[Issues found by Crosspatch] SilverLotus

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SilverLotus

Postby [SilverLotus] on November 4th, 2014, 1:18 pm

Name: SilverLotus
Race: Inertia
Caste: Chiet
Gender: Female
Age: 22
Birthday: 7,Winter,495
Birthplace: Wind Reach

Appearance: 5"9 height,Blonde,Straight hair,Size C Breasts
Character Concept:SilverLotus is A shy girl but she speaks of things that are nice to hear for a girl having a terrible past she is very nice and kind

Character History
Family was killed by the Undead,Now lives in a cave alone with her 2 pets Janx a Liger(Combination of Lion and Tiger)And Coldflush a hawk.also loves hunting and making medicines

Fluent Language: Common

Basic Language: Common

Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Weaving 5 5. Novice
Hunting. 10. 10 Novice
Spear. 5. 5. Novice
Medicine. 30. 30. Competent





Lores


Lore of Inarta Culture
Lore of History of Wind Eagles


Possessions

1 Set of Clothing
-Simple Vinati (Females)
-Simple Undergarments
-1 pair leather ankle boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Glass or Bone or Metal)
-Brush (Glass or Bone or Metal)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week's worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
100 Pinions

Heirloom:Hawk


Housing

Location:Wind Reach

House: a cave which can be livable by 2 persons comfortably



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Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 Pinions 100 Pinions


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SilverLotus

Postby Crosspatch on November 4th, 2014, 3:22 pm

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Hello there!

Due to the overall current state of your character sheet there would be little point in attempting to pick out errors due to the large quantity of them. It is clear you have not take into consideration the Starting Guide, the Things you need to know, the articles included in the Starting Package, the information that is required in a Character Sheet or even the Rules in particular on the case of naming. As you are also playing an Inarta may I suggest you familiarise yourself with their lore page. Also, understand that in order to have and look after animals you need not only the skill to care for them, but also be able to purchase them - something that is not possible with starting creation funding. Please read these links and their contents before reattempting your character sheet.

Thank you,

-Crosspatch
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