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In which Alses deals with bureaucratic inertia.

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The Letter of the Law

Postby Alses on July 19th, 2014, 12:15 pm

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Timestamp: 31st Day of Summer, 514 A.V.
Location: The Radiant Tower


Clouds carpeted the city, moving like drifting fog through the streets and sluicing silently over the lower buildings and lesser spires of Lhavit. For all that the usual panorama outside Alses’ broad windows had been replaced with a diorama of a million shades of grey, bland and uninteresting as they melted into one another, the heat was still oppressive.

More than that, the clouds had brought with them a suffocating humidity that seeped through the entire city and sapped everyone and everything of – if not life itself – then certainly their usual joie de vivre. Banners curled listlessly around their pennons instead of snapping and racing merrily, and the luckless Shinya sought what scant relief fountains and overhanging awnings could offer. Everywhere, the doughty citizens of Lhavit were wilting, melting under Syna’s unflinching, inflexible regard and the cloying humidity that made even the smallest of tasks herculean.

Even in the (marginally) cooler elysium of the Radiant Tower there was no escape. Alses was perhaps one of the least affected, the heat not being a concern for her and leaving only humidity as a torment, but there was something about the thickly clinging wetness in the air that made her especially short-tempered and snappish, peevish in the worst possible way.

Her secretary had melted completely, and even Mercadier was showing signs of the strain; he’d discreetly loosened his shirt, for one, and his usually immaculate slicked-back hair was being decidedly unruly as whatever fixative he used began to fail. The heat and the humidity were irritating almost everyone, and minor spats were growing more frequent.

The business of government, therefore, was getting more difficult with every passing tick as the clouds swirled indecisively, never quite plucking up the courage to rain and just holding the water oppressively in the air.

Alses rose abruptly from her chair in a swish of silks, crossing to the window in a few brisk strides, resting first her fingers and then her head against the diamond-leaded glass, enjoying the feel of the fleeting coolness on her skin. Stress couldn’t eat away at her flesh – she filled out her dresses to the voluptuous pre-Valterrian ideal no matter what happened – and nor could it carve deep canyons of worry and concern across her face, but it was still there, all right.

Always young, always beautiful, perfect features and a perfect body, few people wanted to look past that. It was a mask that could hide a multitude of sins and a multiplicity of weaknesses; as Alses herself had once put it: few people looked behind the shine to see the Ethaefal cowering there.

Even if it never, ever showed – at least, not physically – Alses was still finding being Councillor Radiant very hard. There were so many details, so many pies into which her department had its skeletal fingers – skeletal because they were so strapped for staff – and all of them involved dealing with people, unpredictable people, with their own agendas and wants and needs and desires, most of them incompatible – at best.

It was, Alses was beginning to realise, like herding cats. Made all the worse by the fact that her principal subjects were mages of all stripes, almost by definition smarter than the norm and all in command of great forces the likes of which could level cities, if left unchecked and unregulated.

And it was her job, her happy job, to do the regulating.

Syna above,’ she thought – prayed – unhappily. ‘Why did I want to do this, again?

The wicked little voice that she knew to be her own answered, rising above the choral cacophony of internal memories and voices that was every Ethaefal’s lot. ‘Because you thought it would all be parties and cake,’ it gleefully answered. ‘Because you don’t like to bend your head as a supplicant, and because you are an ambitious immortal sorceress with a head full of grand designs that you need power and prestige and money to pull off.’ A pause.

And,’ that little internal voice went on, very much in the spirit of grudging fairness, ‘Because you wanted to do a little something for your city.

None of which helped very much.

Mercadier,” she murmured. At the sound of her voice, the efficient deputy looked askance at her, leaving off his fruitless attempts to secure his hair and endeavouring to appear enthused and immaculate, as per usual. He was only partly successful.

Yes, your grace?

The Amendment. How have our friends in the judiciary and the Ascendant been getting on with our request?
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The Letter of the Law

Postby Alses on July 19th, 2014, 10:50 pm

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Mercadier winced – although he took great care to hide it from Alses’ sight. The woman was seemingly nigh-omniscient wherever her presence extended, the consequence of her powerful auristics and consummate skill in the discipline. That said, the operative word was ‘nigh’, and a few careful enquiries around the Dusk Tower had told him a few of the skill’s limitations, and he was counting on the fact that his feelings shouldn’t have been a priority for his Councillor to keep his own unease from her.

In this instance it didn’t work – not that he had any way to know it – but it gave Alses a little thrill nonetheless when it was brought to her attention by her ever-obliging power, a stray wisp of anticipation and anxiety tickling her roving magic’s sensibilities and causing her to direct a focused burst of greater scrutiny at it, laying her dependable deputy’s feelings and worries bare for her perusal.

It was perhaps telling that Alses didn’t consider it in any way an invasion of his privacy; they were within office hours, after all, working away on matters to do with the betterment of the city, and as such she was perfectly within her rights and expectations. That was how she justified it to herself, anyway.

The Seiza have sent another file for perusal,” he replied, “And a recommendation from our man in the judiciary to brush up on the finer points of our main laws.

In reply, Alses gave a decidedly unregal grunt and gestured peremptorily for the man to hand over file and book both – a handsome volume bound in green leather and stamped with the bold title ‘The Laws and Ordinances of Lhavit’, a relatively slim book that was nonetheless fast becoming the bane of Alses’ life.

As she settled resignedly back into her seat, prepared for another heavy session with the legal minutiae of the judiciary, Mercadier shimmered out as discreetly as he could, wiping perspiration like pearls from his brow as the doors clicked shut behind him, cutting off the nova-like presence of Her Grace the Councillor Radiant.

She’d been pleasant and kind so far – if a little naïve – and it had lulled him, over the days and seasons, into a false sense of security, only to be rudely jolted by the much more fractious, much more demanding woman who’d come to the fore under the pressure of the humidity of recent days. She also wasn’t taking any notice of his tactful little redirections and distractions whenever the gods-cursed Amendment came up, ploughing ahead with her vision with a singleminded determination that he’d admire were it not so potentially damaging.

Zintila appointed me because we will do what is necessary,” she’d said once, with a certain terrifying intensity, when he’d been as bold as he’d dared, those brilliant eyes alight with a frightening internal fire. “Not what will keep us in with the Towers, or what will be easy.” He hadn’t dared push it further; she was a powerful sorceress by everyone's admission but her own, after all.

Oh, not that he didn’t agree with the need for a change, just not so soon. Not now.

Alses, in her plush office, was ignorant of this internal conflict that was so plaguing Mercadier, being focused on her reading. She was also only dimly aware of the tides of internal and external affairs that were washing around the Tower; perhaps it was a weakness of being so high up, physically speaking, that subconsciously she’d begun to think of herself as somehow above the oil-slick tides of the politics of the celestial city.

Even so, it was never a bad idea to get a greater handle on the laws and legalities of Lhavit.

With a practiced hand, Alses riffled through the creamy pages and started to read in earnest.



It is an accepted legal premise in the starry city that ignorance of the law is no defence. As a citizen of Lhavit, with all the rights and privileges that entails, it is your right and responsibility to know and to follow these laws of the land. Further, as a visitor, it is your duty to discover and conform to these statutes, as laid down by the duly constituted authority of the Seiza, under the auspices of Zintila and the diarchy.



To the unpractised eye, it looked a little harsh, particularly on the outsiders and transients that the celestial city sometimes welcomed into its midst, rather at odds with the openness and tolerance that marked the citizenry in general, but Alses could see exactly why it had been done. It would prevent the smiling lunatic spreading their hands amid the carnage and saying: ‘But I didn’t know!’

It also formed the basis of the edict that freed all slaves the instant they passed into Lhavit’s writ, and that in Alses’ book was a very good thing. She’d not yet seen a slaver captain call into the city, so she’d not had a chance to see his face when grim Shinya marched him to the prison underneath the Shinyama Pavilion and still more broke the chains of every slave that he’d carried, but the thought of it still filled her with a certain mean-spirited fierce anticipation.

Resolutely, Alses turned her attention back to the dense legal prose, trying through sheer fore of will to burn it onto her brain. She wasn’t a lawyer of any stripe, not one of the legion of Seiza legal eagles, but learning at least the basics would at least keep her from looking like a total fool. That was the idea, anyway – she only had to hope that the old adage about a little knowledge wouldn’t apply.



Breaking and Entering

To the Seiza judiciary and the government of Lhavit, this phrase has a specific meaning and refers to the following:

Any act including, but not limited to: opening, breaking, incinerating, magically transporting or in any way causing a door, window or other portal that has been magically or mundanely locked - or which a reasonable person would assume to be so restricted - to be passable, and the subsequent act of entering the house, business or public location through said defined portal.

The punishment for this category of crime may be a fine and/or public servitude to be executed under the watchful eye of the Shinya. The fine and public service, or both, or neither, may be lessened with a charge of Attempted Breaking and Entering.

A crime of Attempted Breaking and Entering is defined as any act that a reasonable person would perceive as the preparation for an attempt (whether successful or not, and indeed whether perceived to be successful or not) to bring about the opening, breaking, incinerating, magically transporting or in any way causing a door, window or other portal that has been magically or mundanely locked - or which a reasonable person would assume to be so restricted - to be passable. This charge also includes the subsequent act of preparing or attempting to enter the house, business or public location through said defined portal.

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The Letter of the Law

Postby Alses on July 26th, 2014, 2:58 pm

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Trespassing

In Lhavit, the definition of this crime is as follows: Walking, flying, riding, floating or in any way moving or existing on a property without the explicit written or spoken permission (or permission a reasonable person might infer) of the owner or caretaker of the property in question. The punishment for this crime in some way depends on the property subject to trespass, but in the general sense may carry a fine and a corrective sentence of public servitude, subject to the judgement of the Seiza courts.

It is important to note that for Kelvic residents and Kelvic transients this is applied with some care; allowances must be made for the fundamentally animalistic nature of such beings and as such a careful weighing of the evidence is necessary to assume malice aforethought in this case. Happily, there is a large Kelvic population that has adjusted well to the city and therefore communication, even with a distressed or intimidated Kelvic, can usually be assured and any extenuating circumstances can be filtered through a trusted interlocutor.


Alses looked absently skywards as she digested this. She’d have bet her last kina on Shara, the estimable lupine librarian from Bharani’s hallowed halls, to have had more than her fair share of experience in dealing with this sort of thing; she seemed exactly the sort of person the Seiza – and, to be fair, Alses herself – would pick for the delicate and complex task.

She made a mental note to ask the woman about it – in a general sense – the next time they met, before returning her attention to the fine script of the Laws and Ordinances.

Assault

In the City and its environs, ‘assault’ is defined by the judiciary as any threat or attempt (whether successful or not) to inflict physical, emotional, mental or otherwise magical harm or injury to another person, group of persons or indeed any entity that a reasonable person might assume to be sentient, without just cause.

The sentence for assault in some way depends, at present, on the level of distress and injury suffered by the victim, and usually comprises a fine, compensation to the victim and/or corrective public servitude.

Murder


Any act of premeditated or malicious or premeditated and malicious (or any act that a reasonable person would cause premeditated and malicious or premeditated or malicious) or accidental but criminally intended (or what a reasonable person would call criminally intended) purpose that results directly in the death (or destruction with implied death) of a person, group of persons or entity that a reasonable person might assume to be sentient.

The judiciary looks harshly on cases of murder, and as such the punishments merited by such a crime are severe. Banishment from the city and its environs, if practicable, is the commonest form of punishment recommended by the court, or else execution, subject to the intervention of the Mercy Seat as in all other cases of Lhavitian law. Given the seriousness of the crime and the severity of the punishments, all crimes involving murder are thoroughly reviewed and questioned at every level to ensure that justice is served appropriately.



Alses closed the book with a faint shiver and thought about that, her mind turning inexolerably, as it always did in these situations, to the dead-eyed and accusing stare of Hayani’s severed head, the blank hatred of death glaring out from a beautiful face, cut quick from a beautiful body and all of it poisoned with a strange and insidious madness.

It didn’t make things any better that she and her Okomo Kelvic would have been put to death anyway, had it gone to the courts. The legal system probably added some distance, some surgical remove, some clinical detachment, to the whole messy business of execution. Kneeling in buckets of someone’s lifeblood as it hosed out of their chest, fighting for every breath through a throat near-shut by strangulation, that was practically the antithesis.

It certainly didn’t help with the dreams.



Criminal Conspiracy

Any meeting, communication or encounter with the purpose (or which a reasonable person might assume had the purpose) of preparing or arranging for a crime of any kind (or crimes of any kind) to be committed or caused to be committed. This offence does not require an attempt in furtherance of the deed to occur in order for the offence of Criminal Conspiracy to be committed.

Punishment in terms of fines, public servitude or greater are issued with respect to the magnitude of the proposed crime.

Vagrancy

Any act of idleness, disorder, begging or conduct unbecoming a person with occupation, kina, or a home or any combination thereof. The city and state of Lhavit makes provision for all its citizens through the office of the Cosmos Centre and its staff, and as such there is little to no excuse for vagrancy in the Diamond of Kalea.

There is no formal punishment for the crime of vagrancy, although offenders are picked up by the Shinya and escorted to the Cosmos Centre where productive occupation, housing and – if necessary – further aid and assistance can be rendered by the authorities.

Smuggling

Any act of bringing in, taking out, causing to be brought in or taken out an object considered illegal or, if not illegal per se, requiring the payment of an import or export duty to the City which is not paid in the instance of the goods in question. The punishment for this crime may include a fine and/or public servitude, and will include confiscation of the offensive or illegal item or items. Further charges may also be pressed.

Pickpocketing

Any act of stealing, taking or without explicit written or verbal permission (or what a reasonable person would infer as implied permission) an item or items a person, group of persons or an entity of which a reasonable person might take the assumption of sentience has on his her, its or their own person.

Punishment is generally return of the item or items removed, or an appropriate cash equivalent, coupled with a fine and/or public servitude under the auspices of the Shinya.

Larceny

Any act of stealing, taking, or, without explicit written or verbal permission (or what a reasonable person would infer as implied permission) an item or items from a person, group of persons or indeed entity that a reasonable person might assume to be sentient’s place of residence, business or other location a reasonable person would assume is secured from looting.

An older class of offence, this is most often used by the Seiza to cover property offences without precedent in other areas. Its punishment generally involves restitution plus a fine and/or public servitude, set by the court in accordance with severity.

Slavery

Slavery, or enslavement, is the state or condition of being a slave, a relationship wherein another person has absolute jurisdiction and discretion over the slave’s life, liberty and fortune. Wheresoever Lhavit’s writ holds force and sway, by the sovereign command of Zintila and the Diarchy, slavery cannot exist. Owning, actively acquiring or otherwise possessing and retaining slaves or persons whose condition a reasonable person might equate to enslavement is absolutely forbidden and punished to the maximal extent permissible under law. Further, all such enslaved persons who enter the City or its sphere of influence are automatically and irrevocably deemed to be free and full persons in their own right, both subject to and protected by the same laws as bind and apply to all others.

Trading in slaves is prohibited wheresoever the City’s writ runs, and the standard punishment is that all slave cargoes are to be immediately freed, without exception, that the instruments of their enslavement and the means by which the trader executes his or her business to be seized and sold or destroyed and the proceeds used to fund the freedom of his or her former chattels, and finally that the trader in slaves be banished or executed, at the court’s pleasure.

High Treason

Any act against, whether directly or indirectly, and further any inaction which results in circumstances arising directly or indirectly against the sovereign government of the City; to whit, the Starry Queen Zintila and the diarchy of the Day Lady and Night Lord – resulting or with what a reasonable person would assume to result, in physical, emotional, mental or magical harm or injury to the aforesaid persons.

The punishment for this crime is execution.

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The Letter of the Law

Postby Alses on July 28th, 2014, 2:57 pm

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A lovely point on which to pause, perhaps, but there was no time and still less an appetite for more dry legalese, especially as indispensable Mercadier shimmered into her office, smoothing back his blonde hair with an absent hand even as he gazed in mild puzzlement at a letter of some kind that had evidently just been delivered by one of the Tower’s myriad couriers.

Something for our attention?” she asked quickly, trying to keep the interest out of her voice as she looked up, and failing somewhat. It made Mercadier hide his own smile, with rather more success, even as he flourished the thick envelope at her.

This was delivered to us by a Dusk Tower messenger,” he announced, the whole cast of his features looking faintly puzzled as his manicured fingers turned the creamy paper over and over.

But…” Alses encouraged gently, after a moment of internal struggle where a large part of her simply wanted to shake him and bark a demand for more information. Some of the books she’d read – and the leadership she herself had respected when she’d been one of the legion of underlings – had suggested that bluster and threats weren’t the best way to go about doing things, and Alses agreed with observation, experience and theory in this case.

So, too, did most of the city of Lhavit; it went with a civilised mindset, or seemed to, anyway.

But it’s not what I’d expect from a formal missive from Lord Dusk,” he remarked, “Or even something from your Lady Chiona.” That was undoubtedly true; form and convention held that such things were sent in heavy, ornate boxes, always packaged with a thoughtful little gift as anticipatory thanks for the recipient’s time. Of course, having received such a thing, it was the very height of bad manners, a stain on the escutcheon, almost, to not reply in kind. A tide of small trinkets washed between the upper classes of Lhavit, it seemed, an amusing and absurdly flattering custom.

And therefore worthwhile, especially with outsiders and new residents to the starry city.

We’ll take a look,” she cut across his musings, and he looked up sharply, words of caution leaping to his mouth before he thought better of it. The letter would have been checked by the Shinya several floors below, even before it made it into the hands of the internal courier, and Alses was frighteningly good at spotting the hidden and the obscured and the downright invisible, on occasion.

It would be safe enough; Mercadier proffered it with a short bow and then retired to a polite distance and switched off – the epitome of the perfect civil servant. Always provided you liked your servants as interesting as dust, of course.

Mercadier wasn’t such a one, of course, but he could give a remarkably good impression of it if he chose.

Alses broke the Tower seal with a practiced hand, the letter-opener a sliver of silver light in her fingers, her face slack with the abstraction of thought as she read the first few lines before curving and relaxing into a smile and a trilling laugh. “It’s from Mr. Secretary,” she explained, seeing the flash of silver askance in Mercadier’s aura. “That is, Alexander Mirihar.

Her eyes rapidly shuttled from left to right, temporary laugh-lines creasing the corners of her lips as she did so. “He’s writing with a personal matter, a letter of introduction for someone he feels would fit my requirements,” she explained further, and that was one thing Mercadier liked her for – she didn’t much care for ambiguity and mystique. “Staff for Elysium Hall,” she followed that up with, and a faint jewel-blush around her spectacular cheekbones – and damn all but he wouldn’t have been human if he didn’t appreciate the beauty he worked for – told him she’d seen how her words could be misinterpreted.

Alses earned herself another few points with Mercadier when she promptly set aside the missive and cradled her head on her hands. The darkening of her tawny eyes, that told him he wasn’t going to much like whatever followed, but conscientiously – and conscientiousness had been burned into his soul by the gods when it had formed – he still tallied a few extra lines in her favour on his own internal scoreboard.

We’re done our lessons in the law for today, Mercadier-” and he blanched to hear the silky-sweet tone of annoyance seep oh-so-subtly into her voice “-and now I’d like to hear what progress has been made with the Amendment, if you would?

That was the other thing – where had she learned that politeness could cut like the finest sword, and without the recourse to a block? There was something about her, something indefinable and strange, that shaped things around her. The diarchy had had it too – much stronger than hers, but there was still an echo of it…

Mercadier smoothed back his blonde hair and schooled his thoughts back to the matter at hand. She was his mistress, when all was said and done, he’d do well to remember that. And, perhaps, when all of this was done, she’d pay a little more attention.

The Seiza are dragging their heels,” he said crisply, and his tone brought a sparkle to her eyes – a mutual point of irritation. “They do, unfortunately, have the advantage – they are the judiciary, after all. They have the cases and the precedents and you and I are no lawyers, your grace.

Alses acknowledged this indisputable fact with an indelicate grunt of frustration. “And yet we still cannot see, despite the reams of paper they have sent, why we cannot do what we wish to!” A sigh, and then her voice dropped lower.

Here in this room, Mister Mercadier-” and he could hear the full two syllables sliding into place “-I think we can admit that they have no good reasoned answer, and are trying to bury us.

Mercadier cleared his throat. He’d had lunch with a Seiza priest – a friend of several years – a few days ago, and the discussion had been quite enlightening. “
I would say more that they don’t have an argument you would consider a good one, your grace. For themselves, I believe they think it watertight, or watertight enough to try this.

We couldn’t care less what the Seiza believe,” Alses snapped, and it was a snap this time. Definitely the heat, and the humidity. And, admittedly, the constant sidestepping. Had it been him in the Seiza’s shoes, he’d have sent a competent lawyer to explain certain realities. Reason was, after all, something he’d noticed that his Councillor prided herself in.

Then again, there was the occasional moment…
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The Letter of the Law

Postby Alses on August 1st, 2014, 2:52 pm

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Your grace, you must care!” Mercadier put as much force as he dared into it, a few wisps of blonde hair escaping his careful pomade, and he straightened up as soon as he’d let the sentence slip, two spots of red high on his cheeks and his hand moving in that familiar, unconscious gesture to order everything.

Alses blinked at him for a long moment, brain racing to deal with the sudden outburst. It was rather like being attacked by a sheep – or rather, how Alses imagined such a thing would feel. “
You must care,” he repeated, drawing in a deep breath. She could see how much it had cost him, thick bramble tendrils of poisoned red and black ripping through his aura, tearing with cruel thorns at his usual placidity.

Law is the foundation, your grace. It is the bedrock on which everything else is built. It is the fountain of equality, the source of most everything we hold dear here, and to disregard the law…” he swallowed, face waxy, as Alses’ eyes flashed and she returned fire, furious and not entirely all at him, either.

Fifteen years, Mister Mercadier,” she replied bluntly, wielding the words like hammers. She knew he’d been alive, and an adult, back then – how could she not? A young man, yes, but nonetheless…

Fifteen years. I wasn’t here; we weren’t anywhere, as mortals understand the term – we can’t judge, even if we hear the screams and the rattle of chains in the Opera House, the blood in the warehouses and the crunch of bones on the docks of Port Tranquil. But it seems to me that it happened, at least in part, because things were set aside, loopholes left open because of a fear of precedent, of weakening the Diarchy and Divinity in their absence.” Alses suddenly looked old, and tired, as though something inside her abruptly left – no, changed.

It had been anger, the fury of a thwarted child, implacable and counterproductive. Alses – for all her power and skill and the maturity of her brain – was still sometimes a child, showing all her eight years and no more. That said, she’d learned, along the line, to channel it a bit, to turn it into something more useful. Not all of it; things would be broken or weeds eviscerated later on to let her get the poisonous dregs out of her system, but still. Some was better than none.

It might not have started the spiral, but Syna above did it aid it! Because people were afraid to step up, to change what needed changing, to take a stand and do what was necessary.” Alses and Mercadier stared at one another, both certain of the rightness of their words, a clash of wills sparking invisibly in the air between them.

Mercadier took a deep breath. “
Your grace, I beg you to reconsider and try and find some compromise with the Seiza. If the government becomes the lawbreaker, it breeds contempt for law; it invites every man to become a law unto himself; it invites anarchy!

We’re not going to be breaking the law,” Alses returned.

You are proposing to change the law without consultation, without mandate from the people you’re supposed to represent, your grace. It’s autocratic, at best, and tyrannical at worst – or at least, that is how it will be seen, in some quarters.

We’ll never be able to please everyone,” Alses replied, keeping the heat out of her voice with difficulty. “There are those who like the current status quo – possibly for nefarious reasons – and it’s them we’re trying to control. Of course they’ll cry tyranny, Mercadier!

Nonetheless-

There is no ‘nonetheless’, Mister Mercadier.” Alses’ voice was silky with the soft twang of her patience quietly snapping underpinning it all. “There is no ‘even so’. There is no ‘this is not the right time’ or ‘we don’t have the resources’, either. We are given to understand there is a provision in statute for a legal instrument called an edict? We’ll issue one.

Your grace, this is perhaps not the right way to go about things-” Mercadier flinched back from Alses’ sudden furious glare.

It’s the only way we can see,” she replied. “The Seiza drag their heels and powerful interest groups amongst the mages are opposed – some doubtless as a stance against the new Council and against me.” A sigh. “Will you tell us that the edict against slavery is unlawful?” she asked, voice suddenly smooth. Dangerous.

Mercadier blinked. “
I-

Because many people profited hugely from the trade in flesh,” she continued in a conversational tone, effortlessly surfing her voice over his. “It made millions, you know. So there were people – powerful people – who would doubtless have screamed blue murder about anything that would limit them in their sorry, sordid trade. If it hadn’t been for Aysel and his sharp, sharp blade, of course.

Alses raised an admonishing finger. “And if you try and use that as extenuating circumstances, we shall have no option but to see that as an endorsement for private forces and the rule of the sword. Which we don’t think you’ll do; down that road madness lies. Now, paper and pen? You can help us draft an edict. History in the making, Mercadier, history in the making.
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The Letter of the Law

Postby Alses on August 7th, 2014, 10:07 pm

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Edict #1 of the Council of Radiance


By the executive order of Her Grace the Councillor Radiant of Magic and Foreign Affairs, it is hereby proclaimed to all citizens, transients and other occupants, however brief, of the City of Lhavit and its lawful environs, of all places where the Government of the Diamond of Kalea and the State for which it Acts hold writ:

The following Amendment to the Third Law of the City has been duly proposed and accepted into law, to take effect in its entirety from the date of this proclamation, to whit: the Thirty-Fourth Day of the Summer Season of the Five Hundred and Fourteenth Year After the Valterrian.

Amendment to the Third Law of the City of Lhavit and its Environs


Whereas it has pleased previous generations to satisfy themselves with the Third Law in the following state:

There will be no unlawful use of magic. Failure to register as a Mage is a crime.

It has been determined that, given the diligence and openness that so characterises the great Towers of the City and indeed the independent mages who make their homes amongst the skyglass, the Law in its present configuration inadequately covers the djed-aware population of the city and as such presents a danger to the Shinya and all citizens of the City, whether djed-aware or not.

As such, by the mandate of the Councillor Radiant for Magic and Foreign Affairs, under her own authority, the following addition has been made, such that the Third Law in its entirety now reads:

There will be no unlawful use of magic. Failure to register as a Mage is a crime. Any expansion of magical skill must be reported promptly; failure to keep the records held at the Wizards’ Registry up to date is also a crime.

Further particulars of the change to the law, with detailed reasoning as to why this step has been taken, can be found in the Radiant Tower Archives. It is the earnest hope and expectation of the Councillor Radiant and the Department of Magic and Foreign Affairs that this Amendment will secure the lives of the Shinya protectors against unnecessary loss and will result in a safer city for all who shelter beneath the skyglass.

Alses
Councillor Radiant of Magic and Foreign Affairs



Alses, having finished setting her flourishing, elegant signature to the bottom of the edict? Proclamation? looked expectantly at Mercadier, hovering anxiously nearby. “There.” She blinked at the dense prose for a moment. “D’you not think it’s a little…” again, a pause, as Alses tried to find a tactful way to say it “…dry?

Mercadier blinked. “Dry, your grace?” he echoed, a wry smile twisting his lips for a tick or two. “It’s a government document; hardly the latest comedy. Dryness is really rather par for the course; it eliminates ambiguity and brings clarity, if nothing else.

We’ll have to disagree with you on that point, Mercadier,” Alses sighed, picking up the draft edict. “You and I are highly educated, even by Lhavit’s standards – which are themselves commendable to the last,” she added quickly, because it was true and you never knew who might be listening, even here. “And so with some effort we can tease out the meaning from this. But to your average citizen of the starry city, I’m very much afraid to say that this-” she waved it for emphasis “-will be so much impenetrable rubbish. It’s vital we communicate clearly and effectively with the people, Mercadier, especially when we’re dealing with something so fundamental!”

Mercadier pursed his lips and smoothed back his hair, reassessing – yet again – both Alses and the proclamation she held. She did, indeed, have a point. Taking a considered step back in his mind, peeling away the layers of bureaucratic experience that had accrued over the years, he could see what she was driving at. To him, it was just another document – a potentially explosive and regrettable document, yes, but nonetheless a comprehensible one – but to someone unused to the workings of government and the particular cant of the Seiza judiciary, it would indeed look…daunting, to say the least.

You are, your grace, right on that count,” he admitted gracefully. “Although-” his voice stopped her from crumpling it up “-perhaps we should keep that as official notification. If we sent that one to the Towers, the Bharani Library, the Archives and the diarchy – as a courtesy they get copies of all papers, as you know-” she didn’t “-and draft a simpler one to be promulgated throughout the rest of the city?” He let his voice rise at the end of it, turning it into a question, although both of them knew it wasn’t really one.

There were, after all, appearances to keep up.

Alses pursed her lips and steepled her fingers, leaning back in her plush chair with a sigh and a groan of wood. “Excellent idea, Mercadier…should we also send a copy of the simpler proclamation to the Library and the Archives? For completeness?

Mercadier bowed his agreement and smiled the smile of the good bureaucrat, even though inwardly he was jittery, nervous, unsure of the direction all this was taking them in. The Seiza would not be happy to be pre-empted, and the Towers and the independents would doubtless also be disgruntled, at the least, not to have been consulted. He’d tried his best, really he had, but the Councillor Radiant had proved indefatigable and with an iron will. Mercadier was smart enough to recognize an immovable object, and had taken care to steer himself clear of at least the sharper rocks, lest he – and his career – be dashed at their pinnacle against her.

It took more bells of time to pare back the convoluted proclamation to its bones, to the simple essentials that all citizens needed to understand, but at the last Alses signed off on the distilled essence of it, releasing it from her desk to the small legion of scribes that laboured in the airy reaches of the Tower, whose skilful brushes would replicate it many times before it was posted out all around the city.



Edict #1 of the Council of Radiance

By the executive order of Her Grace the Councillor Radiant of Magic and Foreign Affairs, it is hereby proclaimed to all citizens, transients and other occupants, however brief, of the City of Lhavit and its lawful environs that a change to the laws of the City has been enacted, to take force from this day, the Thirty-Fourth Day of the Summer Season of the Five Hundred and Fourteenth Year After the Valterrian:

The Third Law of Lhavit states: There will be no unlawful use of magic. Failure to register as a Mage is a crime.

This has now been amended to read:

There will be no unlawful use of magic. Failure to register as a Mage is a crime. Any expansion of magical skill must be reported promptly; failure to keep the records held at the Wizards’ Registry up to date is also a crime.

This step has been taken to improve the survival and effectiveness of the Shinya guards in the regrettable event of an overgiving incident, and so to improve the safety and security of all citizens of Lhavit.

Futher information and more extensive documentation can be found in the Radiant Tower Library Archives, fully open to the public, with further copies of all relevant documents filed with the Bharani Library and the Seekers.

Alses
Councillor Radiant of Magic and Foreign Affairs



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The Letter of the Law

Postby Kismet on August 16th, 2014, 2:35 pm

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This was an amazing read. I love the play between Alses and Mercadier and how it's seems like a constant give and take between them. Keep it up! I love this amendment to the third law as well and look forward to reading more from you. Please update or delete your post in the grade request thread to show this thread as completed. :D



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