generation to generation that she enjoyed reliving to her younger siblings.
As Vera grew older, marriage became less of an idea and more of a very real duty, one that she had no intention of fulfilling. Vera believed that marrying the way her race did was not her way. She had no problem with the idea, It just never appealed to her. Too bland, it had no flourish. She wanted someone to come in and sweep her off of her feet, but did not find that someone n the suitors that offered their best snow canines, so, she decided, rather than wait for that man to come, she'd go out and find him. Or, really, make her own story to tell and hope she ran into him on the way. Her mother thinks she's just a hopeless case and keeps pushing it on her, but her father is secretly pleased his daughter has no intention of marrying, hoping she is, indeed, an icemaiden. When men come calling and Vera refuses, her father very much takes this into account and the men are sent on their way, much to the despair of her mother.
Her mother's efforts to marry her daughter off has increased ten fold seeing as she is on her last year before she is considered "hopeless". Vera doesn't' mind.
Vera never really was a proficient fisherman due to falling in as a child. She now has a severe phobia of water that is above her chest. She does, however, enjoy archery as a nice past time. She doesn't really need the skill, but when her brothers were out in the water, her parents sent her to get the furs.
Also, due to her familiarity with the forest and small size, scaling trees and climbing is a rather decent skill she has.
Often, because she had a pretty face, a smooth talk, and good social skills, her father would bring her to the market and teach her the trade. He taught her how to use her assets respectively to get what she desired to a degree. Nothing extravagant, always fair, considering. She had been doing this for years and has been to the very present. She plans, on her twentieth, to go out and explore beyond her city to make an adventure all her own, She had this planned with Hiji since she could remember.

Language

Fluent Language: Vani
Basic Language: Common
Poor Language: Symenos

Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Singing 5 SP 5 Novice
Weaving 2 SP 2 Novice
Storytelling 6 SP 6 Novice
Archery 5 SP 5 Novice
Hiking/Climbing 2 SP 2 Novice
Hunting 5 SP, 15 RB 20 Competent
Riding 5 SP 5 Novice
Haggling 20 SP 20 Competent



Lores

Helpful Lores:
Lore of Avanthal Geography
Lore of Religion: Morwen


Possessions

1 Set of Clothing ,
-Tight White long sleeve shirt, usually unlaced around the collar bone
-Sturdy White Pants that are normally tucked into the boots to be described later.
-Simple Undergarments (yanno)
-Plain white cloak with fur trim that ties with silk woven string, adorning a thick fur trimmed hood, good for keeping the ears warm. (Also family Heirloom)
-Simple White fur boots.
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Bone)
-Brush (Bone)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
100 Gold Mizas

Heirloom:Thick white riding cloak, with fur trim and intricately woven silk ties that keep the cloak secure around the neck.Sports a thick hood, also with fur trim, that is rather toasty and helpful when a snowstorm blows through. Long and drags the ground.

Housing

[b]Location:
Avanthal

House: 1 basic 20x20 Arvinta in a Hold with a hearth, bunk, chest, chair, and small table.

Each Arvinta consists of a communal meeting or sitting room. Then there are private rooms for couples, and a common sleeping/living room for all the children. Visitors are often given a private room, while a couple will move in with the children to make extra room. Some of the larger, more expansive Holds with wealthier families have spare rooms in their Arvinta or special guest quarters when people move from place to place visiting. Holds often have common areas and craft cottages in buildings attached and are always made of solid stone. External buildings are often built from ice and warmed from within by special braziers that conduct heat into the room but do not melt the thick ice walls. A Hold may contain multiple Arvintas and might hold upwards of a couple hundred people.

Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM


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Vera Snowsong

Postby Crosspatch on June 8th, 2014, 7:45 am

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Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

  • At creation, skills are required to have between 5 and 30 skill points in them including the racial bonus.
  • As a Vantha your RB is +10 Carving or Storytelling, not +15 in any one skill of your choice. Please fix this.
  • As a note, Novice skills are 1 to 25, Competent skills are 26 to 50.
  • Is Hiji a personal pet animal - and thus, from an OOC perspective, an inventory article? If so, please find out the value of the creature and subtract the value from your ledger as necessary.
  • "Hiking/Climbing" would be two separate skills - Hiking and Climbing.
  • The skill "Archery" is not a valid skill. Weapon skills specific to what is being used, and are labelled as "Weapon: Weapon name”.
  • Haggling is also not a skill as it is made up of various complementary lores and other skills (such as persuasion).
  • At creation a Vantha can apply for their racial gnosis mark (Ice Reaving) from Morwen at creation. If you wish to gain this please put in a request on the Help desk with a polite note as to why and then link your supplied Storyteller Secret Thread to your profile.

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


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