[The Freight Docks] Dancing in the Dark [Lucette]

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[The Freight Docks] Dancing in the Dark [Lucette]

Postby Magpie on June 12th, 2013, 1:02 pm

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Talen :
XP:
Observation +5
Planning +2
Hunting +2
Running +1
Weapon: Longsword +1

Lores:
A Shadow, Or Something More?
When to Run, When to Hunt
Using Your Surroundings to Your Advantage
Corralling a Beast
A Kelvic Transformation
Comforting a Scared, Naked, Kelvic
A Gentleman Minds his Eyes
The Personal Morality of Visiting a Brothel

Additional: I particularly enjoyed Talen's constant moral struggle, whether to kill the beast he found, or to visit the brothel.


Lucette :
XP:
Observation +5
Stealth +3
Running +2
Seduction +2
Persuasion +1

Lores:
Even Big Cats Need to Play
Cobblestones Don't Give Much Purchase
The Fine Line Between Fighting and Playing
When Playtime Ends
Don't Play in a Dangerous City
Name-Dropping When in Trouble
The Consequences of a Kelvic in Trouble
The Thrill of Inspiring Fear
A Happy Man is a Merciful Man
The Joy of Transforming

Additional: I really enjoyed the way you wrote Lucette's cheetah form; it was very natural and clearly described the way a cheetah would move and act.


Notes :
You both have a very fun, descriptive style that's a pleasure to read. I look forward to seeing more from you two.


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