Makah'a's Plotnotes

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Makah'a's Plotnotes

Postby Makah'a on April 17th, 2017, 5:48 am


Skills to Develop

    Unarmed Combat
    Weapon Skills

Skills to Learn

    Land Navigation
    blind fighting (sort of relearning it?)


517 AV
Summer 517 AV
Get a job
Rekindle - Alethia of Kalanue

(on hold) Khida - train combat
+ horseback training?
+ Explore past at Ahnnatep, his escape
+ Develop friendship -rekindling, philosophies, ecology

Spring 517 AV
Interact with Quzon
Travelling to Endrykas on the 78th with Quzon and Estraki
Returning Home
+ "Will he return home?"
+ "If he does, how?"
+ Reconciliation between him and his family
+ "Will he stay?"

The "Searching"
+ "When will he gain his Guardian?"
+ If so, thread - get assigned Guardian
+ "What will this do for him?"

+ Overall arc
+ Identity
+ Acceptance
+ Need more details


Nothing so far.

Past/Flashbacks Only
Sensitive :
Delve deeper into the traumas from slavery.
What did they do to him?
How did he react?
Did he fight back?
How did he mentally endure?
Flashbacks explaining why he lacks emotion

* What affect has all of this done to him now?

Further understand his views on justice
Why is he just?
What keeps him from swaying?
Who influenced this?

Is he inherently violent?
Has his slavery days affected his views on violence?

Who are they?
His relationship to his mother- why it was so strong.
His relationship with his father - support, knowledge
Pleasant flashbacks with his immediate family
Flashbacks on the bullying
Flashbacks of the tribe: other Chaktawe PCs interacting with Makah'a when he was a kid

Create NPCs or PCs for Makah'a's parents and siblings
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Makah'a's Plotnotes

Postby Makah'a on July 4th, 2017, 9:25 pm


Race Info:


Gods of Interest:

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Makah'a's Plotnotes

Postby Makah'a on July 4th, 2017, 10:15 pm


What is he like?

Personality :
He has been alone for so long he's used to it.
Lonely - since his capture, has been without his parents for nearly half his life. Homesick. But even if he does return, would everything be as it was? Doesn't trust many people after his time at Ahnnatep, probably why he doesn't have too many friends.
- He's not really hostile, but guarded.
- When he knows someone, he is more receptive and willing to talk than to a stranger.
- on the street, he looks stern, but when given a kind gesture, welcomes it with sincerity.
- Owners beat him. When he cried, he was beaten, when he whimpered, or fought back he was beaten. He feels he cannot express his emotions, so he bottles it up and doesn't tell anyone what he really feels. It's why he doesn't talk much about himself, but also why he always seems stern all the time. He doesn't know how else to convey emotions because there was never any gain from expressing.(must do a flashback about this to flesh this idea out a bit more/research).
Lost - no guidance. No guardian, no god to believe in, no parental figure to have aided him after his capture. Winging everything on his own, and so far is doing okay, at least better than at Ahnnatep!
- He's endured a lot, so conflicts are not as difficult as they could be for others.
- Optimistic, at least through determination. He is determined to succeed in his goals, and that determination led to optimism. "If I got out of slavery on my own, I can do anything!"
- One thing he knows for sure is he needs to return home. And he's aware that even if he returns home, the adventuring he's done will call him back and push him to leave.

Take Note:

- this is more what he really is.
- this seems to be more how he is with others.

Ideas of where to go with him:

- Get him involved in a faction
- Push him to pursue a leadership position
- Put him in a conflict where he must exercise diplomacy
- Or act on conflict as warrior
- Let him learn more philosophy/open mindedness
- Explore/rekindle with his Benshira and Chaktawe heritage
- Mold him into a just warrior. No mercy, but fair.
- Explore his views on justice.
- Express his more "Logistician" flaws and traits.
after that, then work on his path towards self enlightenment/identity/acceptance of past and who he is and his more "Advocate" like traits.
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Makah'a's Plotnotes

Postby Makah'a on September 22nd, 2017, 6:44 pm

Character Development

General Information :
1. What is your Name?
2. Do you go by a nickname or pet name?
3. How old are you?
4. What is your height?
5. What is your weight?

Aesthetics :
1. Describe yourself as you see yourself.
2. Describe yourself as others typically see you.
3. What is your favorite body feature?
4. How physically fit are you?
5. How do you typically dress and what is your style?

Family :
1. Who are your parents and what are they like?
2. Do you have any brothers or sisters?
3. What is your extended family like?
4. Do you consider close friends as important or more/less important than family?
5. Do you treat animals like family?

Location :
1. Where were you born?
2. Where do you live now?
3. If you could live anywhere in Mizahar where would that be?
4. Do you have a favorite place to vacation or spend leisure time?
5. Where do you fear to be?

Traits :
1. Do you have any physical weaknesses (disease, scars, and missing limbs?)
2. Are you right handed or left handed?
3. What languages do you speak? What do you sound like? Do you have an accent?
4. Do you have any odd mannerisms, annoying habits, or other defining characteristics?
5. Do you have (or want to get) any tattoos or piercing? Why do you have them (or will get them) ?

Occupations :
1. What is your occupation?
2. Do you like/dislike your work? Why?
3. If you could be anything you wanted to, what would you be?
4. What occupation do you admire the most? Why?
5. What occupation do you lest like? Why?

Childhood :
1. What sort of child were you?
2. What is your favorite memory from childhood?
3. What is your worst memory from childhood?
4. What sort of relationship did you have with your parents?
5. Who was your most influential rolemodel?

Education :
1. What sort of education do you have?
2. Do you like/dislike learning?
3. Where or how did you learn most of your skills/abilities?
4. How do you learn best?
5. What are your educational goals for the future?

Relationships :
1. Do you form close bonds with people? Why? Why not?
2. Do you trust people easily? If not, why not?
3. Do you consider yourself straight, gay, bi, or something else?
4. Have you ever been kissed? If so, describe the first time.
5. Have you ever had sex? If so, describe the first time.

Drugs and Alcohol :
1. Have you ever been drunk? If so, describe your first time.
2. Do you like to drink on a regular basis?
3. What sort of alcohol do you prefer?
4. Have you ever tried drugs (mood altering substances)? If so, which kinds and what did you think of them?
5. What do you think of drugs and alcohol? Be specific.

Likes and Dislikes :
1. What are your hobbies?
2. Do you like to read?
3. What annoys you more than anything else?
4. What do you find the most relaxing activity to do?
5. What kinds of things embarrass you? Why?

Favorites :
1. What is your favorite color or colors?
2. What is your favorite time of day?
3. What is the most beautiful thing you’ve ever seen?
4. What do you like to eat? What do you hate to eat?
5. What is your favorite type of weather? Does any kind scare you?

Outlook :
1. Are you optimistic or pessimistic?
2. What are your religious views?
3. Would you be able to kill?
4. What are your views on sex?
5. What, in your opinion, makes a successful life?

Actions :
1. What is the worst and best thing you’ve ever done?
2. What is your greatest regret?
3. What is your best/worst memory?
4. If you could change one thing about your past, what would it be and why?
5. What are you the most proud of doing in your life?

Emotions :
1. How honest are you about your thoughts and feelings with others?
2. Do you have any biases or prejudices?
3. What makes you happy?
4. Who or what, if anything, would you die for?
5. What makes you angry?

Relationships :
1. In general, how do you treat others?
2. Who is the most important person in your life, and why?
3. Who is the person you respect the most, and why?
4. Do you have a spouse or significant other? If not, describe an ideal lover.
5. Do you trust anyone to protect you? Who, and why

Group Situations :
1. Do you tend to argue with people, or avoid conflict?
2. Do you tend to take on leadership roles in social situations?
3. Do you like interacting with large groups of people? Why or why not?
4. Do you care what others think of you?
5. What do you think of others, in general?

Self Image :
1. What is your greatest strength as a person?
2. What is your greatest weakness?
3. If you could change one thing about yourself, what would it be?
4. Are you generally introverted or extroverted?
5. Are you generally organized or messy?

Beliefs :
1. What God or Goddess do you find most appealing, if any?
2. Which God or Goddess do you fear, if any?
3. Do you have any Gnosis Marks? If so, how did you receive them?
4. What lengths would you go to to please your deity?
5. Where do you draw the line at pleasing your deity? What is too much?

Life & Death :
1. What do you absolutely live for?
2. What is the best part of life?
3. What is the best part of death?
4. If you could choose, how would you want to die?
5. What is the one thing for which you would most like to be remembered after your death?
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