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Devi heads into the woods for another bout of target practice, unaware that she is being watched with uncommonly keen eyes.

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Stretching northward along the coastline of the Suvan Sea, the Cobalt Mountains are the home of the Bronze Wood, numerous ruins, and creatures both strange and fantastical.

The Edge of Perception (Jeremy)

Postby Sayana on August 7th, 2015, 8:54 pm

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Devi
Skills
  • Endurance: 1
  • Land Navigation: 2
  • Bodybuilding: 1
  • Herbalism: 3
  • Planning: 1
  • Foraging: 3
  • Observation: 5
  • Weapon: Composite Longbow: 4
  • Stealth: 1
  • Socialization: 1
  • Teaching: 2
Lores
  • Foraging: Avoid depleting plants that you plan to return to
  • Longbow: Breathing techniques
  • Jile Berries: Identification and medical properties
  • Vyfox: Identification
  • A curious falcon
Loot
  • Vyfox: 3 oz
  • Jile berries: 5oz
  • Lost: 1 longbow arrow
  • Thank you for updating your ledger with the other purchases


 
Jeremy
Skills
  • Observation: 5
  • Land Navigation: 1
  • Scouting: 2
  • Stealth: 2
  • Acrobatics: 1
  • Herbalism: 2
Lores
  • Scouting: Watching from avian form
  • Stealth: Blending in with the wildlife
  • Jile Berries: Identification and medical properties
  • Devi: Doctor or animal healer
  • Devi: Beginner archer
  • Devi: Has a beautiful smile
  • Bonding: The unexplainable feeling of attraction
Loot
  • 1 longbow arrow (belonged to Devi)

Comments: Great thread. It was fascinating how much you could interact without explicit dialogue (except for some of Devi's one-way dialogue). Sounds like a wonderful set up for a future bonding.

Devi, could you check your ledger to make sure the dates are correct for your seasonal expenses. All of them are accounted for but the years appear to have typos. Additionally, could you double check the last total for your ledger ("Silver Pendent" line), it looks a bit off.

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