[Flashback: Alexander] Bandits don't just steal money...

Young 12 year old Alexander loses his father and is raised by knights. Continues until present-day.

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This shining population center is considered the jewel of The Sylira Region. Home of the vast majority of Mizahar's population, Syliras is nestled in a quiet, sprawling valley on the shores of the Suvan Sea. [Lore]

[Flashback: Alexander] Bandits don't just steal money...

Postby Alexander Vasiliev on November 24th, 2011, 8:17 pm



The day had started out like any other since his mother had died. He woke up to the sixth bell, and ate a stale slice of bread. After that, he prepared a pot of tea, woke his father, and they conversed over breakfast. They talked of common things such as the change of weather, the corruption of the Siliran Knights, the decline in magic, and other subjects that peasants found interest in. Once breakfast was done with, Alexander and his father began their training. Only weeks ago had Alexander been initiated, and the wounds had just recently healed, leaving gaping scars on his palms. His father went on with the lesson, explaining the risks involved before starting training. Alexander sighed, he had heard these all too many times. "Don't overgive, maintain control blah blah blah...". When was he going to learn how to shoot fire from his hands? Realizing his father was finally getting to explaining the most basic thing, concentrating on res and emanating it, he snapped back to attention, committing everything to memory. After long meditation and focus, Alexander managed to emit an ever so tiny thread of res in the form of gas, no wider than a strand of hair. Amazed, Alexander broke his focus, watching it. Instantly, without Alexander's focus, and no force to maintain it, it vanished. Alexander sighed, and his father, congratulating him, took him out for a stroll.

Alexander's father, deciding to treat his son for his newfound ability, regarded the possibility of beef for dinner. Such a meal would do wonders restoring his son's spirits, and it had been a long time since either of them had had a decent meal. Heading over to the butcher's shop to purchase a fresh, decent cut of beef, he was suddenly pushed over, several of his Mizas clattering to the ground in the process. While the bandit who pushed him attempted to pick the gold-rimmed and silver-rimmed mizas that fell on the floor, Alexander's father silently rose, the bandit oblivious to his presence. Alexander's father focused his Res into a ball above him, igniting the outer layer and throwing it at the bandit, igniting the inner core and burning the bandit alive. The citizens nearby, afraid of his power, alerted the guards, who arrested him on the spot.

Alexander watched in horror as the guards dragged his father away from him, sinking to his knees and sobbing uncontrollably. Rather than help him, passing people only regarded him for two seconds at most, and then continued, swerving left and right to avoid him. Returning home, he collapsed on his bed. He was asleep before his head touched the pillow. The next day, when Alexander awoke, he checked the mail. Inside was the court notice for him. His father had been declared guilty of wielding dangerous magic within the walls of Syliras, and was condemned to death that afternoon. Receiving this news, his shoulders instantly slumped, and his spirits sunk to an unprecedented level of sadness. Alexander was no longer hungry, any thought of breakfast long gone.

That afternoon, a crowd gathered near the execution location, preparing to watch the next events. Hidden amongst the crowd, in a robe that concealed his face, Alexander cried silently, watching his father being pulled towards the executioner. As the executioner raised his halberd, Alexander turned away, unable to watch. Seconds later, he heard a mushy swish, much like a watermelon being chopped in half, heard a choked scream from his father, and the crowd cheering. What had the world come to? At that moment, he saw his father's limp, headless body being dragged off. Gods know what they'd do with his body... Abandoned, weeping, and fatigued, Alexander retired to his room, and slowly cried himself to sleep.
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[Flashback: Alexander] Bandit's don't just steal money...

Postby Alexander Vasiliev on November 24th, 2011, 8:52 pm

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It had been a week since his father had died. Since then, Alexander had hid within the confines of his father's small apartment, tucked away within the Stronghold. Alexander spent all day scavenging for food, cleaning, sleeping, and mourning. During the afternoon, while he was napping, Alexander was awoken abruptly by someone knocking on the door. Wiping tears from his eyes, he opened the door, his eyes greeted by the sight of a Syliran Knight in full gear. "Greetings young...Alexander, am I mistaken?" the guard politely inquired. "Yes, I am Alexander Vasiliev, why does it matter?" Alexander responded. The knight proceeded to explain that as he was now orphaned, the knights would take care of him, teaching him what he needed to know to survive in the world. Alexander cared nothing of himself anymore, where is heart had been, he now had a gaping hole filled with pure hatred towards the knights. Even so, this knight seemed different than the others, and had nothing to do with the prosecution and killing of his father, so he accepted the offer.

For the first time in as long as he could remember, Alexander was thoroughly enjoying his meal. Although this was considered peasant food for the Knights, it was a feast to young Alexander. However, Alexander still had to work hard to earn his worth in his new life, mopping the kitchen, dusting the library, shining armor, and other mundane tasks in order to earn his meals and room. Every now and then whenever Alexander did a task exceptionally well, the knights would give him an hour of free time to do as he pleased. Most of the time, he would meditate, and on rare occasions practice Reimancy in safe, secluded rooms away from the Knights. He dared not speak of this talent passed to him by his father, afraid of what the Knights might do to him. In the Syliran Court, as he had learnt the hard way, there was no true justice. The Knights could try you for anything, and unless you were rich or important, you would be "proven" guilty.

Days turned into weeks, weeks turned into months, and months turned into years. Slowly, with the passing of time, Alexander self-taught himself how to make fireballs with Reimancy with the memory of observing his father, and tried to make lightning, as his father had explained it to him, but to no avail. The Knights on the other hand, taught Alexander History, Combat, Mathematics, and other "useful" skills he never used. The only subjects Alexander could stand were History and Combat, which seemed slightly useful to the average person, but when would he ever need to tell a man what the square root of 7 was? Even though he disliked mathematics, he still tried hard for the Knights so that they would accept him.

Eventually, Alexander began to mature. He no longer cared what the Knights thought of him, or what anyone thought of him for that matter. He cared only for himself, working to earn his meals. Whether other people were starving or not, that was their problem. He began to try and look at things with a positive outlook, if only to believe in something happy. His dreams were filled with memories of his father and his mother that he had only seen in a painting. Eventually, his 17th birthday came around, and he moved out of the Knights care, outwardly thanking them for their "hospitality" but loathing them on the inside. Their idea of hospitality was giving someone things they needed in exchange for cruel, tedious work. Oh well, that was past him. Time for a new life.
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[Flashback: Alexander] Bandits don't just steal money...

Postby Templar on January 6th, 2012, 2:45 am

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There are a couple of mistakes/errors in this thread that need to be remedied before I can grade it.

First, bandits would rarely, if ever, try and mug someone inside of Syliras’ walls. There are too many knights/guards for anyone to be foolish enough to try, as they would most likely be killed on the spot or hunted down as they tried to escape.

The guards would not arrest a man who had just roasted someone alive. He would be killed on the spot. Because no knight would risk his life trying to apprehend the father.

- To make it work, change it into someone trying to pickpocket either Alex or the father. The father notices and hotheadedly uses his magic to punish the man. - A guard notices the display of magic and immediately attacks the father, killing him.


As for the second post, the latter part of it belongs more in your CS than in an actual post. It is just vague descriptions of what happened between then and his present life. - But this part is not as significant as the problems in the first post.

Please PM me when you have the requested changes - Also feel free to PM me if you have any questions or you want to pitch an idea for any changes.

- Templar
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