Violet Mayonaka

[Violet Mayonaka]

Race: Kelvic(Black Panther)
Birthday: 5th of Spring 509 AV (2)
Gender: Female
Height: 5'5"
Weight: 115lb
Skin: Pale
Eye Color: Yellow-Green
Hair Color: Black (Long)
Other: Slightly Elongated Eye Teeth

Languages: English-fluent French-Poor
Home Region: Alvadas
Personality:Quiet, Somewhat Childish, Hard to control unless she likes the person, Highly Protective
Ethics: Believes in war when it is necessary
History: Woke up outside Alvadas with no memory of her past
Flaws & Merits
-finds it hard to trust
-over protective of those who are kind to her
Skill Points
-Cooking: 20
-Running: 10
-Brawling: 20
-Hunting: 10
Lore
-None acquired yet
Equipment
-tight blue bodice
-simple black pants
-black cloak w/ hood
-Plain black shoes
-comb, brush, razor, soap
-food for a week
-flint and steel
-eating knife
Heirloom Item
-plain silver locket w/ a claw on the inside
Mizas
100gm
Threads
http://www.mizahar.com/forums/post101626.html#p101626 Summer 511 AV
http://www.mizahar.com/forums/post101631.html#p101631 OOC

[Scar]

Hello, first of all I would like to say welcome to Mizahar! I am your friendly character sheet liaison, my job is to make sure your character sheet is ready for playing and to make this as easy as possible.

First would be your skills, you are missing your racial bonus as a Kelvic. You are allowed 50 starting points and gain an extra 10 in hunting for your race.

Next you need to notate which item is your heirloom item.

Next would be lore, you are allowed up to two starting out. Lore is not a skill you can build but more like specific knowledge you can talk about. For instance: if you climb a tree you get a skill point for climbing the tree, but if you fall out of that tree you might get the lore "falling out of a tree". Falling out of a tree is not something you can get better at but it is something you can tell other people that you know about it.

You are also missing languages. You are allowed up to three: One at the fluent level, one at the basic level and one at the poor level. You do not have to take all three. A lot of people only have the fluent level. Might I suggest common. Also as a Kelvic, your ability to speak with others of your breed is a racial ability and does not have to be listed as an official language.

Everything else looks good so far! Please make any mentioned corrections or additions and if you have any questions feel free to PM me or leave me a notice in my office. Once the corrections are made please PM me to let me know and I will remove this notice and you will be ready to play.

Thank you so much for your patience,

Scar