[Note by Crosspatch] Kyora

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Kyora

Postby Kyora on March 17th, 2015, 3:27 pm

Kyora




Race: Kelvic

Gender: Female

Age: 4 seasons

Birthday: 53, Spring, 514 AV

Birthplace: Right outside Syliras.


Appearance: Long, bright white, thick, coarse hair, that goes almost to her large hips, frames a pale almost white, freckled, heart shaped face, Bright blue eyes peek out from left parted bangs. At 4 seasons old this Kelvic looks like a young human girl of about 15 years old, she is approximately 118 pounds, and about 5 foot 1 inch tall, She has medium sized breasts and curves that she inhereted from her mother, She sees her attractivness as a curse. In animal form this Kelvic is a pure white wolf with bright bold blue eyes, she is about 58 pounds and her head is about 36 inches and her tail is approximately 17 inches in length.


Character Concept
Personality: Hard headed, kind, understanding, somewhat clingy, protective, Does not like poeple
Plans: This kelvic, being born with little to nothing, pursuing a job as a protector or a companion to anyone who will pay, even the littlest amount will do. She is saving money to by her own house and to feed herself. She wishes to have that of which the well off have.


Character History


Outside the city of Syliras, her mother died in the process of giving birth to her, her father is unknown.She lives Inside the city of Syliras in a small apartment, she lives alone. This Kelvic has no name, but calls herself Kyora, a name she once heard while wandering through Syliras. From the time she was born until she could fend for herself, wild wolves took her in and riased her, teaching her how to hunt, protecting her. Once to this Kelvic was able to set out on her own she went into the city, found herself a small apartment and taught herself to fight, she taught herself as much as she could about her Races history, from what others told her and what she could find in scrolls and books. This Kelvic has known nothing of good fortune, she has had to teach herself everything she knows. Which is not much. In her one year of being alive she has not yet been bonded,She looks like a 15 year old human. She Knows how to hunt and is skilled in unarmed combat. This Kelvic shifts easily from human to wolf in seconds, naturally she hunts small prey like rabbit and other ground animals. She goes out and walks the city looking for a possible bond mate, and companion.


Language


Fluent Language: Common and Canine.

Basic Language:

Poor Language:



Lores

Kelvic Racial History
Syliras City Layout


Possessions


1 Set of Clothing
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Coat
-Simple Boots

1 Waterskin

1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Wood)
-Brush (Wood)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week's worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
100 Gold Mizas


Heirloom: A Hairclip that sports a purple flower, this belonged to her mother before she died.


Housing


Location: Syliras.


House: 1 basic 20x20 single room cottage (400 sq feet) with a hearth, bunk, chest, chair, and small table

Skills:

Endurance: Novice - 10 (sp)
Wilderness Survival (Forest) : Novice - 20 (sp)
Unarmed Combat: Novice - 20 (sp)
Hunting : Novice - 10 (rb)






Purchase Cost TotalStarting +100 GM 100 GM
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Kyora

Postby Crosspatch on March 19th, 2015, 9:20 am

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Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

  • Being raised by wild wolves is highly unlikely. Even as a kelvic, all kelvics are born in their human form - she would sooner be ripped to shreds or worse if born in the wilds. Simply, a new born would not last any length or period of time regardless of race in the wilds. Also, it should be noted that the bronze woods (the lands immediately outside of Syliras) are patrolled by the knights and visited by hunters - and would probably come across her. Please take this into consideration with your history.
  • A good example of a ledger is as so;
    ItemPriceMoney
    Starting Package+ 100 gm100gm
    Candle-1 gm99 gm
    Shirt-1 gm98gm

    Code: Select all
    [table]Item|Price|Money
    Starting Package|+ 100 gm|100gm
    Candle|-1 gm|99 gm
    Shirt|-1 gm|98gm[/table]
  • In the city of Syliras proper it should be noted that characters do not start with a cottage as potential stater package housing. Instead, it is a 20x20 apartment with the furniture listed in the Housing section. As it is the cheapest housing available, the apartment is situated deep within the interior of Stormhold Citadel and does not include any windows, only ventilation shaft to bring in fresh air. Each hallway is lined with torches which are kept lit at all hours of the day, allowing for light and giving residents free access to something to light their hearth from. Please adjust your housing section to match this.

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


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