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This lazy agricultural settlement rests on the swampy shores of the Middle Suvan at the delta of The Kenash River. The River's slow moving bayou waters have bred a different sort of people - rugged, cultured, and somewhat violent. Sprawling plantations of tobacco and cotton grow on the outskirts of the swamp in the rich Cyphrus soils, while the city itself curls around the bayou and spawns decadence and sins of all sorts. Life is slower in Kenash, but the lack of pace is made up for in the excesses of food and flesh in a city where drinking, debauchery, gambling, slavery, and overbearing plantation families dominate the landscape.

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Postby Konrad Venger on March 7th, 2016, 5:05 am

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56th Day of Spring, 516AV - The Traveler's Complex


"Surprised you're finding the time to meet up like this."

"This is important."

"Is it?"

"If y'don't think so, I'll take me coin back..."


Ah, that cut the questions short from Trevin, as both men knew it would. The carter-turned-mage turned over the coins in his hand and then pocketed them, most decisively.

"I'm of the mind it's important."

"Aye, though ya would be."


A rumble passed between the two men, pleasant enough and to the minor surprise of Trevin. Yes, he had become almost... no, comfortable was too generous a term... but he felt he understood Venger. The man wanted to learn, and he'd latched onto a reliable teacher. Their lessons were infrequent thanks to the sellsword's new position, but whenever he found a spare night, invariably he'd be knocking on the carter's door, coin in hand.

With that gorgeous creature unattended in his chamber, no less, Trevin thought with more than a touch of envy. He'd seen Coryn plenty on their journey. Even if she wasn't an Ethaefal, she was a beauty, and this scarred dog in front of him had her every night. Must really value his schooling...

"Ready to begin?"

"Aye,"
the carter said as he locked the door. "Gonna open a window."

"Gods, feel fuckin' free..."


Konrad felt the blast of fuggy air as soon as the glass-and-wooden barrier was opened. Not a patch on the heat of the day, but still enough to make him wince just barely. He'd seen his share of brutal Summers in Sunberth, and thought he knew what real, naked heat was. Then he arrived in Kenash, and in the space of less than twenty days, the air seemed to thicken like the dregs of a boiling cauldron.

"Barely step outside during the day," he said with a shake of his head. "How does this place survive, with the weather like this all the bloody time?"

"Because there's money to be made,"
Trevin answered, handing him a sloshing cup and toasting. "Of course."

Aye, true enough.

He drained the cup and it wasn't near cold enough for his liking. He felt the lukewarm liquid drain out of him as sweat almost as soon as it had passed his throat, but forced another cup down anyway. Dehydration, they called it. He'd always thought it was just "dying of thirst", but the apothecaries... they always had their own language for the simple things.

The Sunberthian snorted softly as he felt the merest lick of a breeze through the window. Gods, even that was scorching. Fitting, though, that tonight as Kenash sweltered and waited with languid impatience for some respite, he was learning how to heat things up even more.

"Been practicing?"

"Little bits, here and there."


He sat in his usual seat and almost as soon as his arse had settled, he held out his hand in the pseudo-claw Trevin had advised him to use... and breathed out slowly.

He still had to look at it. Focus on the scar and then breathe. That was the key, he was finding. It centered him. Made sense, on some instinctive level. He remembered Trevin's words nights before - how breathing out was drawing the gas into a ball, breathing in was pulling it back - and found it worked for him.

Trevin nodded with a teacher's approval as the familiar green-black gas snaked from Konrad's fingered and congealed into a ball between them like water running into a pot, forming a tiny planet of rotating res above his palm.

And... back in...

The white shirt made splotchy with sweat expanded with his chest as Konrad's body obeyed his mind, and his res obeyed his will. The ball fell apart like it had been tapped with a hammer, only the pieces fell softly into his palm... and then sunk into them like wreckage beneath the waves. When the final scrap was gone Konrad closed his hand, then turned it over... opened it back up for Trevin to inspect.

Which he did, in comical detail.

"Hmm... looks good." Konrad smirked but Trevin did not. He'd been paid for a service, after all. This was business. "Any pain? From last time?"

"No, y'got me stoppin' in time. Some aches the next mornin', but nuffin' that lasted past lunch."

"Good. You're making progress."


Konrad shrugged and nodded. Always paid to keep people at ease when they were useful to you, he'd found. Of course, fear was his oldest, most reliable method for that, but he'd seen what Trevin was capable of. The humble carter? Pah. An act. A cover. He'd seen the man hurl light and breath flame. Better to compliment, to flatter, as much as it galled him.

A fresh thought crossed his mind; added a touch of warmth and sincerity to the words that followed. He was glad Trevin could not pluck thoughts from the air, as well.

"Good teacher, I guess."

"Was that a compliment from your lips, Venger?"

"Mighta' been."


A snort. Maybe the old boy saw right through him. Maybe not. Either way, two weeks from then, it wouldn't matter. Konrad rolled his head from side to side, neck cracking as he did, weariness of the day shuffled off as he stretched his arms... and raised an eyebrow.

"Next?"

"Same as before, lad,"
Trevin said, smile widening. "Only this time, yer playing catch, too."

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Postby Konrad Venger on March 8th, 2016, 4:39 am

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It sounded insane. Then again, a season ago, so would have the idea that he, Konrad Venger, would have a ball of fire created from his own magic and personal willpower bobbing gently above his palm.

Something doesn't have to be sane for it to be real, Konrad thought as he watched the green ball with black flecks form above his hand. His focus was improving. Repetition seemed to be the key.

"Light it."

Konrad's eyes twitched and it really was a simply as wishing. Thinking. But the physical action that followed... it helped. It anchored him in the fleshy reality of what he was doing. So as he thought he blew gently, just like he would onto kindly at a campfire-

Green and black became yellow and orange. Flickering and dancing upward only to spin onward. Fuzzy with darting fire... and he opened his other hand.

"Remember," Trevin said, in between sips of water. Gods, but was it hot that night. "An apple, a catching ball, that flame. It's all the same. It's all... there." He pointed at the sellsword's head and then cracked a smile. "Just don't actually catch it."

"Yeah, I figured that part..."

"Go ahead."


He stared at the ball, flexed his left hand in readiness. But really, how was he to catch it without catching it? His mind raced. He didn't have forever. He could feel the writhing beginnings of weakness start to needle his muscles. They'd never had to exert in this fashion before; they were unused and unprepared for this breed of... fatigue.

You're wasting time. Just... toss it. And the same way you're keeping it in the air now, keep it in the air a foot away.

Konrad flexed his open palm and the ball above it seemed to bounce on the air above it, gliding in a lazy arc between his hands. It was a long tick. Konrad saw the ball smack into his palm, burn through flesh and fat and bone, devour everything it touched and then do the same to that poor floor.

He got a carpet, at least. Smart.

Will. That was all he had. All he ever needed, so when the ball of flame started to fall he focused, frowned, pursed his lips and made the thought as real as the muscles flexing in his limb-

Stop!

-and it did. Rotating, hissing, immolating itself... but no longer falling. Only now it was above his left hand, not his right. Konrad managed a smile, but it hurt his cheeks. Sweat ran into the corners of his mouth and it wasn't just from the humidity leaking in through the window.

Time to end it.

"Good. Now put it-"

Konrad was already blowing. Part of him already knew that it wasn't his breath doing it. It was his thoughts. But still, that anchor...

Colors changed again. Orange and yellow vanished, eating inwards, growing tiny by the tick until it was grey smoke, the merest whisper of what it had been. Konrad sat there for half a chime, afraid that if he lost his focus, it would flare into life again and come back for him... but it didn't.

Finally he relaxed, exhaled, slumped a little in his seat and stretched his arms. Damn... few kinks there that weren't present before. Would every time be like this? Gods knew what would happen if he tried to ape what he'd seen Trevin do that night the Zith attacked. Probably end up as crispy as that pork he'd had earlier that day.

"Better and better," Trevin said, and filled up their mugs. "Now keep drinking water. Not a smart thing to be practicing, when yer running low on liquid."

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Postby Konrad Venger on March 8th, 2016, 5:03 am

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"Mind if I ask a question?"

He knew what it would be about before the carter opened his mouth. He'd received it in a couple of variations over the last dozen or so days, from a variety of souls. Freeborn and "Dynasty", as the lords of this city ere called. But not until they saw him with her. Then it became the only question.

"Depends onna' question."

Trevin snorted and downed another cup. The jug was half-empty already, between the two of them.

"Fair enough... you ever make it with that girl?"

Then it was Konrad's turn to snort, and top it with a smirk. "Make it"? Like she was his woman? How droll. Konrad had never had a woman, not in the sense that Trevin probably... well, no, the man had been young, once. He'd probably paid for cunt as much as the next man who worked a lonely job, always traveling, taking comfort where he could. But he never looked into the mirror and saw Konrad's face.

"Yeah," he said with a shrug, choosing his words carefully, even as he lied. "Good as you'd imagine, I'd wager."

"Lucked out with that one, old son,"
the mage said with a wink that made Konrad's guts tighten for a second. "A beauty and an Ethaefal? And you didn't even have to pay for her. Lucky, lucky..."

Konrad's smile stayed in place like it was carved into his skin. Stapled onto his expression without any humor or goodwill radiating from it. The cup creaked in protest as his hand tightened for a moment.

"Aye. That's me. Lucky."

Trevin seemed to get the idea... or maybe chugging lukewarm water was more interesting to him. Konrad welcomed the silence, until it wasn't silent anymore. Until the whispers in his mind started to hound him and closing his eyes only made them louder.

He wasn't dead below the waist. He knew beauty and a tome of carnal fantasies became living and frenzied whenever he looked at her... but he never reached out. Her wyrd... that was the core of it. When he touched her, he... felt. Emotions and imperatives, alien and absurd, in no way relating to him, not since he'd been small and helpless.

Those nights ended the same way. With his teeth clenched and that lust turned to something very close to hatred. If touching her did that, what would fucking her do to him? Make him devoted to her? Slavish and helpless?

Yes. Helpless. Soft and weak.

I will never be that again. Not for anyone.


"Venger? Oi, you in there, mate?"

The buzzing in his ears was not, as it turned out, a stray blood-fly. He blinked and an ocean of words and sensations poured back into a mind faraway and brooding. Trevin was staring at him with a frown crushing his eyes, looking him over with what Konrad had termed the "teacher look".

"You feeling okay?"

"Aye, just... this heat. Fryin' me brain."
He finished his cup and waggled the empty vessel. "One more an' we'll get back to it, yeah?"

"Hey, you paid for the lesson."

"What's next?"

"Well,"
Glug-glug-glug. Gods, would he have to drink that much when he was that old? Or was this the way of fire-mages, always burning inside and needing the flames forever quenched? Trevin smacked his lips and nodded at his student. "Long as we keep 'em marbles, I think it's time to double up."
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Postby Konrad Venger on March 8th, 2016, 5:32 am

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"Remember: don't think of them like two things. That'll split your attention. You're making one. Just happen to be doing it twice. And at the same time."

Konrad hoped his expression conveyed his dubious opinion, but if Trevin caught on, he wasn't saying. Instead he just gestured to his student and rested his hands on his knees, while Konrad raised both his hands, palm up.

"Remember... breath... focus... in... and-"

Out...

The break had been a good idea. As he exhaled and started to draw the res from his fingers, Konrad felt the strain of before doubled. Beforehand, with just one, he wouldn't have felt it at all. But now it was like carrying two light sacks instead of one; light as they were, they were still heavier together. His arms pulsed and his muscles quivered, but as his lungs emptied... he drew the res upward above his palms.. and made two trembling little balls.

"Not as solid as with just one," Trevin noted, and even Konrad could see they were hardly perfect circles. More like blobs of swamp water, suspended in mid-air. "But you're new to this. Now, when you're ready..."

The first time for anything was the hardest, and this was no different. But it wasn't the first time he'd made flames out of his res, so that time when he exhaled, he did so with his head arcing from side to side, like he was blowing out candles on a cake.

POOF

POOF


One after the other, the balls became flame. Shaky and twitching, and Konrad could already feel his arms begin to weaken. But he was doing it, holding them in place. Trevin could see the younger man was already near his limit, so he wasted no time, leaning forward to convey his urgency.

"A'right, now... push them together. Make them one."

"How-"

"Remember how you played catch?"


Yes. The lessons. The experience. The practice. Konrad had spent bells, days, a small fortune in his younger years to study with the Dragoons in Sunberth (at least until his face became to notorious for them to allow him entry), so he knew all about training. This was the point, that by repeating it would become easier.

Djed or blades. The rule applies.

He breathed in deep, fortifying himself as he angled his hands... and started to push the tiny fireballs closer together. He watched them mesh, latching onto each other like lovers, burning together, and she was in his head again, just for a moment-

"Focus"

-he blinked again and they were wavering, falling apart, shedding drops of burning res until Konrad clenched down hard on his teeth and forced them back together-

-spasm of pain ripping up his arms that he barely held back. No pain like this. Not the intensity, but how strange it was. His skin was untouched and yet he felt flayed, burning in his bones and he knew he had to-

"Put 'em out."

Konrad blew, breath coming out with a shudder and a cough. For a tick he thought the fire would ignore it, then remembered it wasn't the air he was using, but his mind, and he willed the ball to die just as a spike rammed through his brain-

"Shyke!"

The fireball didn't just die; it was crushed. There was a "pop!" and smoke blew out in a brief, perfect sphere as the fireball was practically stamped on by his mind. He yelped and pressed a hand to his face, feeling his skull shake under it. Trevin was already filling up a cup and placing it in his hand.

"Drink."

"Fuck, I'm fine-"

"Not asking, do it."


He cursed, he snapped, he growled, but he did it all in his head. His throat was burning, same bleeding sensation making his mouth taste like rancid gum. He washed it down with the water even as he choked on it, every cough pounding fresh nails into his head. His eyes screwed shut and his will scrambled, Konrad stayed in the chair out of sheer, bloody instinct.

Don't show weakness. Not for anyone. Not even. Handle it, you mewling brat!

"m'fine," he sputtered, opening his eyes and focusing on Trevin's face. Nearly glaring at him as he beat his body back into line. "'m... m'okay, jus'... jus'..."

"Yeah, yeah, I know. Maybe a little too far tonight. But y'did well, boy. A'right, roll yer sleeves up, let me look at you..."


Last thing he wanted, but sensibility prevailed over pride. He paid for lessons, for expertise, and that was Trevin's purpose, such as he was. He feared to see what he'd done to himself, every inch of flesh he revealed seeming yo increase the odds that he'd end up uncovering something hellish, but...

"Nothing lasting," Trevin said with a knowing tone, turning Konrad's arms over and poking blotchy little patches here and there. "These'll be tender for a while-"

"Fuck, yeah, I see that-!"

"But nothing else to worry about. Just don't be practicing until next we met, aye?"


Konrad gave a "mmmhmm" as his answer, busy chugging down water like he was aping his teacher. It seemed to help. "An' when'll that be?"

"When yer free, I guess. Leave it a few days. But not too long..."
He pointed at the chart that was now more than half way full. Nearly two-thirds. "I'll probably be leaving sooner. Once the heat eases up, the caravans'll be rushing to get out before it returns. Man like me, he'll be in high demand."

"What? A lifelong... carter?"


Another rumble, and Konrad kept it going even though it hurt his head. Yes, keep the man laughing, at ease, unconcerned. His sand had nearly run its course and Konrad needed to get serious about his... endgame. Next lesson, he'd find out what Trevin's departure was. Once he knew that-

"Oh, and, ah..." The carter spoke again as his hand touched the door handle. Konrad turned and found that smirk back in place. He'd seen that, too. On many faces. All of them with her next to him. "If you're of the mind, I'd pay well for a night with yer girl. Don' worry, wouldn't rough her up or anything. Not how I enjoy it, y'know?"

"It". He didn't even had to say "fucking" and Konrad already had flashes of his pallid, sweaty carcass grinding and pumping above that smooth, flawless body. He bared his teeth and fashioned it into something like a smile, trying to go for "wolfish" instead of "fuck off". He nodded his head a little from side to side, face a mask of comic appraisal.

Konrad had lied since he'd learned to talk. He relied on that experience then, and heavily.

"I'll keep it in mind. Always use the extra coin, right?"

"S'what I was thinking."

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Postby Cocoon on April 12th, 2016, 11:31 am

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... Coming...

This was a nice thread. I really enjoyed grading it, even if it took me a while. You have a neat writing style that makes it very pleasant to read and grade. Let's see what your writing talent has given Konrad...

 
Konrad Venger
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  • Socialization +1
  • Endurance +3
  • Subterfuge: +1
  • Rhetoric +2
  • Reimancy: +3
  • Acting +1
Lores
  • Kenash: Unbearable heat
  • Dehydration between magic lessons
  • Meditation: Importance of Breathing
  • Reimancy: Basic Fireball Control
  • Konrad: Lust is fine, sentiments are not
  • Konrad: Hides his weaknesses
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  • Konrad is now competent in Endurance. His pain and endurance threshold has increased.


 
Notes
Yet another great thread. I enjoyed this one a slightly more than the previous ones of this series, mostly because of your will to reveal something personal about Konrad. His capacity to ignore Coryn's beauty and avoid falling in her bed in order to keep himself as rugged as ever surprised me. Even more, you portrayed Trevin as something more than just a simple NPC by giving him some depth, in this case in the sense of lust for Coryn. Furthermore, his internal dialogue and despise of Konrad is very useful to know both sides of the picture. Curious how money can make two men work together, even if they hate each other's guts. :P


As far as critique, there isn't much to say. This was a pretty basic thread focused towards gaining Reimancy skill points, and I've said all I had to say in the previous threads. I look forward to witnessing Konrad in another situation, maybe with some PCs and a thread that revolves about some other subject.

If you're wondering why this once you didn't get any overgiving or magic use consequences, I've got the answer to that too. As Konrad has been spreading his lessons and taking things so slowly (which is very well done by your part) his Djed reserves are slowly increasing, and his body is getting used to the expenses. However. I am assuming Konrad is living under Common living expenses. Common living expenses covers most of the food, which directly influences Djed regeneration. If he was to live under Poor living expenses this spring, you need to tell me. The consequences for magic use would be more severe in that case. The same situation would happen if he was living under Good living expenses. His body would be capable of recovering Djed faster, thus avoiding any mild damages unless Konrad used Reimancy recklessly.


Please let me know if you believe I've missed something or if you have doubts if I have/haven't awarded you a certain skill/lore.

Happy writing!
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