[Note by Crosspatch] Malera Ironconch

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Malera Ironconch

Postby Malera on November 27th, 2014, 9:03 am

Malera Ironconch


Appearance

Race: Svefra
Gender: Female
Age: 19
Birthday: 43, Spring, 495
Birthplace: Blackconch Pod in the Suvan Sea

Appearance:


In addition, Melara bears the Symbol of her Pod, a Blackened Conch shell breaking free from the binds of iron chains, tattooed on her back. The chains lead up over her shoulder and connect around her collar.

Character Concept

Foolhardy Svefra looking to make a career as a Privateer/Smuggler.

Character History

Life for Malera began on an unusually calm day in the Suvan Sea aboard the main vessel of the Ironconch Pod. While life on the high seas can be quite dangerous, being the daughter of the pod's Lia made it a little safer; the pod's future did ride on her shoulders, after all. You see, a proper matriarchal heir hadn't been born to the pod in a very long time, and with her birth came hope for the next generation. It is said that a Svefra that can't carry their own weight has no place in the pod, and this contradictory behaviour irked Malera, even from a young age. The girl became more that eager to jump into the call of action; risking life and limb to earn her keep. The elders hated her rash behaviour, but Malera would have to follow the rules all the same if she was going to be a fit Lia some day.

As she grew, so too did her family. Many of her brothers departed the pod to help other pods grow. This migration was, in time, actively encouraged in Melara's pod. Right around her 8th birthday, the pod experienced a baby boom. Fertility was at an all time high, even for Svefra standards. This of course meant more mouths to feed, so branching off was helping conserve resources. The more she watched others leave, the more she too wished to leave. As luck would have it, she would get that opportunity. Born to the Lia's eldest son was a pair of girls, opening a window for Malera to leap through into the great unknown. She studied and trained long and hard, and on the eave of her 18th birthday she was given a ship of her own to start her new life. She had always known the life of the Pod and life abroad would be troublesome and dangerous, but she fearlessly set sail to Zeltiva to begin her adventures.

Language

Fluent Language: Fratava
Basic Language: Common
Poor Language: N/a


Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Sailing [SP]+[RB] 0 30 Competent
Swimming [SP] 0 20 Novice
Stealth [SP] 0 10 Novice



Lores

Helpful Lores:
Lore of Suvan Trade Routes
Lore of Ship Architecture

Possessions

1 Set of Clothing
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Cloak
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Wood)
-Brush (Wood)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week's worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
100 Gold Mizas

Heirloom:


Housing

Location: Zeltiva

House: Cassinor class Ship

Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM


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Last edited by Malera on December 8th, 2014, 10:02 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Malera Ironconch

Postby Crosspatch on December 5th, 2014, 11:36 am

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Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

  • Please link your CS to your profile. This can be done through the user control panel.
  • A character physical appearance description requires words not an image, with additional - please supply a full description of your character including things such as eye color and various other details. A character concept covers things such as likes, dislikes, ethics and values. Please take this into consideration.
  • Svefra can start off with the Svefra racial gnosis mark Oceanus, however they must still apply for it on the Help Desk and receive a Storyteller Secrets thread to make it official.
  • If your PC was born Spring 495 AV, she would presently be 19 years old.
  • It is required that you clearly state which skills are Starter Package (SP) skills and which are Racial Bonus (RB). Please do this.
  • Your Lore "Lore of Sailing" is too broad - more so as it is also a skill. A lore is some form of general knowledge that the character has gained over their lifetime. Such as knowledge on a particular deity or knowing the layout of a particular city.
  • Please choose a cloak or coat. You cannot have both.
  • An Heirloom can be any one, singular item as long as it is under the value of 50gm and is meaningful to the character. If you wish to have two rapiers you must pay for one of them and subtract the value from your ledger.

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


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