Revelin

[Revelin]

Revelin Ghost Revelin(After Death) Bat Kelvic(Before Death) Basic Information Race: Ghost Birthday & Age : Born 486 AV; Death 508 AV Gender: Female Physical Description Once a beautiful young Kelvic Bat Revelin with long flowing black hair, smoky blue eyes, full pale lips and pale white skin; always with her sad smile of loneliness she is a ghost of her former self(no pun intended). Her hair stayed it dark black and her skin is no the translucent white, the red markings that cover her face and body are her own blood painted as a constant reminder, her lips now stained red with the blood of D’Nima. Her eyes once peaceful now show hollow black-red, empty, pupil-less and soul sucking. Her face retained is sad loneliness though, ever staring at the things she will never gain back. She stands at around 4’8. Character Concept Once kind, soft, lonely and loving she is now hard as the frozen Taldera region. Her only purpose for being is revenge and it consumes her, twists her. Sadistic, sarcastic and cruel she is prone to fits of giddy laughter, she hates the living for being what she is not and curses the dead for not finishing their purpose in life. Though she retains some of her knowledge and often has insight one would not expect she is goal driven and lacks any moral compass. She will kill whoever stands in her way and is not above throwing an innocent into her plot to meet her ends. Her voice is low and gravelly and matched her sombre and caustic tones. Character History Revelin was originally a Bat Kelvic. Her job was a guide and protector; she would bond with her master until their mission was finished. Her mission was N’Dima a wealthy young girl of twenty looking for a husband and a way to see the world. They traveled together for four years, in which time they became as close as sisters, Revelin would have gladly fallen on her own sword if it were to make N’Dima happy and vice versa. They lived peacefully for those years nearly forgetting their mission both simply happy in each other’s company. D'Nima Then N’Dime fell in love and quickly became engaged. The man was simple human rouge with deadly ulterior motives. He and his family wished to be Mortanis and wanted to prove themselves first and what better way than to kill a Konti far away from home. Revelin disliked him from the start seeing him as stealing away her favorite and most beloved person and when she realized what he was it was much too late. N’Dime having envisioned Revelin dying because she stays by her side and so asked her fiancé’ to marry her and take her away. Fearing he had been discovered before the allotted time he wished to depose of her that same night she told him of her vision he caught and drugged Revelin in her Bat form and skinned her alive in front of N’Dime. In her shock and pain at having lost Revelin she did not fight thinking it was her penance to die for not heeding her visions. Larcrox Revelin was not dead though, the pain was strong and she was dying, of that there was no doubt and so she watched her dearest companion raped and murdered; her rage new no bounds. It was then she made her choice. She may die, she may damn her soul but she would kill him hundreds of times over every time he was reborn she would hunt and kill all he loved, all he touched. Ghost Skills/Skills/Lore Materialization: 10 RB Possession: 10 SP Soul mist Projection: 10 SP Observation: 10 SP Intimidation: 10 SP Manipulation: 10 SP Languages Common--Proficient Konti—Basic Fratava--Poor Equipment and Possessions A lock of her and D’Nima’s hair braided together and buried where they died. Her clothes and other worldly possessions are long forgotten at the place she last was alive. Ledger 600GM Her coin is also buried with the hair and if she ever is to find D’Nima’s Reincarnation she hopes to give it to her. Thread List Finding the right person (Kasche)

[Tattoo]

Hello Revelin and Welcome to Mizahar,

I'm Tattoo, the Character Sheet Liaison, which means I'm the official 'helper' here in the CS forum. I noticed some things about your CS that need improvement. I know it can be a struggle wading through all the lore and getting your character in playable shape - starting with the CS. That's where I come in.

The only thing I noticed out of place was you have no starting Lores. I would recommend Lore of Losing a Friend and Lore of Duty of a Bodyguard.

Everything else looks great. Please make the appropriate changes to your CS and PM me, I'll remove this post. Thank you for the CS and I look forward to reading your posts. Welcome to Mizahar