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An undead citadel created before the cataclysm, Sahova is devoted to all kinds of magical research. The living may visit the island, if they are willing to obey its rules. [Lore]

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Postby Caesarion on June 30th, 2015, 4:01 am

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3rd of Summer, 515 AV

He scribbled on a peace of paper. The sheet was plain and the ink was plain. Perfect. With his feathered quill he could do a lot with a plain peace of paper - make it plain no more, fill it with excitement by intricate words all stringed together. He was a master at making even the most mundane of things exciting. He'd never really gotten into writing, and yet even so, here he was. He felt that perhaps he was practicing for a love letter, or a message to people who were separated by vast distances. He wasn't sure the intention yet, all he knew was that when he was free, he would write letters to all the important people in his life that were still alive. First and foremost would have to be his bigger brother, because even though the man so failed him in his time of need, for all his life he'd been there. Rhaenon deserved to know that his little Caesarion was okay - just like Caesarion deserved to know what sort of things Rhaenon was up to. What fun little schemes.

Today was Vox's birthday, but he didn't even notice. He stopped caring about things like that a while ago. The longer he'd been in shackles, the less he thought about silly things such as holidays. It was all instead about what he could do to improve his situation. Things like gifts - handouts - didn't exist for those on the bottom of society.

For now, he simply attempted to practice his usage of words. Poetry. Interesting sentences he remembered. Quotes from famous people. Stories of Gods. Little things that didn't matter to the sort of people he wanted to write to. But, these things mattered to him, in keeping him sane during his current predicament.

"Vox," the master called. Emarus Telemaran, his most beloved undead Lord. "Yes, my dear master?" He asked in response, the man opening the door and entering his slave's small room. "How well do I feed you, by human standards?" The man asked. Or, the former man. The slave raised an eyebrow, shrugging his shoulders. As of current, he was topless with tight leather wristbands on each arm and a simple copper collar around his neck. He was muscular, and appeared fairly healthy compared to the vast majority of slaves. Anyone could tell that he wasn't quite starved, but they might also notice that he certainly didn't look in perfect shape. He'd become paler since he came to Sahova. His hair had become darker, and his face had become so cold or grim half the time that he stopped caring to make unique facial expressions. He looked like a man in the middle between alive and dead, not in form, but in aura. He had never been so absolutely drained before.

"You feed me well enough for me to manage. I ate better when I was free, but that's to be expected. Why do you ask?" He wasn't quite sure if Telemaran was here to downgrade or upgrade his diet. Maybe he wanted Vox to praise him for his overt kindness. To be honest, Emarus was kind for a Nuit master, even if his intentions were incredibly cold and the intention was always exploitation. For property, Caesarion was treated well, and that was worthy of appreciation. "Well, I would like you to buff up. Your body type is attractive I'm sure by pulser standards, but I rather prefer my Vox violent looking. Since you've told me your diet is adequate, I shall warn you that I may decrease it unless you heed this order. If you do, however, then perhaps I will even increase it." He smiled his fake, deathly smile, then he turned around and left the room. That was his order: build up the body and become strong.

That didn't sound too difficult, but in reality, he had not the faintest clue where to start. "Okay, uh, meat. I have some meat in my diet. Water's not hard to come by, I get enough of it to last me. I don't know anything else though . . . ? Would Emarus know? Would his books know? Does he have any slaves that were formerly bodybuilders? Ugh," He gently thud his head against the desk, sighing. He had been so pampered for the first while since he got here, and had become a rather lazy slave. Sure, he exercised, but only based on what he'd learned in Ravok to maintain a lean physique. He wasn't sure about expanding on his body type and gaining strength. He had always trained himself to be . . . nimble. Not brutish.

The slave stood up, undoing the hook that bound him to the chain in his room. Usually it remained unlocked, but Emarus liked him to have it on until he planned to do his tasks for the day. Once Vox went back into the room and put it on, he was done, and the master would be enraged if he was found wandering outside past that point. He had to leave with an intended motive and if he did not fulfill his daily goal, that was his own fault. It was difficult for someone as indecisive as Vox, but it was still rather generous as far as slaves were concerned.

He opened the door and began to wander through the home, heading towards his master's somewhat vast library. Most of the books were silly things to keep Telemaran entertained. There were comedies, dramas, historical writings and personal anecdotes by famous people. Then, there were books on magic, especially hypnotism and auristics. Body training didn't seem to be something a Nuit would have in their home, especially not one such as Emarus, and not one living in Sahova. Still, Vox looked, until he recognized the sheet of paper that was blatantly atop Telemaran's reading table. It had an image of a man, a fairly muscular one, then a dietary plan and a training regimen. Perhaps the master wrote this himself to guide his curious little minx, or maybe he'd gotten this from someone else. Regardless, he knew that it was intended for him, so he had no trouble simply taking it from the table and using it as a guideline.

"Okay, so . . . thirty minutes of weight lifting daily to maintain the physique. But that's just maintain. Building it in the first place is probably more intensive. Hours." He already knew some of the principles on here, as he exercised somewhat frequently, just to a much lesser degree. He knew of balanced breathing and muscle strength allocation. The sheet he was reading from made things seem pretty simple, however. A routine weight lifting exercise, tens if not hundreds of times over for a long period of time. Start with smaller weights, expand onto larger ones. It was better to start healthier and safer, so for someone with a somewhat athletic body type, he figured he'd begin with an only somewhat above average par of weights.

Now, did they have any in this house . . . ?

"Master Telemaran," Vox called, wondering as to where Emarus had gone. He was usually in this very library, but it seemed that wasn't quite the case today. The slave explored more of the house, but without the ability to find his master.

"Vox," Ameer called to him. "The master left you weights in the pens. He wants you to exercise in there, for fear of your sweat leaking onto his floors." The other slave informed him only of what he was supposed to, then continued with his duties. He was now in charge of cleaning the master's home and keeping things well in order, since the other slave, Mayana, was near her limits and the end of her life. She was probably to be experimented on from this point forward. "Alright. Thank you, Ameer." He smiled at the other boy from Ravok, then passed by him and into the pens, where he found weights adequate for his current strength level. He decided that he'd focus on the arms.

Picking up the weights, inhaling and exhaling, he began his initial reps.
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Postby Caesarion on June 30th, 2015, 4:45 am

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A balanced regimen was utmost important to bodybuilding. That was probably the most essential note in Telemaran's scribblings, and to be honest, he remembered that being the sort of thing his brother nagged about when he first got Vox into exercising. It had been a while, but he could remember the commands of Rhaenon even now. Breathe in, breathe out, through each and every movement. Always remain a perfect and straight form in the rest of your body, lest you cheat and make it far too easy for your muscles. Repeat the same motion hundreds of times if need be, in order to obtain progression. He didn't need to be retold these things. Honestly, lessons in bodybuilding were not all too difficult to recall. The challenge was simply dealing through the pain and keeping your diet in line with your body expectations. These things would be easy for him, though, considering he had nearly infinite time to self-perfect. He wasn't really a Gug cleaner or a pleasure slave. This sort of thing was moreso his task.

Of course, as he picked up his weights yet again, breathed, balanced and began his reps, he quickly found himself bored by the sort of damning calm that came with self-improvement. Was bodybuilding not a craft for those capable of staying in place and repeating boring motions infinitely? Vox craved people, their drama - that was perhaps why he was so taken with hypnotism, which was a magic that entirely learned itself into capability by manipulating other living creatures. Bodybuilding was a task revolving around the self, which made it . . . difficult for him to grasp. He had always built his daily itineraries around other people and the things he wanted from them. The things he'd do with them. The things he'd do to them.

He found his mind easily distracted by such prospects. "Ameer, you're still around, yeah?" He stopped his repetition for a short moment, looking to see if the other slave was near the pens. The golden haired young man popped his head in, then stepped forward and bowed to his senior slave. "Yes, Vox. I was simply scrubbing the walls." He clasped his hands together and looked down. The boy had been so shy since their intimate encounter on the first night of summer. "How well does Telemaran feed you?" Vox asked. The other slave looked up and shrugged. "Poorly, I'm afraid. I'm treated as a slave should be." He was speaking the truth, evidently. From what Vox remembered of two nights ago, Ameer was fairly skinny. His body didn't have the necessary nutrients provided to make for a body type that was anything more than lean. Still, he did well with the food that he ate. "I see. Well, you trust me, right? What if I told you that I could get you better fed if you comply with something I ask?" Those words. Trust me. After all of the suggestion magic he'd used on Ameer, those words sparked something special. They . . . well, carried power, and made him feel committed to listening and complying to his fellow slave.

"I'd believe you. What would you like me to do, Vox?" He placed his arms behind his back and brought his hands together, staring at the chest of the tall mage. Vox stepped forward and gently grabbed his chin, making contact with his eyes. "You're a sweet boy, Ameer. I was just wondering if you'd train with me." His request came with a smile. The younger man figured it was probably not good of an idea with his limited quantities of food and water, but he nonetheless said yes because he was conditioned to want to assist Vox. Worse still, the mage was using hypnotism on him even now, making his requests more appealing by filtering the air with some of his Res and making 'suggestions' that training with him would be altogether enjoyable and improve Ameer's health and happiness in the long run. Even though this request seemed so simple for regular people, Vox always had to go and rile people up in order to feel content with himself. Hypnosis was something he did on the fly just to sway things his way. It was how he lived comfortably.

With that, the man returned to his reps, and he offered Ameer lighter weights and less frequent movements so that he could keep up without feeling drained. Though, to be honest, Vox wasn't exactly having the easiest time himself. Exercising was . . . always sort of a painful and taxing activity.
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Postby Caesarion on June 30th, 2015, 5:10 am

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Meat and water. He got that. After he finished one hundred and fifty arm lifts, which was what was recommended for his level of experience, he felt fairly drained. The man sat down for a moment to regain some energy and lessen the amount of sweat covering his face. Then, he drank a sip of water from a jug he'd left on the floor and practiced his controlled breathing. Ameer seemed pretty pooped too, despite doing one fifth the amount of work, and so it was clear that the both of them would take a short amount of time away from the weights. Still, most of the pain and the tiredness was in his arms, so Vox figured he could get away with exercising his legs. He began the legs the same way as with the arms - with stretches, first simply letting them go wild by performing actions like running in place and whatnot, then by performing squats and putting weight on singular legs. He stretched his back by reaching down to his toes with his fingertips, then gripped at his heel with his hand and stood still until each leg felt stretched individually. He actually felt better than he did before the stretches, even despite the exercise entailed. He'd not gotten restraints out of his body in a long time, and suddenly he felt lighter.

As he forced his legs to bend and lift themselves up versus heavy restraint from his arms, he looked down to Ameer's self-ordained corner and winked at the younger slave, solely for the purpose of making him laugh. Which he did. "I don't really find much entertainment in this activity," he admitted. "So I'm gonna pester you for a while. I have a question. What's your name, young Ameer? From before you were enslaved. You said your dad was somewhat wealthy. I might know the family name." He was just curious, really. Figured it wouldn't hurt him to know something about the person he'd be interacting with the most out of anyone.

"I don't really think it's a good idea to share. What if you heard bad things about my family? My father had a reputation for being shady." He put on a distant expression, looking away. He was a shy one. That much was evident. "Ameer, trust me," he said again - always. Another layer of suggestion, when it already meant so much. Hypnosis to sway the mind, again and again. He was conditioning this boy to be obedient. "Fine," he said. "But only if you tell me about your family too."

The boy stood up, groaning as he resisted the pain in his upper body. Even that little amount of exercise really got to him. "I was Ameer Milab. Our house wasn't gigantic but we lived next to the Gayna, that big slaver house. I didn't honestly know much about the surroundings though. I was always preoccupied with playing games. The only thing I really remember was that the neighbors didn't want their sons to play with me, because they considered me to be of lesser breeding. I didn't get that at the time, but now, I understand what they meant by that." Still, he didn't seem to care. Ameer was always so matter-of-fact about everything, even things that should've normally been too horrible to accept, especially for someone who had been free before they were shackled. Vox was still hung up over details like that.

"I never heard of the Milab. I was a Panthos. We were a fairly important house where we lived, or at least we pretended we were. I often wonder in actuality if any of the things my family obsessed over mattered. Did we really mean something to Ravok, or were we just a bunch of spoiled slave owners that wanted to think we had sway? We built our entire lives around deadly competition, but I can't recall a single thing we actually did to really benefit the city." Maybe that was just because he was naive, though. Or maybe he felt like Ravok was such a place that nothing could really benefit it . . . because it was desolate and depressing and never improved. And it was pretty petching evil.

He did know of Gayna, though. He knew that his father wanted Rhaenon to marry their daughter, as if yet again it was some fantastic noble marriage. All of the people wanted to pretend they were nobles. Goddamn, though, the more he thought about it all the less it made sense.

"I knew Panthos," Ameer said. He wasn't particularly expert on that family, but he did remember hearing about them once or twice. Certainly not praise, but not necessarily insult either. "Way of the Voice, yes? That neighborhood filled with pretentious rich slave owners. I was just outside of that." He nodded. Honestly though this conversation was probably fit to expire soon, because he knew minimal about Panthos and Vox knew jack about his little house of Milab. As for the house that owned him, well, no one really knew about them. They were more traders than slavers.
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Postby Caesarion on June 30th, 2015, 3:39 pm

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After a somewhat drawn out resting period, the young mage decided that he would return to training his body. During the time that was, he had drawn out a plan for his workout itinerary, and determined that after an hour more of exercise today he'd continue tomorrow with rock climbing, tree climbing, running and more weight lifting. Today he'd focused mainly on his arms, and he realized he needed to do some leg, abdominal and other exercises to maintain a balanced figure. Bodybuilding was, after all, obsessed with balance. Shape was important, and getting equal strength to all of the areas of his body. Plus, if the goal was to look intimidating for Emarus, then he needed to bulk up.

The man laid down, resting his back against the cold floor. He put his knees up and his arms atop his abdomen, then took a deep breath. "Sit-ups?" Ameer asked. He didn't really know much about exercising, but he at least understood the basic terms for basic exercises. Vox was much the same way, but he had learned a lot more after reading Telemaran's notes, and felt somewhat comfortable with the way he was training right now. "Yeah. For my abdomen." Sit-ups were good for forming shape in the body, especially as far as the chest was concerned. "Would you mind putting weight onto my feet? That's apparently how this is supposed to be done - so my legs don't get out of form." He didn't hypnotize the man this time, as he was somewhat exhausted by now and didn't think it was a good idea to use Djed. Not only that, but it sort of felt cruel to make him do everything via some magical and irresistible command. Practicing his magic was important, but he wouldn't do it so frequently as to break his practice dummy. Just like Mayana, Ameer would need time. Perhaps Vox would rotate between the two, subjecting this dummy to hypnotics, then the next dummy, then back to the first. It was cruel to even refer to them as that, but in reality it didn't hurt them so much as it relaxed them, and assisted Vox in becoming a superior slave and superior mage.

He smiled and thanked Ameer as he held his feet down, with Vox crossing his arms over his chest before making the rising motion, attempting to touch his elbows to his knees, and fully rise without using strength from other muscles not involved in the exercise. He made his first rep fairly easily, then he moved on to the next one. Not too far into the mundane repetitions, the two of them heard the front door open, and while Vox remained laying down, Ameer went to go see if it was the master returning home. It was.

"Vox," Telemaran called. "Are you doing your old Nuit proud? Let me come see you." He spoke loudly from across the home, as he often did, and arrived in the pens to see his slave drenched in sweat and doing more sit-ups. Honestly he felt like his body was about to give in, but the young man had at least enough determination to finish through with his daily requested regimen - two hundred sit ups, two hundred push ups, one hundred reps of weight training for each arm, two hundred and fifty squats, and some stretching exercises. He'd already been doing this for hours, eating a meal and drinking a water during an "intermission" of sorts, and damn he'd gotten tired but he still had a hundred sit-ups and two hundred push-ups to go. "Ah, you look positively tortured. That tells me you've been trying hard. Good on you." Emarus let go one of his typical, nasty smirks, then grabbed a chair from the living room so that he may watch from the corner.

The slave just rolled his eyes as he continued his reps. "Do you like me looking positively tortured? Or do you prefer me invariably beautiful?" It was one of his typical questions meant to irritate Telemaran, when they both already knew the nature of their relationship and what the master wanted of his slave. "There is beauty in pain, and there is progress in struggle. You are my investment, and shall I have my way, you will bleed acres in order to meet your redesigned self."
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Postby Caesarion on June 30th, 2015, 4:04 pm

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After some period of time, Vox had advanced through his exercise enough to essentially call it a day. Before jumping into the nearest well, though, he would finish off with some stretches to see if he'd made much progress in successfully ironing out his body. He did the same as before - bending to the side holding both arms out, then touching the toes, then pushing resistance against his neck, his back, his arms, his legs. He took a heavy breath and finished off the jug of water he'd left lying around, then wiped the sweat off his brow and pulled one of the cleaning towels from Ameer's pen over his shoulder. The man returned to the library where he found the notes, sighing as he waved his hands over his face to attempt to cool himself down. He was still covered in sweat, despite seemingly just drying himself off with the towel he'd brought with him. His whole body ached, the pain that he was accumulating catching up to him. He determined at that moment that his intensive climbing exercises and such should probably wait until the fifth of spring, and instead, he would only do an hour or less of weight training tomorrow.

He set down the piece of paper he'd read to teach himself the basics. Of course, after setting it down, he remembered that he hadn't finished all of the pages. He'd gotten perhaps eighty percent of the way through, without daring to read what other sorts of ideas this anonymous writer had intended for a beginning bodybuilder. He flipped to the last two pages, the second to last being a guide on how to properly rotate usage of your muscles, and the last one seeming to be a sort of writer's note, or a letter. The letter was to Vox, actually. It was commanding that he do well and prosper, following the guide and perfecting his own self-designed regimen for the best results. It asked that he incorporated other forms of exercise into body-building, such as running. He already had that planned, so that was simple enough. What really stood out to him was the post-script of the letter, which was entirely in different hand writing.

It said, Aurists can sense treachery. He did not really know what that meant. Aurists - auristic users? The field of magic? He forgot what they even did. He remembered maybe that Aoren used a type of magic along that field of expertise, but forgot exactly what they used it for. He wasn't an expert on words or etymology either. What was important was what came after the word, 'can sense treachery'. Was that simply a typical warning from master to slave, or was this warning explicit? Did Telemaran realize that Vox was planning to escape slavery? Did he realize that all of the things he'd said so far had been relatively fake, and surrounded by schemes? Could an 'aurist' detect such well-crafted lies? This concerned him.

He retired to the area where he cleaned himself, submerging the brunt of his body into the cold waters. He usually felt most at peace here, but right now, he was concerned for the future. Based on the words spoken to him, he determined that it was for the best that he accelerate his advancement. Tomorrow he would rest from today's prosperous pain, but the day after, he would fight long and brutally to improve himself. Running, bodybuilding, reimancy, hypnosis. He would incorporate all of these essentials to his self-betterment in one. And maybe . . . he'd also look into auristics, and figure out just what sort of threat was implied.
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Postby Keene Ward on August 7th, 2015, 7:02 pm

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“For there is nothing lost, that may be found, if sought.”
-Edmund Spenser, The Faerie Queene

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    Acrobatics +2
    Running +1
    Hypnotism +2
    Rhetoric +1
    Socialization +4
    Interrogation +1
    Investigation +2
    Negotiation +1
    Persuasion +1
    Politics +1
    Philosophy +1
    Observation +2
    Storytelling +1
    Tactics +1
    Writing +1
    Planning +3
    Organization +1
    Bodybuilding +3
    Meditation +1
    Endurance +2

Lores
    Ameer: Personal History
    Bodybuilding: Partner Sit-ups
    Bodybuilding: Balanced Regimens
    Bodybuilding Theory: Maintaining Physique with Weightlifting

Rewards/Consequences
- Intense soreness of the arms, stomach, and legs for two days followed by seven days of overall muscle pain tapering off with rest and relaxation.

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