Raust Benjamin

[Raust Benjamin]

Raust Benjamin Appearance Race: Akalak Gender: Male Age: 50 Birthday: 22nd, Fall, 465 Birthplace: Riverfall Appearance: Standing at about 6'5 and muscular from years of having swordplay as a hobby, Raust is truly a large man. He has groomed himself to pristine physical condition partially out of vanity, and more so out of practicality. Living with thousands of muscle-bound warriors instills in you the need for exercise as well. Long black hair falls onto his broad shoulders and frosty blue ovals pierce those who stand before him. His skin is slightly lighter than his kin but still a dark blue. His facial features are chiseled much like the rest of his body, which adds to affect his enormous stature imposes on people Character Concept The secret of the Akalak race is a powerful one that has been kept close to each Akalak's chest. The dual personalities of the race have always caused trouble for the younger members of the race exploring themselves. Usually, the light side is the driving force behind the motivations of the Akalak people. However, in the case of Raust the dark side took over from the very beginning. The dark brother took the reigns, and crushed the spirit of the light brother. Although not in control in the least, the light brother instills into Raust a sense of lawfulness and a need for order but the dark brother has caused Raust's true intention to be purely selfish. Not one bone in his body is for the greater good, but only for the good of Raust Benjamin. Raust is a ambitious, manipulative, and completely selfish. He doesn't care much for anyone but himself, instead wishing for more and more. Raust, however, intends on using societies structures to impose his will on the people. Raust doesn't want to destroy anything, but instead wants to take over through secret killings and shady dealings. The man is one who wants power more than life itself, and loves manipulating people to follow his whims so he doesn't put himself at risk. He likes playing people as if they were chess pieces, with him as the chess master. Raust's light brother imposes order upon his life and instills in him the need for Raust to despise anarchy and chaos. Yet, the dark brother controls the reigns mainly with his selfishness and ambition that has no limit. The hubris that Raust has developed also comes from the dark side; the incredible confidence that is often a downfall for Raust has been a driving force in his life and has developed his ambition. The young Akalak enjoys the fact that the dark brother controls the reigns instead of the light because he still has the discipline that is required among Aklaks, yet he has the ability to do what it takes to succeed without the hindrance of a good conscious. Character History TBD Language Fluent Language: Common Basic Language: /Tukant Poor Language: Skills Skill EXP Total Proficiency Weapon:Lakan 30 30 Competent Tracking 10 10 Basic Dual Wield 10 10 basic Unarmed Combat 10 Basic Lores Lore of history of Riverfall and Lore of Akalak Culture Possessions 1 Set of Clothing (Colorful) -Simple Shirt -Simple Pants -Simple Undergarments -Simple Coat -Simple Boots 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: -Comb (Bone) -Brush (Bone) -Soap -Razor -Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth) -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel Laken Scale Mail 50 GM Heirloom: Laken given to him by his father Housing Location: Riverfall House: 1 basic 20x20 single room cottage (400 sq feet) with a hearth, bunk, chest, chair, and small table. Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 GM 100 GM Seasonal Income 1,183 1,283 Loan Repayments 687 600 Living Expenses 450 150 Winter Money: 150 GM Thread List Link your current & past threads here!

[Astator]

Hello there, there are unfortunately some grievous errors you must fix before you can continue roleplaying.

• You can only have Tukant or Common as a Fluent language, please select which one and the other can be placed at Basic or Poor.
• It is required to list all Starting Points and your Racial bonus in your skills, please mark them as SP and RB respectively. Remember an Akalak the RB is +10 to Unarmed Combat. Please Fix this
• Laken as a weapon skill is marked as: Weapon(Laken) or Weapon: Laken, please fix.
• The Proficiency level is not 'Basic' but 'Novice'.
• You can only start with the cloak OR the coat, not both. Please choice one.
• As an Akalak, your Laken is recommended as an Heirloom as it is something you make during your Trials. Also, why have a longsword if you have no skill points in it?
• Please attach your CS to your profile, if you need help please let me know.

Once you have fixed these, please click the little envelope below my name and let me know.