[Note by Crosspatch] Anita

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Anita

Postby Anita on May 12th, 2015, 5:41 am

ANITA MINASWOVE


Appearance

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Race: Konti
Gender: Female
Age: Young Adult
Birthday: 1, Winter, 495.
Birthplace: Mura

Appearance: Long flowing (poorly kept) white hair, pale white skin and green eyes. Usually adorned in an emerald green velvet or simple white dress (more often that not in a ruffled and unwashed state), old black leather sandals. She tends to carry a small white cloth pouch. Anita is timid, nervous, critical, edgy and a little less social than most of her kin.

Character Concept

Anita has spent the last two years in Mura, forced to re-assimilate with her past, her birthplace, and reconnect with a culture all but lost to her personal interests and childhood memories. She is uncomfortable with the peace and silence in these lands, torn between the safety of her homeland and a slowly growing desire to depart and build a life somewhere new, somewhere her heritage is less obvious, somewhere she can feel different and once again excited by life. Perhaps The Call is out there? Some might call her a loser, an ungrateful coward, or just plain useless. Call her what you will, everyone has a story to tell, and not all people pursue coin, power or answers... Anita searches for something... else.

Character History

Anita was discovered and ultimately rescued / unofficially adopted in Riverfall by an elderly Konti "Cenne" two years ago. After a twisted case of mistaken identity in a land acquisition conflict, Anita's mother was forced to the Gideon Combat Arena to prove innocence. In a controversial turn of events, mother fell motionless, a victim to the originator of the dispute, a local lawyer with a well disguised criminal past. The usual routine of serving out a season of service, was no longer an option so to speak.

Cenne befriended and delivered Anita back to her home Mura, and together the pair have spent their time here finding peace and support in the local community. Unfortunately the return has symbolised an endless pit of questions for Anita, who itches for calm, but also... something... new. Life has become slow, tiresome and repetitive. Gritting her teeth and stepping out into the wondrous city again, she has come to terms with the need to find... a friend, a connection, a steady job, anything... to prevent a permanent retreat.

Language

Fluent Language: Kontinese
Basic Language: Common

Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Skill 1 20 SP Dancing / Acrobatics
Skill 2 10 SP Horseriding
Skill 3 10 SP Woodcrafting
Skill 4 10 SP Knife Fighting



Lores

Helpful Lores:
Lore of Mura Geography
Lore of History of Mura


Possessions

1 Set of Clothing
-Green dress
-White dress
-Simple Undergarments
-Black Coat
-Black Sandals
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Wood)
-Brush (Wood)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
-Small Cloth Daypouch
100 Gold Mizas

Heirloom: A green glass ring, a gift from her Mother many years ago before they resettled in Riverfall.

Housing

Location: Mura outskirts (House of Cenne)

House: 1 Basic 20x20 single room cottage (400 sq feet) with a hearth, 2x bunks, chest, chair, and small table.

Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM


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Anita

Postby Crosspatch on May 22nd, 2015, 4:44 pm

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Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

  • Dancing and Acrobatics are two separate skills, please separate them in your skill table and apply the starting points as necessary.
  • Woodcrafting is not a valid skill. To work with wood consists of several separate skills depending on how one wishes to take it, for example Carpentry or Carving.
  • Please change "Horseriding" to "Riding: Horse".
  • Knifefighting is not a valid skill. Weapon skills specific to what is being used, and are labelled as "Weapon: Weapon name”.
  • You are missing your Racial Bonus. As a Konti this is +10 RB in either Fortune Telling or Medicine.
  • Konti are born with either a gnosis mark of Divination or Healing. Konti also have something known as a Konti gift. To gain one of these, please select one and then put in a request on the Help desk with a polite note as to why and the nature of the gift.
  • Your history mentions your character travelling. It should be noted that, wandering and travelling the land without any points in Wilderness Survival is strongly discouraged. Please take this into consideration.

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


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