When There Was Sun

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This shining population center is considered the jewel of The Sylira Region. Home of the vast majority of Mizahar's population, Syliras is nestled in a quiet, sprawling valley on the shores of the Suvan Sea. [Lore]

When There Was Sun

Postby Yvan on January 5th, 2016, 8:36 pm

Flashback
Spring 50
493 AV


"Yvan," his mother, Fay, called from the kitchen of the cottage which subsequently happened to be the lounge, bedroom, and wash house too.
The boy opened his eyes and cringed to find his brother's foot an inch from his face; they had fast grown out of their top and tail arrangement, "morning again?" Yvan complained after giving Marcus as shove.
"Same time every day," Fay smiled, "come eat your breakfast, then you can make a start on those chores of yours."

Half asleep, the boy dragged himself from his bed and sat down at the table in his longs. Breakfast was a wooden bowl full of oats and enough goats milk to wet his tongue. He spooned it down hurriedly, watching his mother tend to the spring flowers she kept in small clay pots on the windowsill in the kitchen.
"I'm going riding today," Yvan mumbled.
"Don't speak with your mouth full," Fay warned, "it's not polite."
Yvan swallowed the last spoonful of oats and set his spoon down in the empty dish, "can I take the good saddle?"
"If you do all your chores," his mother agreed.

The boy dressed quickly and raced out the door before swiftly returning to collect his boots and the bucket of slops under the kitchen sink. There was nothing worse than the smell of rotten milk mixed with raw potato skins, and after lacing his boots up, Yvan carried the pig bucket out to the trough carefully.

For a boy of his build and stature, lifting the heavy scraps bucket was hard work, and making sure nothing got on his top, even harder still. Yvan heaved breathlessly as the bucket went up over the wooden rail of the fence and turned it over to make sure it was empty before setting it down at his feet. The boy climbed the fence to lean over and watch the pigs eat for a chime before galloping back to the house to fetch the chicken feed, which was a mix of stale oats and crushed corn kernels. To this concoction he added two and a half mugs of water, counting them out and using a line around the inside of the cup to measure it out exactly.

The chickens came running to the boy's call, though the rooster stood back trying to coax his hens away from the feed and immediate danger by pecking at the ground to make it seem as if he had found something more interesting. Yvas stared at the giant hooks on the bird's feet and watched him dance and shuffle his wings excitedly as one of his hens wandered over.

While the chickens were distracted, Yvan ran over to the hen house, jogging around the scattering of fruit trees just beyond the cottage. He counted out six eggs and plucked another fresh one from under a disgruntled hen, who pecked at his hand before running out of the hen house to call to her mate. With too many eggs and not enough hands to carry them in, Yvan closed the bottom of his shirt between his teeth and scooped the eggs up one by one into the makeshift pouch he had managed to create.
Yvan

 

When There Was Sun

Postby Yvan on January 6th, 2016, 10:26 pm

"Is that all of them?" His mother asked.
"Yes!" Yvan smiled.
"We usually get nine," she protested, "looks like we might have another hen or two for the oven this summer."
"Yum," the boy grinned.
"I'll have you go into the marketplace and pick up a few chicks for me."
"Can I take Dusty for a ride after that?" Yvan pleaded.
"Have you fed the dogs and watered the carrots?"
"No..."
"Well get those chores done, boy, then you can take Dusty outside of the outpost into the field once you've picked up some chicks for me."

Fay set two silver miza down in her son's hand, which he quickly stowed away in the breast pocket of his top. Without another word, Yvan raced outside and ran across the field to let the dogs off their chains for a leg stretch while he prepared their breakfast, mixing a bit of dry food with the leftover rabbit from dinner the night before. The dogs scoffed the food hungrily before Yvan tied them again to make sure they wouldn’t terrorise the chickens, and raced back towards the house to fetch the watering can.

His mother's vegetable garden was starting to look a bit overgrown, hanging over the sides of the raised wooden frame Yvan had helped her build the summer before. His younger brother Marcus, who was usually in charge of pest patrol, seemed to have been neglecting his duties as of late. The blue eyed boy flicked a snail off of one of the lettuce leaves before watering them and the carrots. He studied the green beans, checking to see how much taller they had grown since he had last set down a marker only three days before, "half an inch," Yvan sounded surprised, and scratched another mark into the thin wooden pole the beans had been climbing.

When all the water was gone, Yvan returned to the house at a steady walk and set the watering can down in its rightful place before going inside to fetch his father's old saddle, "how many hens will two silver get us?" He asked his mother, curious.
"How many copper in one silver?" His mother asked, this being something they had gone over during one of their home-schooling lessons.
"One hundred?"
"And if each hen is worth two copper, how many could you afford?"
"One hundred halved," he replied after giving it some thought.
"Which is?"
"Fifty hens," Yvan grinned.
"Times two silver?"
"A hundred hens," Yvan's eyes bulged, "I don't think I can carry that many."
Fay laughed, "But I don't want hens, I want chicks."
"How much do they cost?"
"You'll get a clutch of chicks for one silver."
"How many chicks in a clutch?" The boy inquired.
"Twenty five, what does that make each chick worth?"
"Three copper?" Yvan guessed.
"No, think about it now, what's half of fifty?"
"Twenty... Five?"
"That's right, and how many times does twenty five go into one hundred?"
"Four times! Each chick is worth four copper," Yvan said excitedly, "but why buy chicks when you can get hens for half the price?"
"Because the hens might be old and we need to raise some chicks that will provide us with more eggs," his mother explained.
"Two clutches?" Yvan asked.
"One," Fay shook her head slowly, still smiling, "the other silver is for your savings; run along now and get to the marketplace so that you'll be home in time for lunch."

Yvan went over to his bed and climbed on top of it to reach up to the high shelf Marcus wasn't quite tall enough to reach yet. There he kept a small, square tin with a rusted lid containing all of his earnings, a whole three gold and two silver.
Yvan

 

When There Was Sun

Postby Yvan on January 6th, 2016, 10:27 pm

Yvan checked the breast pocket of his shirt to make sure the silver rimmed miza was still there and clutched it safely in his hand as he went in search of the appropriate business to purchase the clutch from. When he found it, he inquired about the price, and the man sat peeling potatoes with a knife, told Yvan that a clutch of chicks would cost him one silver and thirty copper, "I've only got a silver piece," Yvan admitted, "four copper a bird seems more than fair," he spoke up, thinking that perhaps if the man knew he was educated, he would not try to rip him off like he was.
The trader seemed neither surprised nor moved by the mention but held out his large, chubby hand and grunted, "one silver it is."

Carefully, Yvan loaded the small chicks one by one into a sack and returned to his house, checking the chicks every now and then on the way home. The journey back was slow and Yvan had decided that too much bouncing around might cause one of the chicks injury, something his family couldn't afford with the money his mother made from growing carrots and other vegetables on the small plot of land they owned outside of the walls of the Mithryn Outpost.

After unloading the chicks into the hen house and setting down a dish of water and feed for them, he shut the door to keep them locked in for a few days and the rooster out. The boy then returned to the cottage to inform his mother that he was home in one piece and started collecting the gear he would need to take the family horse out for a ride.
Yvan

 

When There Was Sun

Postby Yvan on January 6th, 2016, 10:28 pm

With his long, narrow arms folded around the saddle, Yvan wobbled out of the front door and carried the heavy kit out into the street where Dusty, his father's old horse, stood flicking flies away from his rump with a lazy swish of his tail. Yvan set the saddle down and ran back to the house to fetch a bucket of water, which sloshed about as he carried it back to the horse, setting it down to distract the animal while he clipped the leather reins he had brought with him to the halter Dusty wore.

When the water was gone and the horse had taken his fill, Yvan turned the bucket upside down and used it to stand on, making him just tall enough to get the saddle over the horse's back. He did up the girth-strap and shortened the stirrups before jumping up onto the horse and closing his hand about a fistful of the animal's mane to help pull himself up. Settled comfortably in the saddle, Yvan then pulled on the reins in order to try and get the stubborn old gelding to lift his head and move forwards. He kicked his feet against the animal's sides and made a clicking sound by striking his tongue against the roof of his mouth, "come on Dusty, get up, get up!" The boy encouraged, but the lethargic old horse was having none of it and continued to stand, flicking his tail up to whip Yvan against the back as if he were the pest.

After trying for a good ten chimes, Fay came out of the house to see what the problem was, carrying her late husband's crossbow with her, "you forgot this," she scolded her boy lightly, "you never know who you'll run into on the road out there," she warned and tugged sharply on the reins to get Dusty to pay attention, "you have to be firm with him, dear, or he will walk all over you.

Yvan packed a handful of crossbow bolts into his rucksack and set the crossbow down in his lap to free his hands up in order to steer Dusty forwards. With a kick of his feet and the length of the reins adjusted so that the gelding could not lower his head again, Dusty paced forward and Yvan gave the order for his mount to trot, bounced around like a little rag doll on the animal's back. Fay smiled and waved to her boy as he turned the horse and made his way to the far gate at the entrance of the Mithryn Outpost, and out onto the road leading through the fields and orchards towards the woods.
Yvan

 

When There Was Sun

Postby Yvan on January 6th, 2016, 10:29 pm

It had been some time since Yvan had done any riding and it took him a quarter mile on horseback before he was able to properly familiarise himself with the controls again. When he tugged on the right rein the animal would turn right and when he pulled on the left that too seemed to work correctly. It was the stop and go commands that Dusty seemed to have a problem with, and a mile from home, where the grass grew lush and green, the old horse stopped to lower his head and graze.

Yvan kicked and prodded the gelding's sides with the heel of his boot, too little avail; the actions just appeared to make Dusty even more determined in his quest for utter defiance, "we could probably do with a rest," the boy agreed, having given up on fighting with the horse when it was often easier to just let him have his fill before trying again. This, however, gave Yvan the opportunity to work on his ability with the crossbow.

Having only handled the weapon once or twice after going over the basics with his mother, Yvan attempted to determine how the weapon worked once more. He took a bolt from his rucksack and loaded it backwards into the stock, pulling the string back to set against the nut before tickling the trigger nervously with his finger. Excitement welled within the boy, and before getting down from the horse, he fired at a nearby tree, missing the trunk by a good three feet.
Yvan

 

When There Was Sun

Postby Yvan on January 6th, 2016, 10:30 pm

Dusty snorted and shook his mane from side to side like a wet dog, only to settle again, content just to graze and bask in the warmth of the early morning sun. Wasting no time, Yvan loaded another bolt into the stock and took aim once more, holding the heavy weapon up to point at the tree trunk. He put his finger over the trigger, set his sights, and fired, but nothing happened.

The young boy studied the crossbow for a moment and realised he hadn't pulled the string back, locking it over the small, bronze nut that would hold it in place. With the proper corrections made, Yvan raised the weapon again, and this time, adjusted his aim so that he was sure he would hit the broad side of the tree.

With the trigger sprung and the bolt set free, he watched another piece of ammo go sailing by the trunk of the tree and out into the woods somewhere. Again he had missed, but this would not deter him, not in the slightest. Yvan freed another bolt from his pack and fixed it in place against the stock, pulled back the string and locked it in place once again over the nut. This time before he fired, he moved the crossbow so that he was aiming for the right side of the tree rather than dead centre; perhaps the sights were off he rationalised with himself before taking another shot.

Success… almost, the bolt skimmed the side of the tree, taking off a handful of bark, which seemed to shatter upon impact. After collecting the bolt, Yvan went looking for the other two missing pieces, nudging at tufts of grass with the toe of his boot, and bending down to look under bushes or through the thick undergrowth.
Yvan

 

When There Was Sun

Postby Yvan on January 6th, 2016, 10:30 pm

While searching for his bolts in the undergrowth, something rustled up ahead and darted out of the grass only to stop a few metres away on the road and look back at the person disturbing his home. A fat spring rabbit stood on his hind quarters with ears pricked and eyes wide, looking straight at the boy. Yvan slowly placed a bolt along the stock of the crossbow and pulled back the string and set the weapon without making too many sudden movements.

Yvan lifted the crossbow, bringing the tail closer to his face this time so that he could see down the sights properly. The weight of the weapon made his narrow little arms shake, and propping the wing against the trunk of a tree for balance, he managed to still this action. The rabbit's ears were slowly lowered as he crept a step or two further from the boy, using his front paws to skip forwards cautiously. Undeterred, Yvan squinted, took his time and released a bolt only when he was sure that he would strike the target.

The bolt whizzed past the rabbit and stuck up out of the road like a small, brown candle. The rabbit, feeling the air rush by it, fled into the thick undergrowth on the other side of the road, safe for another day. Yvan sighed, and then with brows raised, found a bolt at his feet and with the second taking from the path pointed to the outpost, he had only managed to lose one of his mother’s crossbow bolts.

Returning to Dusty, Yvan struggled to climb up onto the old gelding's back without the overturned bucket, but managed to get his foot up in one of the stirrups, take hold of the horse's mane, and with a little effort, pull himself up high enough to throw his leg over the beast's back. With a firm tug on the reins, he managed to gain the animal's attention and after knocking Dusty in the side a few times, the horse even walked forwards onto the road. "Get up!" Yvan encouraged, causing the horse to trot towards home, "no!" Yvan called and with a firm tug on the right side of the rein, managed to bring the horse around so that they were headed in the right direction.
Yvan

 

When There Was Sun

Postby Yvan on January 6th, 2016, 10:31 pm

Having built up a little confidence now, Yvan pushed the old hack to speed up, darting a heel against his side and calling out encouragingly. The gelding went from a trot to a too-quick-canter, and after a few hundred feet passed them by, Yvan had the animal slow down again, not wanting to risk a fall; as brave as he was feeling a moment ago, the nervous excitement that welled within him called for some sense and calm.

They rode well into the afternoon and by the time Yvan had returned home his legs were tired and his arms felt jolted by all the energy it took to stay on such a creature. He steered Dusty up to the bucket, which still remained turned on its top outside of the cottage, and slowly got down.

Yvan undid the saddle and returned Dusty to his stall before undoing the end straps on the reins. The young boy carried the heavy saddle back to the house, stumbling this way and that every now and then on a rough bit of ground, with the unloaded crossbow balanced on top of the leather seat. His mother helped him once he got inside and hung the weapon up out of reach of her two younger children, a son and a daughter, and kissed her eldest on the top of his head, "you've got one more chore to do young man."
"I know," Yvan grumbled and took the bucket from beside the door to go out into the small plot they owned behind the cottage and start milking the goat; a farm boy’s work was never done.
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When There Was Sun

Postby Plume on January 6th, 2016, 11:16 pm

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Yvan
Observation +5 XP
Endurance +4 XP
Animal Husbandry +3 XP
Running +3 XP
Gardening +1 XP
Logic +1 XP
Interrogation +2 XP
Body Building +3 XP
Negotiation +1 XP
Horsemanship +2 XP
Riding: Horse +4 XP
Rhetoric +2 XP
Weapon: Crossbow +3 XP
Tactics +1 XP
Stealth +1 XP

Lores :
  • Animal Husbandry: Mixing Chicken Feed
  • Animal Husbandry: Ingredients of Pig Slop
  • Animal Husbandry: Mixing Dog Food
  • Gardening: Marking Green Bean Growth
  • Mizas and Clutches of Chicks
  • Horsemanship: Firmness is Key
  • Crossbow: How to Lock a Crossbow String
  • Tactics: Aiming a Crossbow
  • A Farmboy's Work is Never Done
  • Horseriding: Basic Controls


Notes :
Well written and told, I enjoyed very much ^_^

I have gone ahead and graded this thread for two reasons: 1) I worked with Yvan personally to resolve some lore and geographical issues in his flashback. He was very cooperative and thoroughly fixed everything, so because of my involvement and the problems addressed I decided it would be best if I graded it immediately while said issues were fresh in both of our heads. 2) I jumped the gun and his deleted grade request, so I am amending my mistake.

Hope that clarifies things for any concerned parties. Happy RPing!!
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