[Issues found by Kismet] Tyrial

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Tyrial

Postby Tyrial on July 23rd, 2014, 4:37 pm

Tyrial



Physical information

Race: Kelvic
Gender: Male
Age: 4 years
Birthday: 18th Spring 510 AV
Birthplace: Woods of Falyndar
Animal form: Ethereal Jaguar


Physical Appearance:

Tyrial looks like an average human that you could find anywhere in the world. Not many traits can reveal that he is indeed a Kelvic, but those unusual eyes of his draw attention of anyone he meets. To many who are not so well informed about Kelvics, he's just a normal person with beautiful, but weird looking eyes. His hair is fairly normal black with some almost unnoticeable highlights, but there is one thing about it. People could lay their hands in fire convincing you it looks like a constant breeze is caressing it. His face is marked by a scar stretching from his upper lip over his cheek almost meeting his eye. When it comes to body structure you see he does not have massive muscles but that little loss of muscles he compensates with the more than unnatural swiftness, which he has his animal side to thank for.


Character Concept

Tyrial is very introverted, and mostly does not have a good time making friends. The most common reason he is having problems making friends is that he tells people right in the face what's bothering him. Most people think he is very arrogant, maybe he even is. I mean have you ever known someone who admitted to being arrogant. Well that’s the deal with Tyrial. I mean it's not his fault that most people are weird or stupid and he has full right to give his thoughts expression. Tyrial hates to draw too much attention, that’s why he is always trying to either hide his eyes under a cape looking at the ground or averts his eyes when walking past by people. He does know how to live with the attention but he prefers living in the shadows so to say.


Character History

Tyrial's history is pretty much unknown. He does not bother remembering stuff far in the past, or maybe doesn't want to recall some bad memories. Most of his life he spent in the woods of Falyndar. After he heard some humans passing through his hunting grounds he decided not to kill them but follow them to the city called Taloba in which alleys he lurked and tried to satisfy some need which he does not even know how to describe. But cause of the way people acted in Taloba Tyrial knew it wasn't the place for him, so at some point he decided to go back to the wilderness and wander there. But even the woods of Falyndar didn't do the trick for him, that need of his which he wants to satisfy won't leave him, so he decided to try to find another place he would live. Wandering trough the woods he found his way to the Kalea region. The region had something he liked. He was feeling good in the region but his nasty need, whatever it is, drove him back to human area, so he found the city Lhavit.


Lores

Lore: Local Poisonous Flora ( Lhavit )
Lore: Dhani hunting strategy


Language

Fluent Language: Common
Basic Language: Myrian
Poor Language:


Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Stealth 15 SP 15 Novice
Swimming 5 SP 5 Novice
Hunting 10 RB, 10 SP 20 Novice
Wilderness Survival 15 SP 15 Novice
Tracking 5 SP 5 Novice



Possessions

1 Set of Clothing (Colorful)
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Cloak
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Bone)
-Brush (Bone)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
100 Gold Mizas


Housing

Location: Lhavit
House: Standard Solar Wind Apartment.


Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM
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Tyrial

Postby Kismet on August 15th, 2014, 7:27 pm

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Hello Tyrial!

I'm Kismet, Assistant Storyteller of Lhavit. I noticed a few errors in your Character Sheet that need to be fixed before you can continue to post IC:

  • In order to play an ethereal jaguar you need permission from the Help Desk. If you already have permission please make sure to places the link to your SS thread in your profile so that there is easy access to it. If you haven't then please post this request in the HD.
  • The currency system for Lhavit is Kina rather then Miza, please make this adjustment to your ledger it is a 1:1 ratio.
  • Also I noticed you do not have an heirloom, would you like to have one? Please make sure to post it if you wish one. The value must be under 50 Kina.
  • Please make sure to include all the information about his history that you, as the writer, are aware of even if the character is not aware of.

Once you have corrected these things please PM me and I will look over your CS again.

Your Destiny Awaits,
Kismet
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