[Note by Astator] Naos Bluefist

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Naos Bluefist

Postby Naos Bluefist on September 18th, 2015, 7:10 pm

Naos Bluefist


Appearance

Race: Isur
Clan: Vizerian
Gender: Male
Age: 37
Birthday: 24 spring 478
Birthplace: He doesn't know. But he has lived in zeltiva since he was a baby though.

Appearance:
Standing at 5 foot, Naos is of normal height for an isur.

Character Concept

Naos has grasped the teachings of his racial god izentor and constantly tries to live up to them as well as he can. Strenght, patience and industry. Those are his god's core values and those values are very visible in Naos. Though the brashness of his youth makes it hard to keep his patience and he can take the other values way to far. He can be very stubborn and sometimes makes work harder on himself then it should be because he doesn't want to take the easy way out. Even though the easy could be the smarter way. He also has a tendency to overwork himself in his zeal. Though his teacher did manage to beat it into his skull that any time spent recovering from overwork is time wasted for real work.

Character History

The fact that Naos ended up in zeltiva is by a cruel twist of fate. Liberated by the waveguard from a sunberthian slave ship when he was merely a babe, with no sign of his parents anywhere. So when the waveguard brought the captured slave into the city they dropped him and the few other parentless minors in the care of a local orphanage and washed their hands of the bussines. The orpanage called him Naos bluefist, the name naos had been carved into a small amulet made out of isurian steel that had been found around the neck of the baby. His last name was simply because one of the babies fists was a deep blue.

Life in the orphenage wasn't that bad. Sure there were problems with the rest of the kids, who found him weird and strange because he was blue and stayed childish for far longer. While the caretakers of the orphenage found it hard to care for a child that didn't mature the same way as the children they were used to working with. But all in all Naos looks back on his time in the orphenage with fondness. A simpler time where all that mattered was having fun and where he didn't worry or care about either the future or the past.

He did get a adopted by a blacksmith when he was 20 years old.. The man, Ardas was more interested in a potential apprentice. then in raising a son himself. Life with his new parent was strict affair and the relation between Ardas and Naos was more a mentor and student relationship then a parental relationship. But for Naos Ardas is the closest thing he has ever had to a fatherfigure and he doesn't accept anybody mocking him. Naos isn't a fighter, but the natural isur strenght coupled with a fist that can dent steel usually shuts people up.

He studied under and lived together with Ardas for the following 15 years and it was only in the year of 515av that naos left his apprenticeship and is seeking employment in other forges to forge his own path and life.

Language

Fluent Language: Common

Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Blacksmithing 20 sp, 10 rb 30 Competent
Metalsmithing 20 sp 20 Novice
Weaponsmithing 5 sp 5 Novice
Armorer 5 sp 5 Novice


Gnosis

Izentor: 1 mark


Lores

Zeltiva:
  • Lore of Zeltiva Streetplan

Religion
  • Izurdin: god of strenght,patience and industry

Possessions

1 Set of Clothing
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Cloak or Coat
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Wood)
-Brush (Wood)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week's worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel

Heirloom: A small little talisman made out of isurian steel that bears Naos' name. It was found on him

Housing

Location: Zeltiva

House: flat, roughly 20x20, includes a hearth, bunk, chest, chair, and table.

Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM
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Naos Bluefist

Postby Naos Bluefist on September 18th, 2015, 7:38 pm

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Naos Bluefist

Postby Astator on November 18th, 2015, 2:13 pm

I have found a few errors with your character sheet. Unfortunately this means you are unable to continue roleplaying until they are corrected.

  • Please list a birthplace. Just because he doesn't know, doesn't mean you can't put one down. This is mandatory
  • Please mark your skills with notations of Starting Package Skill Points (SP) as well as Racial Bonus (RB) judging from your skills you have 70SP, but no Racial Bonus marked. You are only allowed 50SP and +10 to either Hunting or Foraging. So even with the Foraging being marked as your Racial Bonus you are still over by 10SP, please fix. This is mandatory.
  • You can only have the Coat or the Cloak, please choice one.
  • Please list any threads you currently have. as well as grades if applicable.

When you are finished, please PM me by hitting the envelope underneath my name.

Thank you,

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